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Realizing that Ayase probably didn't want to leave anytime soon, he quieted down and listened to his conversation with Shiyu, and Kazuya also realized that his immediate priority now was not to find a chance to let his sister out, but how to tell Shiba his suggestions for the project without revealing the true content of the game's production. So, carefully organizing the language in his head, Kazuya took a deep breath and spoke:

"Well, about your script, senior sister, my opinion is this." Kazuya is careful with his choice of words and sentences, trying to make himself act like an editor who is giving advice to a playwright, rather than a production executive who is proposing a veto plan for a game project.

"Well, I'm listening!" Shi Yu's tone seemed to be very calm, but her constantly stirring hands and eyes scurrying around undoubtedly revealed her nervousness.

However, carefully organizing the language to avoid touching the minefield and didn't notice this, he slowly said word by word: "From the perspective of the plot setting and the stimulation of contradictions, this script is perfect, I have not denied this conclusion from the beginning, except for some previous lives, fighting the plot of these light novels to the god level, I feel that your control of this work has reached the height of a considerable number of professional writers, of course, this is just my personal evaluation, but, I really think this work is a good work. ”

Shi Yu's eyebrows drooped, revealing a subtle expression, and replied, "Kazuya-kun, it's a good use of this technique of giving people a carrot first and then hitting others!" ”

"Well, if you are Chinese, I can tell you that there is a word in China called first raising and then suppressing." Kazuya picked up a word, trying to change the atmosphere.

But of course, Shiyu was not moved by Kazuya's slightly bad response, continued to look into Kazuya's eyes, and said: "So, Kazuya-kun means that although this script is very good, it still can't be passed, just like "Love Accelerator", Kazuya-kun affirmed the literary nature of my ending, but in the end, there is still no way to change his partisan concept! ”

"That," Facing Shi Yu's somewhat complaining expression, Kazuya's next words suddenly couldn't be spoken, but, after hesitating for a long time, he still tried his best to express what he wanted to say: "Yes, I think Senior Sister's script is well written, but it still can't pass!" ”

"Why? Why do you always have to dismiss my ideas, why do you always make a rational evaluation of my work with that seemingly objective attitude, and then send me to hell with a very subjective feeling? Also, why do you always avoid yourself when I need your affirmation the most, and then give me a negative answer after a while, as long as you tell me no at the time, I will change it! Obviously, I value your opinion so much! Shi Yu, who forcibly restrained her reason for a long time, finally broke out, and her series of words that seemed to be related to the script and vaguely revealed more content, made Kazuya bow her head a little guiltily, especially when mentioning her escape, Kazuya was even more ashamed to blush. At the same time, the somewhat strange noise coming from the wardrobe also made Kazuya realize that he was not the only one who heard Shi Yu's excited words.

However, Kazuya understands that at this time, he can only continue, and cannot stop: "Yes, this script is good, but from the audience's point of view, its audience is too narrow!" ”

"Isn't the setting of my sister in my previous life cute? Isn't the setting of the sick sister cute? Isn't the great love that in the end, when brother and sister overcome difficulties together and finally cross the barriers of time and time together, can't you be moved? Shi Yu's emotions became more and more excited.

"Yes, I'm very moved, I also said, I'm very moved, this plot is really amazing, if it is made into an animation, if it is made into a movie, I will definitely watch it, I think I will watch it again and again!" Kazuya's voice also became excited, "But, what about the others? ”

"Others?" Shi Yu showed a puzzled expression.

"That's right, the sister of the current world, the ** of the previous life, Xintian Weiyang, that is, Yi Zhenfan? What is the ending of Weiyang? Sister, do you remember? ”

"That's right, isn't Weiyang's ending bad? Wouldn't it be nice to give his life for his brother and at the same time redeem his mistakes in his previous life? ”

"Yes, in your opinion, you're very satisfied, right, but, in the eyes of others, in the eyes of Meng Weiyang's people, this situation, why should she bear this fate destined to atone! Why, after atonement, Weiyang can't live happily with the person he likes? Why, the sins of the previous life must be borne by the present life, which is too heavy for Weiyang, right? ”

"But, then Seiji won't be able to be with Ruri, right?" Looking at He's somewhat excited words, Shi Yu's tone suddenly darkened.

"Also, there's the problem of this glass!" At the mention of this, the more thoughts and the more excited became, "The heroine of this work, is it Bingliuli or Ye Xunli!" ”

"This, there's no need to argue, the two are originally the same person, the glass is the patrol glass, the patrol glass is the glass!" Shi Yu's eyes were a little evasive, presumably, she herself realized that her preference for Liuli in her script and the obliteration of Xunli's presence.

