Chapter 32: My Mansion in the Sky
In the history of this world, there was a famous literati named Meng Jingyuan during the Song Dynasty.
Meng Jingyuan was indifferent to fame and fortune all his life, pinned his love on mountains and rivers, and left many popular articles and poems.
In Ye Bufan's view, Meng Jingyuan is somewhat similar to Tao Yuanming in his previous life, far away from the world, pinning his affection on the landscape and pastoral, and the literary achievements of "Shanxi" can also be compared to Mr. Wuliu's "The Story of the Peach Blossom Spring".
Shen Shi's prose uses the past to express the present, and presents Meng Jingyuan's leisurely, quiet and far-reaching feeling in front of everyone, which makes people sound as if they are in a mountain hut shrouded in the morning light, and they are suddenly relaxed and happy!
The only flaw is that Shen Shi's pen power is still weaker, after all, he is only a high school student, even if he has published novels, his creative penmanship and ability are still a little immature.
The whole "Tale of the Mountain House" seems to be a little pretentious, and the ideological and literary artistry are discounted.
However, this flaw does not affect the audience's love for it, and for Shen Shi, the first place is well deserved.
The host Yang Hua looked at the last list in his hand, smiled kindly at Ye Bufan, and said: "The following contestant, Ye Bufan, is from Luoyi High School, please enjoy Ye Bufan's prose work "My Pavilion in the Sky". ”
"What, my castle in the air, the name sounds so cheesy, I don't know how the article is?"
"Listen to the name and know that there is no drama, you look at the name of Shen Shi's article, "The Story of Shanxi House", how good it is, he made a vulgar "My Castle in the Sky", why don't you write "My Secret Garden"!"
"Hahaha, you're so funny, the last one, let's listen to it first, if it's rotten, I'll go straight away, and enjoy nearly twenty essays, and those three or two are good."
"The "Noble Son of the Poor Family" that this contestant gave a speech before is really good, and the prose should not be too bad!"
"Whatever, just listen carefully!"
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The audience in the audience sounded a whispering discussion, for so long they have been appreciating the lyrical prose of borrowing scenes, many people have begun to get tired aesthetically, coupled with the name of Ye Bufan's extremely ordinary article, no one is interested in it for a while.
Even Sven Nan Du Shaojie was a little interested, picked up this "My Pavilion in the Air" and began to recite it.
"The mountain is like an eyebrow, and the hut is just a mole on the tip of the eyebrow."
Du Shaojie read the first sentence in a mechanical voice, and as soon as the words fell, the whole person suddenly came to his senses.
As an announcer, Du Shaojie has read a lot of beautiful prose, but it is the first time he has read an article like this that can capture people's hearts in the first sentence.
He had recited so many essays before, including Shen Shi's "The Story of the Mountain Xi House", which did not give him such a feeling.
In the first sentence, the author uses a wonderful figurative figure of speech, and it is in the form of a comparison.
At first, with "mountain" as the ontology and "Mei Dai" as the metaphor, the whole metaphor is vivid, fresh, appropriate and imaginative, and then the metaphor of the eyebrows is applied, and the hut is directly compared to a mole on the tip of the eyebrows.
Holding back the excitement in his heart, Du Shaojie continued to recite, his voice was no longer muddy, but full of emotional tension, as if this prose was written by himself.
Very fresh, very natural, my cabin stood delicately at a soft angle on the ridge.
There are many things in the world that are already beautiful, and once they need to be embellished, so are the mountains. The appearance of the hut breaks the loneliness of the mountain and increases the content of the scenery. There is a hut on the mountain, just like a sail floating on the endless water, and a flying goose passing by the vast and boundless sky, which is a little smart color on the simple background, a little vitality and a little mood in the beautiful scenery of the mountains and rivers.
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Du Shaojie was completely immersed in the prose "My Pavilion in the Sky" written by Ye Bufan, and these beautiful and fresh sentences made Du Shaojie and the audience fascinated.
"This can't be where he copied it, it's too powerful!"
"It's simply a master's work, where can it be written by a high school student!"
"That's, that's it, in addition to the beautiful words, this prose also gives people a sense of immersion throughout. It's incredible! ”
"This contestant's last speech contest was so exciting, I knew that a mere instant essay would be difficult for people."
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Not only the audience, but even the judges were shocked.
