The message of the Da Pu Huan brothers, the old paste pasted over, but the seventeenth book review could not be segmented, so I had to divide the paragraphs according to my own understanding, and by the way, I revised a few words that were mistaken :).

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This book finally broke through 800,000 words.,It's one of the few works I can chase the book to read.,Maybe it's true that there was a reason to interact with the author when I left a message before.,We also feel embarrassed to leave it.,I've been insisting on reading it for more than half a year.,So I found out,The author often sends books in the middle of the night or even in the early morning.,It can be seen that the authors of online articles at least the author of this book in troubled times, Brother Lao (let's call it so for the time being) is a very hard-working person.。

This is a book with very prominent advantages and disadvantages, and it is even obvious to the extreme - the advantages, this book has almost no water plot, and the author's brain hole is so big, it is rare, as a completely empty theme, it can have the elements of Xianxia fantasy (blood feather Liluan, six-winged golden cicada, green ox sky-breaking map, Xuantian loess record, fire source body, ghost master proverbs... ), can have the shadow of history (the setting of the Tang and Song Dynasty official system, the three parts of Shatuo, Zhu Xie Chixin, the Turkic Khanate... There can be a variety of plots that are not seen at all in other routine texts, or rarely seen (autism, physical arithmetic, Go knowledge, jade appreciation, psychological hallucinations...). It can also have elements common in this kind of books (martial arts, Qinglou fighting songs, poems and songs, business, Miao Jiang Gu arts...). ）。

In short, to be able to combine these elements, there is an ordinary way of writing, and there are many of their own innovations, the author's thinking is really good, I feel that the reason for the decline of history through the overhead is that there are too many routines, and each book has nothing else to pass on to readers except for doing business and making a fortune, exercising the army, and in these aspects, the author of this book writes very well, very well!

Another point of contrast,Shortcomings,It's also very prominent,Maybe the author Jun Lao Brother is not an old gun who writes online articles.,Maybe it's the first time to write it.,Although the plot has no water.,But the embellishment、Foreshadowing、Fold these are obviously suspected of procrastination.,Directly it's procrastination.,Extremely procrastinating.,Do you know?,So even if it's a taboo in online writing-the main line is unknown!

Since it is the rise of troubled times, it should be in the courts and battlefields of various countries that the main tone is the key, and now you have written 800,000 words (as if I remember correctly, you set it in the description before that it is 40 to 600,000 words to complete the first volume?). The first volume has not yet been completed, so doesn't that mean that the whole book will be written at least 3 million words, and the top-heavy is obvious......

In addition, the next four or five hundred thousand words are trying to write multi-scene and multi-perspective switching, which is very good, but it seems too blunt and abrupt, so that the reader seems to be easily confused, and the chapters are too far apart, easy to forget. Of course, in the last 100,000 words, the old paste brother has begun to pay attention to this problem, so it looks much better.

Finally, in fact, the Go player talks about this chapter, which is very well written, but it is really not attractive, but this kind of plot that transmits positive energy and promotes traditional culture can be had, at least I support it!

Come on, Brother Mush, it seems to be said that I will open a new book and save it, and when the time comes, I will read the masterpiece and always support it!!