"No, it's definitely not like this, who is the heroine, it's Ye Xunli, it's that inconspicuous girl, it's the girl who usually seems to have a weak sense of existence, but she can make others live comfortably all the time and make others live happily, isn't it? Also, she's the one who can solve problems the most, and although she looks inconspicuous, she's also reliable, isn't she? While thinking about his impression of Megumi Kato, Kazuya's thinking is becoming more and more fluent, at this time, he has forgotten his current psychological state and his bad Shiyu, and Ayase hiding in the closet, at this moment, he just wants to pour out all the thoughts in his heart.

Therefore, when the satisfied Kazuya raised his head and looked at Shi Yu carefully, he had already found that the other party's body was constantly trembling: "I understand, Kazuya-kun, I understand!" You're not satisfied with the script because you don't like Liuli! Compared to Liuli, you prefer your sister Weiyang! Then, between Ruri and Patrol Glass, you prefer Patrol Glass, are you going to kill Ruri, right? That's it! ”

"It's not like that!" Kazuya panicked and tried to justify.

"It's always been like this! Kazuya-kun, you've always been like this! However, Shi Yu, who has always been sensible, is now particularly irritable, "You always have different views with me, you always have to fight with me, you always, you want to deny the person I have poured the most effort into, do you want me to deny myself?" ”

"Senior sister, I know that you will learn from yourself when writing, and you will be easily excited, but, that, you still have to separate the virtual from the real!" Kazuya tried to wave his hand, and then, at this time, he regained his reaction, his hand was being handcuffed, and the person who did all this was hiding in the closet.

"Well, why doesn't the wardrobe move?" Kazuya was suddenly horrified to find that the wardrobe that had been shaking since just now was particularly quiet at this time.

Then, he saw a fact that drove him crazy: his sister, Ayase Aragaki, was thoughtfully flipping through the paper that Shiyu had brought with her a copy of the paper she had planned.

At this time, following Kazuya's gaze, Shiyu also turned around and found Ayase, but to Kazuya's surprise, Shiyu was not surprised by Ayase's appearance, her natural look, but felt that Ayase should have been here, and then finally appeared a little relieved.

Looking at Ayase, who was reading her manuscript, Shiyu asked a little dejectedly, "What's the matter, Ayase, came over to arrest me and your brother's adultery?" Don't worry, it's impossible to do anything to me like your brother, and you can go back with your brother obediently! ”

Shiyu's somewhat interested appearance didn't make Ayase feel very concerned, I saw her flipping through the planning script more and more seriously, and finally, Ayase raised her head unsatisfied: "Excuse me, Sister Kasumigaoka, is this script your work?" ”

"What's wrong? Don't believe me? ”

"Eun, no," Ayase's eyes showed a little fanatical color, and responded, "That's not the case, Senpai, I think this script of yours is so well written!" ”

"Huh?" Shiyu and Kazuya were stunned at the same time, such a homely slow script, it was actually approved by Ayase, of course, the two then realized that purely from the perspective of a story, Shiyu's story is also very attractive, if there is no preconceived plan to think that this is a fangame, it is easy for others to understand it as a short story or a drama script.

"Well, that's the case, although I don't really understand why this previous life is, and why their world will be destroyed if they don't rely on Seiji," Ayase frowned, listing a few more typical settings for the direction of the house, but then she showed a smile, "But, despite this, I still think this story is great, is the senior sister going to take this script to the drama club for rehearsals?" I envy my brother's school's drama club for being able to perform such a story. ”

"This, haha, haha, something like this." Seeing that Shi Yu didn't mean to speak, Kazuya had no choice but to deal with it with haha.

"So, what my brother and Kasumigaoka seniors were arguing about just now was a problem with this script?" Kazuya found that the current topic had been completely controlled by Ayase, although Kazuya felt that if Shiyu was willing, she could change the situation, but now Shiyu, there is some meaning of wandering in the world.

"Ah, yes."

"I didn't hear it very clearly just now, what my brother means is that you prefer the role of Miyo Nitta, a younger sister, so you want to give her a better ending, right?"

"That's not what it meant!" Kazuya suddenly finds himself unable to provide a better explanation for Ayase.

"Well, it seems that there is another point, that is, my brother thinks that even if it is the first heroine, you prefer Ye Xunli's current personality rather than Bingliuli's past personality, as if the senior sister wrote 'surface personality' and 'inner personality'?" Ayase asked as she flipped through the manuscript.

