In order to make this book better written, the mouse opens a single chapter here to solicit suggestions and opinions from book friends on this book, and I hope that book friends can actively speak and leave your valuable footprints in the comment area.

The rules are as follows: without spraying randomly, point out the shortcomings of the book and put forward corresponding revision suggestions, what direction do you want the book to develop in the future, what plot do you want to see, and what requirements do you have for the heroine.

Requirement 1: The number of words should not be less than 300 words

Requirement 2: No personal attacks allowed

Rewards: First Prize: 5,000 starting coins

Three second prizes: 3,000 starting coins

Ten third prizes: 1,000 starting coins

P.S. If there are any good plot suggestions to the author, there will be additional rewards, and all pertinent comments will be refined

Time: 7.28-8.3 for one week

Format: [Profiteer Book Review] XXXXXX

It's not easy to write a book, please support the mouse, thank you!