Many judges who were sitting in a precarious position listened to Du Shaojie's recitation of "My Pavilion in the Sky", and secretly pondered for a long time, feeling that they would not be able to make such beautiful lyrical prose no matter what.
Even if it could be made, it wouldn't take just an hour.
No, it's not an hour, didn't Lao Zhao and the three of them say that this contestant handed in the article in ten minutes.
"Lao Zhao, what you just said is true, this kid wrote this article in ten minutes?" A judge teacher who was over half a hundred years old and wore reading glasses asked suspiciously.
"Senior Gu, Teacher Liu and Teacher Hua were both there at that time, this kid did hand in the paper in ten minutes, we asked him worriedly, and he still looked confident!"
The judge surnamed Zhao remembered the scene at that time, and now he thinks about it and thinks it's really incredible, ten minutes, such a short time is not enough to make a draft, and people export it into a chapter, and it is directly a beautiful prose.
"I see, our fears were completely unnecessary! That kid's self-confidence, I remember it very well now! Teacher Hua on the other side pursed his lips and sighed.
"Don't say it's a high school student, we can't write it in ten minutes, do you think this kid copied it from?"
Teacher Liu, who had been silent all the time, opened his mouth to say his guess, and everyone's eyes flashed, and they all looked at Teacher Liu, as if they felt that there was something possible.
"No, such a powerful prose can't be unknown no matter where it is placed. But it's a pity that a good seedling, I don't know how the organizing committee will arrange it this time, don't eliminate it again! Teacher Gu smiled bitterly and said.
"It's not like elimination, but I don't think the score will be high, wait and see, and the instructions will come down." The middle-aged man sitting next to Teacher Gu also said casually.
On the organizing committee's side, four or five middle-aged people in suits and leather shoes gathered together, and their faces were not very good-looking.
These are the leaders of the organizing committee, and they are gathered at this time precisely because of the things on the other side of the competition.
To be exact, it was to discuss how to score Ye Bufan.
Ye Bufan's prose is well written, and they are like a mirror in their hearts, but they are even more clear about the main purpose of this writer's cup, if Ye Bufan wins the first place, or even gets a good score, it will not be a good thing for Shen Shi's fame cultivation.
The man at the head looked depressed, and now he faintly regretted that he should not have designed such a live recitation and scoring program for the sake of the effect of the show.
Now it's okay, the audience at the scene and in front of the TV are watching them, Du Shaojie has finished reciting Ye Bufan's "My Pavilion in the Sky", and then he will score Ye Bufan.
"Director Qin, no matter what, this Ye Bufan's score can't be up to 90 points, once he gets up to 90 points, let him accumulate popularity, if he plays extraordinarily in the future, won't he be able to control it!" Deputy Director Zhang opened his mouth and said his own opinion.
"Zhang Long is right, Qin Chuan, I feel that this Ye Bufan is a little unusual, don't let him enter the audience's sight for too long, forget about the arrangement of this mistake, just give him an 80 points, and wait for him to fade out of people's field of vision; Otherwise, just knock him out! Shen Nan also agreed.
"Alas, it's really a tricky thing, you said that this Luoyi is also high, why did you send such a contestant, so let's call Deputy Director Shen and hear what his opinion is."
After Qin Chuan finished speaking, he took out his mobile phone and walked towards the door.
When I dialed the phone, it was Deputy Director Shen's assistant who answered, and Qin Chuan hurriedly smiled and said, "Hey, I, Xiao Qin, help me find Director Shen!" ”
After a while, Deputy Director Shen's familiar and majestic voice rang on the phone: "Xiao Qin, what's the matter, is there something wrong with the Writer's Cup?" ”
"Director Shen, the Writer's Cup is a qiēshun lì, it's just a little bit of a problem with the scoring system of the game, could you please give me an idea?"
"What's the problem, are you doing a little too much to protect Xiao Shi?"
"No, that's the case, there was a contestant named Ye Bufan in this second instant prose writing competition, and he wrote a ......"
Qin Chuan quickly explained the matter to Deputy Director Shen one by one, and then waited for the leader's instructions.
After a while, Deputy Director Shen's laughter came from the phone, and then Qin Chuan received Deputy Director Shen's arrangements and orders.
Putting away the phone, Qin Chuan scratched his head in confusion and returned to those people.