"That's,That's not the case.,That is.,Too much emphasis on glass.,Other female characters don't have any outstanding performances.,That's what I mean.。

"Brother, you're wrong," Ayase became serious, "In this regard, I agree with the senior sister's point of view, the core of this script, there is no doubt that it should be Ruri!" ”

"......" Kazuya looked at Ayase and didn't speak, and secretly complained in his heart: I also know that the core of the plot is Liuli, but this is not a simple script, this is a galgame script, if there is only such a prominent female character, the other characters will become completely accessory, so that players who have other characters will feel unsatisfied, which will affect the user experience very much!

"It's useless, Ayase, your brother, you don't like Ruri." At this time, Shi Yu's dull voice came.

"Don't you like glass?" In an instant, and also finally understood Shiyu's resentment, Liuli, poured the most effort into Shiyu, and it is also a part of Shiyu's own personality, so Heya's negation of Liuli, in Shiyu's view, is a denial of himself.

"That's not the case!" Kazuya shouted loudly, "That's not the case! I never said I don't like glass from the beginning, I've always, I've always been super cute glass! ”

"Huh?" Shiyu and Ayase looked at Kazuya suspiciously.

"Look, the kind of way of working hard for my brother, even at this time period, the kind of almost crazy means of paying everything for my brother is really touching, the ending of the two of them together, of course it's very good!"

Shiyu and Ayase lowered their heads a little embarrassed at the same time, Shiyu doesn't need to say that Ruri itself is a portrayal of herself, and Ayase is because of the consistency with Ruri in the attributes of "sister", and there is a certain sense of resonance.

"So, since my brother likes Liuli very much, why do you want to deny this script?" Ayase, who reacted, asked a little confused.

"This ......" Kazuya believes that Shiyu has now understood the point of his problem, but he is still at a loss on how to explain this to Ayase.

"Of course it's because," Shiyu's no longer heavy words interjected, making Kazuya breathe a sigh of relief and at the same time have a bad premonition, "Kazuya-kun is the kind of scum who likes one when he sees one!" ”

"What do you mean?"

"That's right, and Yejun is a scumbag who can like all female characters, and he is not dedicated at all, so, after having a happy ending with Liuli, he is still not satisfied, and he still wants Weiyang, and he still wants to patrol the glass!"

"No, it's not like that!" Once again, the handcuffs stopped Kazuya from wanting to wave his arms.

"Oh, my brother is such a person!" Ayase's blackened eyes descended again.

"Ayase, listen to me!"

"You've noticed, Ayase, lately, there have been a lot of women around Kazuya-kun!"

"That's right, what the senior said is very reasonable!"

"So, if he's not a scumbag, then how can he attract so many women, isn't it?"

"Yes!"

"So, Ayase, what should you do?" Shi Yu continued to persuade earnestly.

"Brother of scum, he must be punished!"

Before Kazuya fainted, his last impression was the knife raised high by Ayase and the gloating smile of Shiyu.

In other words, didn't Ayase come to catch the traitor, shouldn't this time be the Shura field between Ayase and Shiyu? Why was it me who was unlucky in the end? Kazuya's last sentence was held in his stomach and could never come out again.

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Next, let's talk a little bit about the explanation of the original senior sister line forcibly joining the younger sister.,Although I don't expect the senior sister party to be satisfied.,But at least say my personal opinion on arranging this episode.。 This part of the plot, although there have been changes in the details and memories of killing, but as everyone knows, the main line is still the same as the original book.

So there's a problem.,Whether it's the original book or my article.,The hint of the senior sister is already obvious.,The original Zhong Lun is also unconsciously pulling out the flag and erecting the flag because he only pays attention to the setting of the second dimension.,But in my article,And it's not the kind of person who is Lun.,I don't want to write him as the kind of pure dull male protagonist (although there were also sluggish aspects before),So here and also vaguely aware of the kind of feelings of the senior sister.,If you let and the senior sister go on according to the development of the original Lun and the senior sister., I think I'm just caring about my sister now.,And those who don't realize their special feelings for their sister won't pull the flag of the senior sister.,So in order to continue this article.,Ayase plays a role in muddying the water and making both sides restrained.,On the one hand, let and can't completely calm down and consider the feelings of the senior sister.,On the other hand, it also makes the senior sister not too explicit to express her feelings.。

To make an inappropriate explanation, take galgame as an example, now Ayase doesn't appear and can go directly to Senpai NE (but this NE is the same as the so-called Yukina NE in WA2's Coda, which is actually a half-cut line, because many other people, including Senpai's own flag, have not been solved), but now Ayase appears so that there will be other people's routes and the possibility of Senpai TE in the future. Again, Machida editor, I'll write about her as an important person.,Of course, if you have time in the future.,You can directly write a senior sister NE's extras or something.,Although I think that plot might be like that.。