"Get up, stupid Boree!"

I felt that I was slapped hard in the back, and the hazy sleepiness was instantly dispelled away by this merciless blow and disappeared without a trace. Pen | fun | pavilion www. ｂｉｑｕｇｅ。 ｉｎｆｏ

"Disturbing other people's sleep is a felony enough to be punished by heaven, sister Hongtan."

Bo Liyu turned her head back with resentment and stared at the indifferent sister blush. Because of reading novels and playing games all night last night, he basically slept in today's class, even during the lunch break, he just hastily ate the bento prepared by Wenwen and fell into a sweet dream, looking at the sky outside the window, probably this is the end of the last class.

【Aare......】

Seemingly casually glancing at Sanae's seat in the back right, Hakura was a little surprised to find that the green-haired girl did not stop after class, but left the classroom early.

[This is really a bit unexpected to me, is it to give up, or ......]

"Are you done?"

Xingna seemed to be unable to endure it anymore after a day of patience, and after seeing that the people in the classroom were almost gone, she immediately stood up and walked to Hakuruyu's seat and leaned her face over and asked excitedly.

Bo Liyou, who was pondering, felt as if she had been struck by a husky that saw her master, and when her thoughts returned to normal, she was probably a little uncomfortable with such close contact with others, and gently pushed back the fair face that was close at hand.

"Ah, let's let Huiyin talk about that first, after all, she is much more professional than me in this aspect of fiction."

Bo Liyu pointed to Huiyin, who pushed open the classroom door and walked in, signaling that she would speak later.

"Well, well, that's fine."

Hoshina thought for a moment, not knowing what conclusion she had reached. Take a few steps back and sit in your chair, very arrogantly clasping your arms. His face was filled with a sense of superiority that came from nowhere. A confident expression.

[I said...... Where did you come from, the little little president, first of all, the setting of milk volume is not right, okay! 】

"Well, Hoshina Kashiwazaki ...... Right. ”

Huiyin nodded, looking a little uncomfortable and greeting.

"Although it's just a common person, as a person who comments on other people's masterpieces, they are merciful enough to allow you to call people by their names."

[Seriously, if you didn't know that this guy is such a stupid character...... No, even if you know, but no matter what, this tone of speech is really inexplicably hot......]

Hakuriyu looked at Hoshina, who was full of sunshine and a silly smile, and sighed a little nerve-wracking.

"yes, okay, Hoshina-san."

Hui Yin didn't show much discomfort with Xingna's words, but simply replied.

"So, I'm going to comment on your work not as a teacher but purely as a reader of fiction, okay?"

"Ah, it's okay, just praise people as much as you want."

Kashiwazaki Hoshina responded with an imposing voice, looking like she was about to be crowned king.

"Honestly, it's boring...... No, it's not boring enough to be described, and for me, who loves the original book, it's not an exaggeration to say that it's a painful punishment. ”

"Poof!!"

Huiyin activated the skill: tell the truth

The effect was outstanding, and Kashiwazaki Hoshina received a fatal blow

"Well...... Hawkers,Sometimes it's like this.,As the original chef, I can't accept the changes of the two settings of the same people......"

Kashiwazaki Hoshina struggled to get up from the ground, and finally reluctantly sat back in the chair, and said in a dying struggle.

"No,It's okay with that.,Even if it's original, it's unusually boring.,The setting of the Ming type moon is extremely interesting.。

"Hmm...... Well, okay. Make...... For reference, please advise on what is boring. ”

"Why was the protagonist inexplicably struck by lightning and then crossed, and then met a lewd uncle who didn't know where he came from...... That's what it's called, right? He's still a god? And somehow gave the protagonist an ability to let him go to the world of fate? Can you tell me that there is even the slightest connection in these things? ”

"Poof! Not...... No. Recently, fanfiction has become more popular, and this is the ......"

"Then I'll take it like this, some light novels will also use this kind of jumping god to expand."

Huiyin nodded, as if agreeing with Xingnai's explanation, but before Xingna could recover a little because of this sentence, Huiyin immediately asked the next question.

"However, this god is just a golden finger that you made casually to make it easier for you to write an article, will he appear again except for this chapter?"

"Hmmm!!"

"Using the power that the gods just gave me to devour Gilgame, who was devoured by the evil of this world, what should I say that I'm glad I'm not from the Golden Shining Party...... But it doesn't matter.,If you insist on it, it can also be pulled into the will of Gilgamesh confronting the evil of this world, so that the protagonist, an ordinary person, can keep his consciousness awake.,Anyway, it's just a clone of a heroic spirit.。 ”

Huiyin, who was seriously thinking about the setting, muttered to herself, and glanced at Xingna, who was covered in cold sweat, "Well, but it doesn't look like you think so much." ”

"No, no! Ahaha, that's what people planned from the beginning, but they didn't explain it in the book, well, hmm, you're not bad, you can actually see people's intentions! ”

[Seriously, if I were this guy, I would be an impulse to write the word 'miserable' on the ground in a blood book......]

Bo Liyu shrank back, and glanced at Mei Hong, both of whom saw the meaning of silence in each other's eyes.

This behavior is called self-satisfaction. Is something that no one can understand but you trying to read? By the way, when it comes to making people read, the plot that follows is nothing new and interesting at all. It's okay that Kiritsugu's personality doesn't match the original book at all, and why does the heroine snap with the protagonist here? It's too abrupt to have no inevitability! ”

"Ahem, ahem!!"

Xingna coughed in embarrassment, and her fair face quickly turned red.

"What's that...... This kind of plot will make the novel more popular...... ...... and so on."

"Are you kidding?"

Huiyin pushed her glasses and shot at Hoshina with a serious gaze.

ps:The seven deadly sins are pretty good.,The protagonist of the shape of the Zhengtai is just my dish.,It's also interesting to watch the acting skills of the protagonist and the villain.,I thought there was nothing to see except for the popular scheduled ones like fate/ubw.。