Just when Kazuya was entangled in Kato's unhappiness for some reason, Ryonya's voice had already interjected, and his voice was a particularly serious tone that Kazuya had never dared to imagine before, which also made Kazuya suddenly feel that his peaceful days were about to end:

"Kazuya, there's something wrong, come out with me!"

“OK！” Lunye's solemn expression made Kazuya realize the seriousness of the matter, so he no longer sought to tease Lunya casually as he did in the past, but agreed very simply.

And Lunya, who got Kazuya's affirmative reply, glanced at Kato, who was sitting next to Kazuya with squinted eyes and looking at the two of them, and nodded, and said: "Okay, then Kato should also come over and take a look, this problem should be a common problem for everyone in the community, and it is a very important issue related to whether the game has gameplay or not, and whether it can be a big hit!" ”

"Okay!" Kato's answer was also very crisp, he stood up, and followed the two of them out of the classroom.

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"This is some of the scripts I wrote before, although the original artwork of Ying Lili is not completely completed now, but the overall script content has been filled in." In the audio-visual classroom, Lun also took out a CD without any cover, and said more seriously, under normal circumstances, if he could complete such a large amount of work in advance, Lun would often show off to Heya, but his current expression was only serious and some chagrin, which made He even more worried.

"So, you mean, is this game playable?" Kazuya took the CD, put it in the computer, and said suspiciously.

"That's right,For the game,,The most important thing is to solve the problem of bugs in the later stage.,Although galgame will definitely have fewer bugs than other games.,Because after all, it's a simple line selection and text problem.,But considering that we're making a game independently.,It's better to do this kind of bug check as many times as possible.,So I sped up and made the script out and tried it out now.。

"This really doesn't look like your style!" Kazuya quickly pressed the button,While saying,The line he is using now is the Nitta Weiyang line in the game,That is, the route of the script he wrote himself,This means that he is very familiar with the content of the route,Not to mention a few options to enter the trueend,Even the specific dialogue he remembers clearly,"I always feel that you guys are not so cautious.,Often play off!" ”

"Well, that's really not what I thought of," Len scratched his head a little embarrassed and said, "This is Kato's suggestion, because she mentioned that we won't be able to find out the real vulnerabilities in the game without trying it out, so I'll try to try it out first!" ”

"Kato?" Kazuya raised his eyebrows in some surprise, and then glanced at the girl behind the two who didn't talk much.

In fact, Kazuya always feels that Kato often has a sense of nonchalance when talking to other people in the community compared to the more engaged way he looks when talking to himself, which is also a very strange point for him.

Because in the process of his own contact with Kato, Kazuya often has an illusion, a kind of Kato Megumi's character, not to mention becoming distinct, at least a vivid feeling, but when Kato re-talks to others, her so-called distinctness disappears, and it is just like a bug that will only appear in front of herself.

"From beginning to end,I'm just a 'heroine' and I don't help you too much.,I was going to write the script and finally let An Yi take on it alone.,Now what I can do is to see what loopholes are in the club's plan!" Kato shrugged his shoulders and said in a tone that didn't know whether it was regret or indifference, "But since you can really find the loophole, of course it's also good." ”

So, what went wrong? I've played so far.,It's basically past half of the plot of the Weiyang line.,But so far the game has been running smoothly.,I don't have any sense of disobedience in the process of choosing? Kazuya nodded his mouse a little strangely and said.

"It's not a simple bug problem in the game program, but a problem that the overall game is too scummy. All in all, you'll know if you keep playing, by the way, and yes, don't always play the right way you remember, deliberately try to pick a few wrong options, and then evaluate the feeling. Lun also shook his head and said.

In Kazuya's opinion, this evaluation should never be used in this game with top script writers and painters, but Lun actually said such a word, which also made Kazuya feel even more wrong.

And then, as his game progresses, he does notice that something is wrong.

"It's true, although I don't want to admit it because it's my script, but this game is indeed a terrible game!" Kazuya threw the mouse to the ground heavily, and with a hint of aggrieved depression, he shouted fiercely.

"yes, you realize that, right?"

"I realized it," Kato nodded, and said, "The whole game, it seems that there are many options, but in fact, for the player, there is only one route to take, all the options, the final route pointed, is also the same, once you choose the wrong one, either it will end hastily, or use other options to force the player to go back to the right route, in essence, the player is not 'playing the game', the player himself is not the decider of the game progress, the player is just reading the electronic novel." ”

"That's right, and the specific option settings like galgame, at best, are just a trick to add to the snake, and the options are not completely integrated with the game's script, just meaningless things chosen for the sake of choice." Kazuya added heavily.

"That's right,I trusted the two of you too much before.,The so-called favorability of the so-called heroine in the galgame,It's not reflected in your script at all.,In addition to the favorability of the heroine herself in each branch,The favorability of other female characters,It seems that it can be determined by one option.。 Lun also continued to add, "Although both you and Sister Shiyu are very good fiction writers, but in terms of script creation, especially in terms of script creation for galgame, you are still complete novices, and you are completely unqualified!" ”

"This is the problem with the script I listed, and there are more things that lack gameplay than the ones you just pointed out, and of course the one you pointed out is the most critical one." Lun also shook a piece of paper in his hand and said to Kazuya.

Kazuya took the paper in Lunye's hand, and looked at it with some wide eyes, as a senior gamer, Lunye, who can really analyze the problems of the game, can see more clearly in this regard, and each of his questions is like a knife, cut in Kazuya's heart.

