Chapter 159: Guidance
Molestation is teasing, looking at the black cat's "thirsty for knowledge" expression, and also feels that he still needs to give the black cat some help, after all, if you keep shirking the things that you promised others, it would be too bad.
"So are you going to write an original novel that you want to submit to the magazine, or do you want to make a name for yourself at the fanfair and then make the transition?" Kazuya looked at the delicate handwriting on the black cat's manuscript paper, and didn't quite understand what the black cat was going to write.
Black Cat's novel,From the perspective of character setting,It seems to be her favorite maschera-based.,But just a brief browsing.,And also found that the plot in it includes some strange aspects of campus life.,The protagonist seems to have become an "ordinary" female high school student.,This makes him a little unable to grasp the idea of black cat writing.。
"Well, I wanted to write fan fiction first, but my drawing skills are pretty average, so, that-" Black Cat said with some slurring. And Kazuya immediately understood the black cat's thoughts.,After all,Content like novels that require people to spend time reading at the same exhibition is not the kind of thing that is more attractive.,Make a name for yourself in the same exhibition with an original novel.,Unless you have strong creative skills,It's almost impossible.。
Of course, in this current situation, even a scummy light novel can sell well as long as it needs attractive illustrations, so from the perspective of convenience to gather popularity, the illustrations have surpassed the content of the novel itself to some extent, which increases the difficulty of making a name for itself in pure text, which is estimated to be a point that Black Cat considers. So although it was based on Maschera's logic at the beginning, it was written that Black Cat's final goal had shifted to submitting articles to magazines.
"If that's the case, I think it's better to rewrite this thing of yours.,At least you can't write the content you borrowed from maschera so obviously.,Although a lot of light novels now copy each other at the beginning.,The most typical thing is to see a girl's nude and the like.,But this kind of fantasy battle setting plagiarism is still rare.。 Kazuya looked at the thick pile of manuscripts of the black cat, and although he couldn't bear it, he still insisted on saying.
"I know! I didn't think about submitting this article, but I started writing it a long time ago, and now that I've written so much, I can't bear to give up. The black cat said sullenly, "Anyway, give me a good opinion on what I'm writing now, otherwise, I'll tell Ayase that you're bullying me!" ”
"How do you feel that you say this sentence in the style of Kirino? You need to know that your cuteness is not here, so pay a little attention! Kazuya helplessly held his forehead and said.
"Huh? Do you want to learn from that cocky girl? How is that possible? As a noble lacquer ** who fell from heaven, how could I be the same as that woman, oh hehe, hehe-"
"Well, although secondary two is indeed a more definite attribute of yours, I don't think secondary two is a cute point-"
"This is not the second disease that you humans superficially think, but the real punishment from heaven, don't be mistaken!" The black cat hurriedly interrupted Kazuya, covered one of his eyes and continued.
"I think it would be cuter if you could show some white cat looks?" Kazuya suddenly remembered that the black cat did theoretically have another posture, and said with some amusement.
But this sentence caused a very violent reaction from the black cat, she stood up suddenly, took a few steps back, looked at Kazuya with a vigilant expression, and asked very seriously, even anxiously: "How do you know the state of the white cat?" You know, I've never been a white cat in front of outsiders? When did you know this, you guy? Could it be that you still have hidden abilities in you that I didn't discover? Sure enough, you still have two brushes! ”
And also made a difficulty, at this time he realized the so-called "white cat" posture, just because he knew some of the convenience of the plot in advance, and the black cat so far, has never shown that kind of cute face in front of others, this kind of secret hidden in her own heart was unreservedly revealed by him, which will definitely make the black cat a little scared, and those words just now, although the middle two are full of breath, clearly reflect the kind of tension towards Kazuya.
After thinking about it, Kazuya had no choice but to deal with it with haha: "That,I'm just talking about it casually.,Look,Don't you always wear a black gothic loli suit?" Wearing black clothes is a black cat, I prefer white cats, so I wonder if you will become a white cat when you wear white clothes, so I just mentioned it casually, but do you really have a so-called white cat form? Will you wear white at that time? ”
And the black cat listened to Kazuya's words, although she still looked a little skeptical, but she still forced herself to believe Kazuya's words, after all, she didn't believe that Kazuya knew this secret that she had never mentioned to others, and Kazuya's look of ignorance, although a little abrupt, but also reasonable.
So, taking a breath, the black cat slowly sat down and said: "Okay, since you said so, I still believe in you, but, I must tell you that the white cat form is a taboo mode, unless it is a necessary crisis, I will not show it, only when facing special people, I will use the white cat mode to carry out my efforts, but the kind of person who needs me to pay so much strength must have a deep bond with me in my past life, unfortunately, your strength is not yet up to that level, Even Kashiwagi Senpai didn't have that level, you know? ”
What, the so-called need to pay a lot of strength, the so-called fetters of the past life, aren't they lovers? Kazuya looked at the meaning of the black cat's self-justification, and thought it was very interesting, especially when she knew the hidden meaning of the black cat's words. Of course, these words in his heart would not be said to the black cat, and if he said these words, it would only make the black cat more nervous, and it would be even more difficult for him to explain why he knew so much.
