Without giving Kazuya a chance to explain further, Ying Riri's choice was to turn around and leave firmly, and in the case of managing her wits, she could also analyze the many doubts of this unexpected meeting, and she should not have too many doubts about Kazuya's situation with Kato, but, seeing Kazuya for the first time after a month of cold war, he was with his good friend This betrayal, deceived, and deceived mood made Ying Ri Li completely unable to make a rational choice.

And Kazuya on the other side could only watch Ying Li Li leave at an unfast speed, and he also tried to catch up immediately to explain something, but he was sad to find that the words he explained were so weak, and in the end, he just stood there blankly, watching Ying Lili's back gradually disappear.

"Aragaki-san, I'm sorry." Kato's soft voice reached Kazuya's ears, "I was too careless, I should have expected this situation, I'm sorry." ”

"There's nothing to be sorry for, if you're sorry, or maybe we deliberately avoided Ying Lili from her from finding out, it doesn't look like we've really done something bad, isn't it?" Kazuya shook his head and denied Kato's words.

"Yes." Kato nodded meekly, like a well-behaved cat.

"Ying Lili, that guy, the two of us couldn't be clearer, don't look at how cruel her words are, in fact, her heart is very soft, as long as the problem is solved at that time and everything is explained to her clearly, then there will be no problem." Kazuya swallowed his saliva and explained to Kato, of course, this sentence is both an explanation to Kato and a self-consolation of Kazuya.

I don't know why.,When using this sentence to explain Ying Lili's behavior,And also inexplicably remembered Shiyu.,In the impression,Shiyu seemed to have said something similar in the conversation with him just now.,But,It seems like a long time ago.,But,Kazuya, who had forced himself to put Shiyu down, still forcibly stopped his cranky thoughts.,Quietly waiting for Kato's reaction.。

"Yes." However, Kato still nodded gently, unable to say anything else.

"Well, that, Kato, you can give me a little other reaction," Kazuya said with a wry smile, "The way you look makes me worry too." ”

"Then what does Aragaki-san's reaction want me to have?" Kato asked lightly.

Looking at Kato's expression, Kazuya was stunned, and Kato, who put away his emotions, had an attitude on his face that bordered on indifference, which made him a little confused about what the other party was thinking.

――I don't know what she's thinking for a long time.

In the end, Kazuya shook his head helplessly and said, "Okay, I understand, all in all, let's go back first today!" Anyway, hard work for you today. ”

"Well, so be it! Aragaki-san. For the third time in a row, Kato repeated in a flat tone that Kazuya couldn't understand at all—

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Forcibly suppressing his emotions, Kazuya after returning home, focused all his attention on the possible evaluation of his novel, and the first thing he paid attention to was the comments of Lunya, who had a lot to do with himself and Shiyu.

And Lunye's light novel review didn't make him wait too long.

"Although this is the debut work of Aragaki and Sensei,But I don't want to treat Aragaki and Sensei as a pure newcomer.,After all,Whether it's Marudo Teacher or Shibuchi Gen Sensei,Their works have borrowed from Aragaki and Sensei's previous works.,This has been confirmed by the author through some special private channels.,At the same time,According to my understanding,Aragaki and Teacher also wrote part of the script for a popular fangalgame.,So,His writing skills don't need to be questioned.。 So, for Aragaki and Sensei, the biggest problem he faced was actually a transformation problem.

Whether it's the rumored "Madoka Magical Girl" or "Blank Album 2", a commonality between the two is that there is a depressive atmosphere shrouded in the whole text, although the two depressive styles are not the same, but the content of both is biased towards seriousness, which gives the author the impression of Aragaki and the teacher is the author of the kind of serious work, and it is not surprising that such an author turns to the creation of love light comedy in order to pursue the road of marketization, but whether the transformation can succeed is a big question.

Of course, Aragaki and the teacher gave me a rather beautiful answer. As we all know,In daily light novels,The portrayal of female characters is a key factor in the success of the novel,And Aragaki Mr. inherited his excellent performance in "Madoka Magical Girl" and "Blank Album 2" in this point,Although the lack of specific inner monologue makes people feel that the character image is not three-dimensional enough,But for a light novel with only one volume,It can create a poisonous tongue of social phobia for three days and a moonlit night sky,Unexpected **** It is not easy for the two opposing female characters of the tsundere queen Kashiwazaki to advance the plot. At the same time, as the protagonist of the Hasegawa Kitaka, the 'unpopular' bad and a little ****** attribute is also the highlight of this work.

Of course, there are some problems with this novel, although the almost fixed community template of the daily school class and the plot of finding club members are traditional and secure, but my expectations for Aragaki Kazu's work actually do not stop there, and in addition, the routine of some fixed comedy plots also shows the problems that Aragaki Kazu-sensei must face as a transition writer. But, on the whole, these questions are harmless, and I highly recommend this novel. ”

"Lun Ye, this guy, can be regarded as merciful to my subordinates!" Looking at Lunya's evaluation of his novel, Kazuya smiled, and it can be seen that Lunya, as a senior otaku, is not very satisfied with the specific daily plot in "Friends and Youth", but he only mentioned it in the evaluation, which is enough to show his support for Kazuya while remaining as neutral as possible.

"So, the evaluation of Senior Sister Shiyu's novel is about to come out, right?" Talking to himself, Kazuya looked at Lunya's next comment:

"No matter what words I use, I can't reflect my feelings for Kasumiko-sensei's new work."

Seeing this title, Kazuya's heart was half colder, and to be able to make Lun also say such an evaluation, he felt that his chances of winning had become very small.

