Every creator has grown up in the blow.,Remembering that his first self-confident work was once rated by a healing master who was almost forgotten by himself, "It's not a novel at all", and in the end, he had to rely on his adaptation to make the little round face as a phenomenon glow with the brilliance it already has, and his second novel was considered to be "completely out of market orientation", and finally became a stepping stone for the debut of Kasumigaoka Shiyu, and he also felt that it was nothing to hit the black cat a little, It's just that the unexpected, somewhat weak and expectant look of the black cat now makes him a little unable to do it.

Swallowing his saliva, Kazuya crooked his eyes and commented on the black cat's novel: "Na, black cat-miss? ”

"Just call me a black cat."

"Well, then I said, if you have to evaluate, I think the opinions of both the teacher himself and others should be basically the same." Kazuya nodded and continued, "That's it, this novel is written with great care, but it's really unqualified, completely unqualified, or the novel you created is too self-conscious, and it doesn't take into account the reader's feelings at all, in short, it's not readable!" ”

Kazuya could see that the black cat's eyes, which were still full of anticipation just now, gradually dimmed, and for a moment Kazuya felt that the black cat was almost about to cry, however, after lowering his head for a while, the black cat still looked at Kazuya again strongly, and asked, "Well, is this the original words of Kashiwagi's seniors?" ”

"No, not exactly." Kazuya suddenly felt that he had gone too far, after all, the girl in front of him was just a little girl in the third year of junior high school, not everyone has their own precocious setting, even if it was themselves, it took a long time to recover after being hit hard by Shiyuan Xuan, and it was still with the help of Ayase, so the current black cat is already very good to be able to make self-adjustments in such a short time.

So,And also chose to leave a little more room for fantasy for the girl in front of her:"That,That's it.,Ying Lili,Ah that's what you said about Kashiwagi seniors.,She's really busy this time.,So although she said she read your manuscript.,But it's only a part of the novels and comics.,So she still hasn't a clear grasp of the specific plot.,Although it's vague and gave an unsatisfactory evaluation.,So let me help you take a look at your fandom again., But I still don't know what she thinks specifically, and I should say that the opinions just now are just my words. ”

"That,Don't comfort me.,I know.,Second creation or something.,It's more difficult to understand," the black cat nodded, and then said with wide eyes, "Since Kashiwagi seniors gave you the task of evaluation, then I'll trust you for a while, and tell me your opinion!" I know that there are a lot of problems in this doujinshi of mine that inevitably overturn the existing settings in secondary creations, so it's understandable that you say that the readability is relatively poor. But then I have to trouble you to convey my explanation to Kashiwagi seniors, otherwise it's not good for the seniors to misunderstand! ”

"Huh? This recovery speed seems too fast! Looking at the black cat that had already cheered up, he was also a little surprised, "So is it really just that it is not the evaluation of Ying Lili herself that can make this child so energetic?" ”

And then also thought about the possible reaction of Ying Li Li when he saw the black cat's manuscript, and had a cold war, for a real creator, Ying Li Li is likely to scoff at the black cat's current work, although it may be afraid of the black cat's own thoughts and say something soothing, but this does not mean that Ying Li Li is likely to recognize the black cat's work.

"Okay, so the next time you're ready to challenge Ying Li Li again, let me pick a few thorns for you!" Kazuya sighed and thought.

"By the way, Black Cat, have you submitted to various libraries before?" While organizing the language in his head, Kazuya asked a little casually.

"Uh, this, I submit articles to major libraries every year, but I haven't passed the newcomer award once, which is normal, and I know it, but I don't know in which round it was brushed down, so this, I want to find someone who is also a creator to give me a review or something." The black cat said with some dejected eyes.

"To be honest, given that you're writing a novel, I think Kasumigaoka Shiwa and Machida are a better fit for you." Kazuya muttered to himself, and after saying that, he realized that although the black cat and Shiyu had a relationship, the two didn't have much communication, and considering that both Kasumigaoka Shiyu and Machida editors were the kind of character who evaluated others mercilessly, Kazuya shook his head and suppressed this idea in his heart.

"Kazuya-senpai, what did you just say, I can't hear clearly?"

"Ah,It's nothing.,It's just that Saori doesn't have a fandom club too.,It seems that she still has some connections in this area.,It's better to ask her to find an editor I know or something to help you show it.,My evaluation is a non-professional evaluation after all.。 Kazuya coped in a panic.

"But Senpai and Kashiwagi Senpai are so familiar, and your evaluation is likely to be similar to Kashiwagi's Senpai's, so I still think it......" The black cat rubbed his hands, and still looked at Kazuya with a feeling of expectation.

"I really don't know why your obsession with her is suddenly so serious, why don't you just play a game and create it together?" Kazuya spit out slightly.

"However, I can feel that Kashiwagi-senpai is the same person as me! It's the kind of person who usually doesn't communicate.,But secretly stick to their hobby.,And the senior's game skills are really great.,It's hard to beat her last time if it wasn't for my higher proficiency.,I really hope I can have a chance to fight with her again! Looking at the image of the black cat making up the pear by himself, there was even a spark of infatuation in his eyes, and he had to whisper: This black cat can't be so stupid!

"Ahem, in short, first of all, many of your thoughts about Ying Lili are wrong, she is not a character like you who dare not speak in front of strangers, and the camouflage power is max, and secondly, okay, let me talk about some problems with your novel, non-professional reviews, of course, you can interrupt me at any time and explain your thoughts to me." Ignoring the black cat's somewhat nymphomaniac expression, Kazuya coughed and pulled the question back to the point.

"Okay." The black cat straightened up a somewhat thin body and looked at Kazuya intently.

