Alas, after struggling for a long time, I still have time to write a testimonial on the shelf, which can be regarded as an explanation for myself and this novel.

I think every new author is very distressed about the poor number of readings and recommendation votes of their works, because I am also like this.

However, what I'm looking forward to the most is not tipping, not voting for recommendations. I hope that my work will be read and commented on, so that I know what is not good and I can correct it in time.

As a newcomer, I was desperate for someone to show me the way. The great amount of reading by your readers has created your vision, and often many of the loopholes that the author did not find were discovered by the readers (of course, typing is fast, and many times there will be typos, and even the name is almost confused).

The purpose of the above is to seek guidance. ヘ(^o^)ノ

I've also mentioned that my parents don't allow me to write, that they think I'm whimsical (which I do, every fiction writer has a very big brain) and that I don't have a proper job. They think that the most important thing for me to do now is to enrich myself so that I can have a stable income in the future.

But what to do? I love to write, and I love to present the world I envision to you. Even if it is still flawed, I believe that as long as I keep writing, I will definitely build my world more and more perfectly.

In order to write my favorite novels, like all the authors who came before me, I often stayed up until midnight, but I didn't feel anything. But in the eyes of my parents, they just don't care for themselves, they have quarreled three times a week over my affairs, they are all letting the other party take care of me, and they are complaining that the other party does not care about me.

Since then, I've tried to code a little bit at night, then go to bed, and continue to code during the day.

(*^▽^*) I am writing this paragraph in the hope that all of you, whether you are the author or the reader, can pay attention to rest and stay up as little as possible. Staying up late not only hurts your body, but also makes your parents worry about you.

Let's go back to this book.

To be honest, I myself feel that I can't write well. Many places are very white, and the characters in the pen are not distinct enough.

It's like I'm going to portray a bad guy, but my perception of a bad guy is like asking a child, he will tell you that Mom and Dad say that the bad guy is very fierce, they will beat him, and they will take him away and not let him see his parents, but they have never seen the real bad guys, they always only have the concept of impressions.

So I don't have a good grasp of the villain's character. Bad guys are also people, and they also have a psyche. However, every time I encounter a villain, I always have to carvin, and I always have to think about it for a long time before I give them a shot.

There is also a place to write about the love between men and women, and due to the problem of tutoring, I am completely blank slate in this regard. Every time I write an emotional drama, I will run to read a few emotional essays from my predecessors to find inspiration.

Those of you who may have read "The Right and Wrong of Immortals" know that the characters in my pen are more or less black-bellied, which is also the biggest failure of my novel.

There are too many people around me who are black-bellied, and I have been choked with words too many times, so the characters I created also have such attributes.

The above is my personal evaluation of my work, to be honest, I didn't find myself to have merit.

However, I believe that I still have a long way to go, and I will be able to correct many shortcomings in the next novel.

I won't give up on this novel because there are too many shortcomings, the principle of personal handling is to do things from the beginning to the end, and I will try to change my shortcomings from now on.

Please look forward to my future growth! Momoda, love you! Looking forward to your comments for me! (To be continued.) )