"The power of qi, three stages!"

Why does this look so familiar at the beginning?!

Wang Hao read it at once, and after he read two pages, the whole person was embarrassed, and he said completely subconsciously: "That's not how the online article is written, right?" What is this all about? ”

As soon as these words came out, Wang Hao hurried to the whole conference room to be quiet, and then there was a lot of discussion-

"Who is this man? When did he come in? ”

"yes, I haven't seen him before, it doesn't seem like it's from our crew, right?"

"He's questioning Screenwriter Meng, who is this person, so loud?"

"Huh? He seems to be the host who is not honest! I've watched his show, and it's been pretty awesome lately, why did you come here? ”

At this time, Lan Zihuang, who was sitting in front, slapped the table fiercely and said loudly: "Shut up for me!" ”

Lan Zihuang's voice made the entire conference room quiet in an instant, and the queen's style was simply explosive!

"This is ......" Lan Zihuang looked at Wang Hao and frowned: "Are you from our crew?" How come I haven't seen you before? ”

"This ...... What's the plot here?! Wang Hao didn't pay attention to Lan Zihuang at all, but kept reading the script in his hand, and the more he looked at it, the more surprised he became: ", what a popular online article, it was actually changed to look like this bird?!" ”

What my mother's brother hates the most is these screenwriters!

In his previous life, he ruined countless classics, but when he came to this world, this group of editors was still a bird!

This Nima can't bear it!

At this time, Lan Zihuang frowned and asked, "Who are you?" Do you really understand online texts? ”

Meng Zenan also turned his head, he was in a bad mood after being reprimanded, and said angrily: "You are Wang Hao, right?" If you don't understand, don't talk nonsense, don't think that what will happen if you change the domestic agent, Li Fei still has to call me a senior brother, there is no place for you to speak here! ”

, this is the rhythm of doing it! The surrounding crew members were immediately ready to watch a good show!

For a while, everyone's eyes were focused on Wang Hao!

Hou Yu sat behind Wang Hao, his eyes almost popping out--these two people just met?

The others were surprised, and Wang Hao was even more angry - Eh, I'll go, rely on the old man to sell the old, right?

I'm not angry when you change the plot randomly, but you're the first to make trouble?

"You can't say that," Wang Hao sneered: "We shouldn't be a place to rank seniors, right?" Your script is written like this, and no one is allowed to say it? ”

He said as he ripped off the first piece of paper of the script, and said hesitantly: "Isn't that how to pull hatred?" You plagiarized someone else's first sentence at the beginning, and if you want to say that you copy it, you will copy it, and you can copy it well! At the beginning of the fight, others ridiculed the protagonist, this is pulling hatred, the focus is to point out that the protagonist was once a genius, leaving the audience with hope that the protagonist can rise! What are you writing about? The protagonist is a waste material, and the waste material is a waste material, and the key is still a stupid material! A spineless, powerful, and brainless three-nil person, can such a person be the protagonist? ”

As soon as he heard Wang Hao talk about Dou Po, Lan Zihuang's eyes suddenly lit up: "Keep talking, keep talking!" ”

During this time, she liked Dou Po very much, but why did she like it but couldn't say why, now when she heard Wang Hao's analysis, she immediately thought it was true, and she couldn't agree more!

Others are also talking about it.

"Don't say it, it sounds like it makes sense!"

"Yes, yes, I just think this plot is wrong, but I can't think of why it's wrong, now I understand!"

"What's wrong with the scrap?" Meng Zenan quibbled: "This is called a routine!" The scrap wood is to make people more curious about how he rises, what's wrong with me? ”

"That's why I said you didn't copy the right place!" Wang Hao crumpled the piece of paper on the script and threw it to the ground, then glanced at the script, and ripped off another one: "Look at your paragraph here - after the protagonist was ridiculed, his brain was hot and rushed to find someone to theorize, and then he was beaten." Pen, fun, pavilion www. biquge。 info What do you want the protagonist to take the initiative to find someone to do, and if you do it, you will be beaten up, this is not called a sense of expectation, this is called brain-dead, okay? Originally, people laughed at him, but he was just depressed. This initiative will not only be depressed, but also physically destroyed! If you don't have any strength, you can still humiliate yourself, and the audience can continue to watch it when they see this? ”

"Yes, yes, it's so badly written!" Lan Zihuang said hurriedly: "Then what do you say should be done here?" ”

"Today I'm going to tell you what rhythm is!" Wang Hao crumpled the second piece of paper and said, "What's the rhythm?" is that there are highs and lows, and the plot progresses forward. There is a saying that the text seems to look at the mountains and does not like the flat, and the plain text is boring to watch, right? Therefore, the rhythm of this opening chapter needs to humiliate the protagonist first, and then point out the opportunity for his rise, which is not enough, but also to deepen the protagonist's sense of expectation - so Xiao Xun'er in Dou Po appeared! Then the rise of the protagonist in the back is logical, all the way against the sky! But what about you? What are you arranged? ”

Wang Hao ripped off the third one: "Yes, the character is set, but what is this identity you set?" A subordinate daughter.,With the protagonist's childhood sweetheart - oh yes,I forgot to say.,Your protagonist here is also a subordinate son.,So after the protagonist was flattened.,People see him as a bully.,So his childhood sweetheart's girlfriend was *** and the protagonist was helpless.,Aren't you sick? ”

When he said this, the whole conference room burst into laughter.