"Okay, okay, then go back to the question of this novel of yours," Seeing that the situation was good, Kazuya quickly changed the topic, of course, it seems that this transferred problem is the real theme, flipped through the text of the first few chapters of the black cat, and also said with some confusion, "Your previous novels should all be about magic battles, why do the first few chapters reveal a strong love flavor of girly manga?" ”
"It's to attract more people, after all, it's hard to attract girls in fights like Maschera, and you can see the state of Mega Girl and Ayase, they don't like this kind of thing. But the love plot of the girl manga is basically all-inclusive for all girls.,I changed it with this in mind.。 The black cat seemed to have been prepared for Kazuya's question, and as soon as Kazuya's words fell, her answer immediately appeared.
But,And also always feel that there seems to be something wrong with the black cat's answer.,Because,It's okay if she writes this way at the beginning.,But this kind of girl-style plot development,Obviously, it is more stiff to make up for it at a certain stage in the later stage.,Especially in the first few chapters.,The so-called romantic bridges are written in the gaps of each line.,At first glance, it's not the content planned at the beginning.,And these bridges,It's often some more traditional old-fashioned bridges., The echo of the context is also not very good. However, since the black cat said so, Kazuya felt that it was better for him not to point out these problems directly, but to try to talk slowly.
"Is that so? But I think,You don't seem to be so good at writing these contents.,You look at the combat part.,Although the problem is still the same.,All kinds of German words with unknown meaning.,Or when you can't make it up, you can put out a big move to end the battle.,But from the overall fluency of the battle.,Throw out these settings that people don't understand very well.,The battle plot is still relatively clear.,You can also write something unique about yourself.。 But these so-called love plots are completely discordant, giving people the feeling that they are just a patchwork of a few plots and bridges. I don't know if you've read a lot of comics in this area, but judging from your writing, I think you may have only seen a few similar comics and started to put them together a little haphazardly, which makes your articles feel like they're adding to it, understand? ”
"I know that!" Listening to Kazuya's obviously some unpleasant criticism, the black cat nodded awkwardly, of course she didn't stand the setback, after all, her other novels had been criticized by Kazuya before, but it could be seen from her somewhat stubborn eyes that she didn't seem to give up these plots so easily.
"I think you know a lot about the type of maschera, and these things that have a strong middle and second breath—"
"That's not Form 2—"
"Okay,These settings are more advanced.,A lot of content designed to the wizarding world is more suitable for you to write.,So forcibly adding the content of campus love will only be more disobedient.,I don't think there's any need for you to weaken your own essence in order to cater to some readers.,Now it's like this.,Not only did you fail to attract readers who like girl comics.,You'll also drive away readers who like this kind of fighting.,I don't think you're willing to do it, right?" Kazuya frowned and said.
"I get that, but there's definitely something that combines the two, right? A lot of the current girl comics have magic.,Battles and the like.,It's also very popular! ”
"But you have to pay attention.,The positioning of those comics is essentially a girl's comic.,Not a magic battle comic.,And the definition of your novel should essentially be a magical combat novel.,Not a shoujo novel.,Unless you can write the latter better than the former.,But you yourself know that this can't be done!"
"Yes!" The black cat nodded indignantly and said.
"So you can try to get rid of that part? Write like the original, write the original way to correct some of your self-satisfaction weaknesses, and now the way the novel is written, it will not attract people at all, and there is no room for correction! ”
"But, but I'm not reconciled!" Hearing Kazuya's words, the black cat was silent for a long time, and in the end, she still let out a somewhat trembling voice, "If that's the case, doesn't that mean I'm worse than that guy?" ”
"Huh? That guy, who is that guy? He also asked with some confusion, but an answer vaguely came to mind in his mind.
"Who else? Isn't it the arrogant girl who wears too much fashion all day? She was able to write novels, and she also posted her novels on the Internet, and they were welcomed by many people, in the form of mobile phone novels, it's really funny, isn't it? It's so unfair that the novel I've been writing for so long hasn't been approved by the editorial department, and the kind of weird girly romance novel she wrote was posted on the Internet and received high reviews. The black cat all said with some jealousy.
Kazuya also realized that the novel that the black cat referred to was probably Kirino's boring "Sister Kong", and he hadn't read Kirino's novel either, but he still remembered that the plot of this novel was the kind of work where the terrible male characters kept dying, and then the female protagonist kept circling between different male characters.
To be honest, he doesn't know how Kirino's novel became popular, and on this world line, it seems that the fate of the fire has not changed much, but the next question is whether it will encounter a plagiarism incident or be published directly and smoothly.
Of course, these things are not what Kazuya is currently concerned about.,The current state of the black cat is obviously affected by Kirino.,And you can probably guess it.,The situation of comparing Kirino and the black cat when they meet together.,Since both of them wrote novels,,Then the comparison between each other is inevitable.,In the case of the black cat's novel has been repeatedly rejected by the editorial department,Kirino 's novel can become popular on the Internet.,This makes the black cat who thinks he has put a lot of thought into it must feel a little uneven.。
"There's no way, your opponent is Kirino Takasaka, who is basically omnipotent in that setting!" Kazuya scratched his head with a little headache, he could also imagine why the black cat added those girl comics full of disobedience, just to let himself outperform Kirino in the place where Kirino creates!
However, is this obviously the anger between little girls! At this time, you shouldn't think about defeating your opponent on the frontal battlefield, but winning on other battlefields through various methods.
Of course, it seems that the black cat is indeed quite in the middle two now. Kazuya held his head, not knowing how to convince the black cat.
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500 votes plus more, and 900 votes for the next chapter. Let's start with a few chapters of normal entertainment and then shake a big burden. It's really been a foreshadowing for a long time, and although I haven't written it, I'm looking forward to writing it.