Problems with the game:

1.

Different female protagonists cannot be included in the same game.

2.

The presence of the plots of the other lines derived is too low - the side script is too short, and the ending has no aftertaste; The sub-heroine is too understated, making people feel that the heroine is unimportant at first glance, and it can't make people cute compared to the main heroine; The horizontal connection of the various derived routes is zero, and the feeling that a line is too strong in the end, it is entirely for the sake of writing the branch line and writing the branch line

3.

The relevance of the option to the game is too weak - once selected, it will immediately return to the common line scenario; There is only one choice, and changing just one option will lead to divergent lines; The character's reaction to choosing an option is similar regardless of the option, in short, the option doesn't fit well with the game

4.

The balance of the game text is too poor - all the psychological descriptions are expressed in the text, and there is no room for painting and performance effects; There are too few lines, and the wording that expresses the character's characteristics does not clearly reflect the character's personality; It looks at the character's thinking and depiction without the character's action.

"Well, although I know a lot of problems, I still feel sad when you really throw these problems in front of me one by one!" Kazuya said with a wry smile.

"How to say it.,The last few questions are actually the problems of Senior Sister Shiyu in general.,It should be said that Senior Sister Shiyu's practice of being good at psychological description made this situation appear in the text of the game in the end.,And also your part of the script.,Although you have your own style.,But obviously,It can be seen that you've been cooperating with Senior Shiyu's style.,So not only did you lose your own style.,And you also made the same mistake as Shiyu's script style.。 It's a mistake on top of a mistake! More things that need to be modified! Lun also continued mercilessly, and Jean He couldn't help but frown, he really hadn't heard such sharp criticism from others about him for a long time.

"But Aragaki classmate's original writing style is actually more inclined to psychological description and emotional narration! This is actually similar to that of Kasumigaoka Senpai.,The difference between the two is mainly in the specific perspective.,Aragaki classmate is more inclined to male psychology.,Kasumigaoka Senpai pays more attention to the psychology of the heroine, right? Just when Kazuya was a little frustrated, Kato came out to play a round, "However, the key problem now is that if it is such a script, it will definitely be unacceptable, and it needs to be revised, right?" ”

"That's right," Lun also showed a distressed expression, and said, "It just has to be modified, and it must be the kind of revision that is close to rewriting, because of the setting of options, there is no way to change it at all, if the incompleteness of the route of other heroines can be improved through the writing of the rest of us, but as far as the adaptation of the original script is concerned, it should still be handed over to the author himself, right?" ”

"Is that so? I don't have a problem, although you said that you criticized me harshly, but if you want me to rewrite, I still understand your feelings. Kazuya nodded and said solemnly, "So, maybe the time is a little tight, when do you need me to hand it over to you?" ”

"No, the problem now is not your problem, in the end, you are only responsible for one line of the Weiyang line, and the more important two lines of the heroine's patrol glass and Liuli are the core of the script, and these two lines are the responsibility of Senior Sister Shiyu." Lun also shook his head with a little headache and said.

"Senior Sister Shiyu is such an arrogant person, if you criticize me like this, it will definitely be very uncomfortable, after all, even I was hit hard just now!" Kazuya nodded, also with a look of distress.

"However, if it is explained clearly, Kasumigaoka-sani has no reason to object, after all, she doesn't want her game script debut to be such a failed work, right?" Kato added in a puzzled tone.

"No, it's not the question now, I don't know if I can convince Senior Sister Shiyu, as long as we all work hard, I think she will not be so stubborn, she can be persuaded by us to rewrite the script, the key problem is," Lun also shouted a little frantically, "I can't contact Senior Sister, before looking for you, I already want to communicate with Senior Sister first, but I can't contact her, her mobile phone is turned off, the only thing I can contact is her editor, according to the editor, Because the senior sister's new novel could not be completed for a long time, she stared at the senior sister, and did not allow the senior sister to participate in any work until she completed the manuscript of the new novel. ”

"It's true, Shiyu Senpai hasn't come to participate in club activities in the past two days, I just thought it was some personal physical reasons or something-" Kazuya covered his mouth in surprise.

"So, with the most important script writers unable to be contacted, we can't revise the script now! Without the revision of the script, the script writing of the game cannot be carried out, and the original painting of Ying Lili has no reference object, so all the problems have returned to the situation that the script was not completed two months ago! Kato calmly analyzed.

"That's right, that's it!" Lun also stomped his foot heavily, "That editor doesn't know what's going on, he takes Senior Sister so closely, even if he lets Senior Sister Shiyu spare a day to give a general direction to the revision of the script a little, now it's completely stagnant, there is no way!" ”

"Okay," Kazuya nodded, and said, "I already have a rough understanding of what the problem is now, the key is that Senpai is restricted by Machida's editor and can't contact her, right?" Even Machida editors can't tie down Shiyu-senpai, so as long as we have the opportunity to talk to Senpai, then we can solve these problems. Lun, you don't know that woman well, but I've had a confrontation with her, so leave that guy to me! ”

"That's not a simple woman!" Lun also said with some concern.

"I know that guy is not simple, he has been playing me around before," remembered his somewhat humiliating history, and grinded his teeth angrily, "But, this time, I still have to settle the old accounts with her!" ”

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The first update, the content of the title refers to Lun's opinion on the script is completely copied from the original, and it is estimated that 300 words have been copied intact. In addition, is there such a concept as August sickness?,I feel like I'm lazy after entering August.,It's because I'm going back to school soon.,It must be!