"This, first of all, the problem that you didn't win any of the Newcomer Awards, I think this is really normal, because you can't reach the level of the Newcomer Award at all, by the way, I once went to the last round of the Fantastic Library Newcomer Award submission, and finally failed in the one-on-one competition, so I can responsibly tell you that your work is likely to be brushed down in the first round."

"If it's the novels I've written before that aren't secondary creations, there's still a chance, and there's not so much of an additional setting that doesn't match the original book......" Black Cat pursed his mouth and argued.

"It's not a question of whether your work is a secondary creation! Of course, it's a problem that you have too many settings, not to mention your secondary creation settings that don't match the original work, and your own settings are too long! With the setting draft accounting for half of the whole text, how can you make readers interested in reading your article, yes, the routines and plots of the current combat flow novels are basically the same, the only difference is the setting. But your setting is too blunt, and it takes half of the book to introduce the combat methods and combat content, instead of trying to integrate the setting into the plot more effectively, which is too blunt. ”

"If that's the case, I understand, I can modify it, and I've already thought of some paragraphs that can combine the setting with the plot better, and it's not like I have to ask for half a book every time." The black cat's face turned a little red, and there seemed to be some tears flashing in her eyes, but she finally suppressed her sadness and tried her best to explain it to Kazuya.

"Although that's the case, but the editor can't see what you think, and readers won't buy this kind of thing so much, let's take your setting as an example, many of your settings are meaningless settings, 'dark power' or something, it appears so many times in the novel, but I still don't understand what it is, I feel that the sense of existence is not as good as your usual, ah no, the presence of those words of the middle two just now is high." Kazuya covered his mouth and realized that he had made a slip of the tongue.

However, the black cat, who was already excited, did not notice these details: "The question of 'dark power' is very important, this is a very important foreshadowing, you know that I didn't finish it!" It's a very central setting in this worldview that I created, and if you don't have the 'power of darkness', you'll find that the context can't be taken care of at all. ”

"I understand your thoughts, but that doesn't change the fact that 'Dark Power' is just a meaningless term for bells and whistles in the articles so far, and if you really think it's so important, you haven't hinted at its importance or written about it......"

So the key is the full text! You haven't read the full text, how can you jump to conclusions? The black cat said righteously, and at the same time expressed his dissatisfaction with Kazuya, "The prejudice caused by you taking it out of context like this,It's really better not to listen.,How could Kashiwagi seniors ask you to evaluate my doujinshi?" ”

"Alright, little miss, let me break your illusions!" Listening to the black cat's words that seemed a little harsh because he was in a hurry, Kazuya smiled, "I just spoke politely!" Now I'll tell you, this novel of yours is a 'wow' novel, a novel that is completely immersed in personal fantasy and self-beauty, okay? You keep saying that I want to read the whole article, but will the editor have the patience to read your article and then evaluate it? Will readers be interested in reading the full text before deciding whether to buy your book? So little guy, don't tell me the full text, the full text is a false proposition, even if your setting is done carefully, no matter how clever the foreshadowing is buried, it is a waste of wood if you can't attract readers to read it, if your work is well written enough to attract readers to read it, then your work is full of foreshadowing. I don't know if you've read Teacher Xia Shizi's "Love Metronome".,The first sentence of the first chapter of the first volume can attract people.,Finally, her unexpected true only ending,Was foreshadowed by many true only fans in the first volume.,But at that time, true only hadn't appeared.。 Teacher Xia Shizi's choice to take a photo in "Love Metronome" may be the idea of that moment, but it can be thought by fans that it has been deliberately set a long time ago, which is called a good novel, which can attract fans to dig it themselves, rather than requiring fans to wait for their own settings! ”

Looking at the black cat who was a little dazed by what he said, Kazuya said, "And what about your novel?" What about your comics? From beginning to end, it's self-talking, it's self-satisfaction, it's normal to resurrect 'pitch black', you like the character, and then you add a prophetic setting to it, but please, kid, can it be reasonable? Don't just beat the original protagonist because of the prophet! If it's for your own amusement, it's okay to show yourself a work, but since you want to publish, since you want readers, and if you want to sell it, you should consider the basic feelings of other people, okay? ”

The black cat looked at Kazuya in a daze, unable to speak for a long time, the fist that had been clenched tightly before had been released, and the high-spirited look just now had disappeared, and the only thing left was the more frustrated eyes and the expression of bewilderment.

"Uh, this, sorry, I went a little too far." Kazuya realized that his emotions were a little too excited by the black cat just now, and at this moment, as a suggester and senior, he also lost his mind a little, which was really undeserved.

"Maybe this is another mode of preaching that I think is too self-righteous in the future, right?" looked at the black cat who was already crying, and he also touched his head with a headache and said good things:

"Now, how can I say this, there are also highlights in your novels! At least it's pretty good in character building.,There's a character template that's quite like Kirino.,Although I always feel like her ending may be more tragic.,But it's quite successful in terms of character portrayal.,If you can learn more from the characters around you.,It's good to portray more similar characters.,After all,The most impressive thing in many novels is the characters! If the characters are brilliant, the interesting plot will naturally appear, that ......"

However, this time, the black cat seems to have been hit too hard, and the sound of low sobbing is very obvious, and Kazuya's remedial words don't seem to have any effect.

And at this time, Kirino and Kato, who were watching the conversation between the two on the side, finally realized this anomaly.

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Although I'm going to let the protagonist complain about himself in the text tomorrow in the next sentence, I still can't help but want to say it in advance today.,It's also a black cat novel.,What performance does the original Kyosuke have?,What performance is there now and also.,It's really no-zuo-no-die!