"Hahahaha, this arrangement is indeed too ...... Ha ha! ”

"There's no one in this plot, I want to laugh when I listen to it!"

"Yes, it looks like this, this protagonist definitely has a brain, and if he doesn't have the strength, he goes to fight and then is flattened all the way, it's miserable!"

"Flutter", Lan Zihuang couldn't help laughing, and said: "I'll just say how I thought this paragraph was wrong before, but I can't say the specific reason, I only understand when you say this, go on!" ”

Meng Zenan's face turned pale, and he snorted: "I call this foreshadowing, children have never seen the world, and if a film is popular, they don't know how thick the sky is!" ”

"And then there's the back," Wang Hao ignored him, flipped through two pages of the script, and ripped off another one: "The three-year covenant in the opening chapter is to establish a goal." What are you doing here? The protagonist cultivates during the day, cultivates at night, goes out to fight beasts during the day, and goes home for dinner at night, but it can be regarded as three years of cultivation day and night and then goes to find someone to trouble, which is also the fact that you, the protagonist, also failed to avenge the defeat of the enemy, and was beaten by the enemy, and it was another time to take the initiative to ask for a slap in the face! ”

Everyone was dumbfounded! This plot that originally felt weird was analyzed by Wang Hao, and it was really like that!

Meng Zenan snorted angrily and said, "Then how do you say to change it?" ”

"How else can you change this?" Wang Hao ripped off another one: "If you want to change the overall architecture problem, you have to change it from scratch!" I won't talk about you here, let's just look at the back, people fight the protagonist and have the old man in the ring, helping the protagonist to pretend to slap his face and steal the benefits of leapfrogging and rapid cultivation! Along the way, the protagonist is simply all kinds of crazy Cooljack hanging! As a result, what role is your master here? An old guy who has cultivated for a year, the key is that he is still disabled! Usually eating is a problem, and the protagonist has to take care of him! It's okay to take care of him.,Really wait for the enemy to come to the door.,After he finished pretending to be forced, he angered the enemy and lay the corpse on the side, and the protagonist was beaten again! What a golden finger told you to write as scrap! ”

After listening to Wang Hao's evaluation, everyone present burst into laughter again-

"Hahaha! It's so interesting, it's the other way around! ”

"Yes, the protagonist of the family has fallen all the way, and he is the protagonist of all kinds of hardships, no wonder Miss Lan doesn't agree to shoot it!"

"I ......" Meng Zenan rolled his eyes and said, "I'm deliberately making a joke!" Do you understand what laughter is?! ”

"Isn't that a joke for you?" Wang Hao crumpled the paper in his hand and threw it away, and continued to comment: "Then you, the protagonist, were beaten and started to cultivate again, and the old man continued to lie down on the corpse - by the way, did you arrange for the old man to arrange a good one?" ”

"I can't help it!" Meng Zenan roared: "Dou Po is a fantasy theme, what we want to shoot is martial arts, can the martial arts theme have the old man in the ring?!" ”

"That's a good question!" Wang Hao clicked and ripped off another one: "The theme of martial arts is actually to put it bluntly, it is also a change of soup and not of medicine!" You can't get the old man in the ring, can't you get a mysterious old man to come over every night to teach the protagonist martial arts?! ”

Wang Hao finally ripped the script to smash it and said: "Your plot is completely copied and Dou Po has not yet been copied!" The protagonist of Dou Po is a genius in his own right, and he actually has the capital to rise again! This is not only that, he went from genius to scrap because of the old man in the ring, and when the old man in the ring was finally resurrected, he began to help the protagonist rise all the way, which is a normal routine! But what about you, you're completely the opposite, where is it cool to break down, where is it highly poisonous! If this film is filmed according to your routine, it will definitely hit the street! You have to thank Miss Lan for not filming during this time, otherwise the loss now would not be 1.8 million! ”

Sure enough, Lan Zihuang, who was still a queen before, was almost stupid at this time, like a little kitten, and the whole person was drunk!

"My script!" Seeing that his script was torn to pieces, Meng Zenan stood up in an uproar, and the whole person was trembling, pointing at Wang Hao and shouting: "You just tore up my script like this?!" You've got to pay! You have to pay! ”

"I'm going to pay a fart!" Wang Hao was furious, stood up in a hurry, and said angrily: "It's okay if you copy all the plots, but you haven't understood the copying yet!" Do you know who the book Breaking the Sky is?! (To be continued.) )