I have made more detailed revisions and changes to the first five chapters (excluding the prologue), including typos, diction, and sentence inconsistencies. But after five chapters, there will be a problem of plot jumps, which is the reason why I deleted some connecting bridges after I revised it, and I will fix it after the new revision changes. There is no problem with the plot of the first five chapters.

In order to review and sign for the third time, Xiao Xiao is ready to make revisions to this book from the 8th, therefore, I will revise the previous chapters of the novel, add some paragraphs, add some psychological descriptions, bury some foreshadowing, and dig more pits while ensuring the integrity of the story and the overall structure! Make the protagonist's personality more prominent, make his relationship with the heroine clearer, and the contradictions with the hostile forces of the main line are more intense, reduce the redundant appearances of some supporting roles, and strive for a clear distinction between primary and secondary, not procrastinating!

First, the characters in chapters 4 and 5 are reduced and the description of the protagonist's heart is increased.

Second, for each revised chapter, the number of words is controlled at about 3,000 words, and the extra words are either deleted or arranged to the next chapter.

Third, if you have any comments on the revision of this book, or other matters, you are welcome to discuss more.

- The author kills Xiao

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