The second volume of Ms. Kasumiko's "The Streets of That City" inherits Ms. Kasumiko's excellent and emotionally rich writing characteristics as always. Some surprises or not very unexpected is that the heroine who appeared in the second volume is the protagonist's sister Haruka, in the pen of Mr. Xia Shizi, Haruka's attachment to his brother and the seemingly helpless abandonment in the end make people's entire feelings into sympathy for his sister, of course, fortunately, Mr. Xia Shizi left us a shot at the end that Haruka did not give up, so that we also have a certain prospect for the future plot.

At the same time,The outbreak of antagonistic emotions between the two heroines who have appeared is also unexpectedly fast,At the end of the last volume, we feel that the two people who have begun to withdraw their troops,Re-competition under the intervention of my sister,It also makes people have to think of the tragic situation of the competition between the two parties in "Love Metronome",I believe,As the plot progresses,Teacher Xia Shizi will bring us a more exciting story。 Therefore, if I were to refer to "Love Metronome" to rate this work of Teacher Xia Shizi, I would give 95 points, and Teacher Xia Shizi gave full play to the delicate characteristics of her emotional description here.

――However, if I were to give Ms. Kasumi Shiko a passing grade for the second volume of "The Streets of That City" as the first volume, I would not give her a passing grade. ”

Lunye's last spicy comment made Kazuya, who was almost desperate, stunned.

"All the advantages I said before are the advantages of Ms. Xia Shizi, but this is only the advantages of Ms. Xia Shizi, the advantages of the novel she showed in "Love Metronome", the positioning of "The Street of That City" is a light comedy, and her first volume also implements this line, although some of the bridges are vulgar, but we at least know that Teacher Xia Shizi is making this innovative attempt. However, in the second volume, we don't feel the breath of light comedy at all, whether it is the confrontation between the heroines or the addition of my sister, all I read is a faint atmosphere of depression that is shrouded in the full text of Kasumiko-sensei, and an atmosphere of increasingly tense antagonism. I don't know if it was because Kasumi Shiko herself didn't grasp the core issue when she wrote the second volume, or if the editor didn't review it, but I still think it's an excellent novel, but it's not an excellent love light comedy, which also makes me reluctant to give the second volume of "The Streets of That City" a passing score - as a fan of Kasumi Shiko, I'm sorry that she made a serious mistake in this novel, that is, she didn't clarify the positioning of the novel! ”

Kazuya looked at Lun Ye's evaluation in a daze, he hadn't seen Shi Yu's new work, so he couldn't make an accurate assessment, but he believed that Lun would not lie on this issue, if this was really the case, it would be tantamount to saying that Shi Yu had inadvertently left a huge loophole for himself.

Although I can't believe how Shiyu, who swore to fight against him at the time, and who is still confident in his victory during the day today, made such a big mistake, and Kazuya can't imagine that the Machida editor, who is known for his shrewdness and ability, made such a big audit problem at this time, but there is no doubt that this battle that he seems to be losing has greatly narrowed the gap between himself and Shiba because of various coincidences.

And the huge controversy over the second volume of "The Streets of That City" has also begun to heat up on the forum.

"This is what Teacher Xia Shizi should really write, to hell with the brain-dead light comedy style of the first volume! This is the teacher we like Kasumiko. ”

"But you can't deny that this is a huge mistake in the creation of Teacher Xia Shizi, even she herself said in a previous interview that she wants to take an innovative route, isn't this time her own slap in the face?"

"Yes, we like Kasumiko-sensei's work, and we can understand the problems she committed during the transition period, but that doesn't mean that I can accept a novel with a completely different style in the first and second volumes."

"Speaking of love light comedy, another "My Friends Few" published at the same time can be tried by everyone, there are many highlights, and the shortcomings are insignificant."

"Is there a troll upstairs?"

"I'm just putting the recommendation here anyway, just in passing."

"It is said that the author and Teacher Xia Shizi know each other, but it's a pity that the two of them are not in the same library, which is a little strange."

"Teacher Kasumi Shiko just jumped to mystery, and Fantastic launched that Aragaki and teacher, the intention is a little strange!"

And didn't continue to read the various comments in the forum, but, overall, he already had an impression, first of all, for the sudden change in the style of Shiyu's novels, the forum once again showed a polarizing trend, and the controversy among fans was very large, which was bound to cause other people to buy suspicions, and second, because Shiyu's novels and his own novels were unexpectedly different in style, which caused many readers who were originally inclined to watch love light comedy works to begin to shift their attention to their own works.

It is equivalent to saying that in this wave of public opinion propaganda, although the evaluation of "Friends and Youth" itself is only good, not particularly amazing, but because of Shiyu's own mistakes, the possibility of his novel occupying the market atmosphere has become greater.

"This time, I really have a chance." Secretly clenched his fists, and Kazuya lifted his spirit.

"However, Senior Sister Shiyu, what is going on? Having made such a serious mistake, not to mention the specific state of creation, is it true that so many editors in the huge library of the Mystery library have not been discovered? Or, how should the current Shiyu Senpai deal with such a situation with Machida editors? ”

However, then, Kazuya still shook his head and forcibly brushed away his worries about Shiyu: "What do you think!" Take advantage of this opportunity, go to the library, strengthen the opportunity to publicize, and defeat Senior Sister Shiyu, this is the most important thing, right? ”

After all, I'm already in a desperate situation now! So, Senior Sister Shiyu, although I don't have too many expectations, I still hope that you can understand my thoughts at this time, right?

Also, Yingli Pear, I'm really sorry, I'm really sorry, but I'll be back soon, and everything will be fine, I'm sure -

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It's always hard to get started in Poland, so if I repeat the same chapter at the same time, be sure to let me know, and I won't be able to delete it after two days