Chapter 244: The Novel Problem

The original work of "Fate/Zero" is classified as a light novel, but compared to most popular light novels, it is not a dozen or twenty volumes, and the high-density plot conflict and character descriptions are condensed into four volumes. Pen, fun, pavilion www. biquge。 info Xuan Xuyuan is a seasoned game scriptwriter, the text is more than a grade higher than the average romance novelist, and he is particularly good at describing large scenes and character conflicts, so the plot condensed in four volumes not only does not give people a sense of haste, the concept of each king's royal road in the king's banquet, the mockery of the nihilistic justice of Emiya Kiritsu, and the details of each character's background tragedy, the plot is linked one by one so that readers have a more refreshing sense of reading.

The plot construction of the novel does not have the naΓ―ve elements in most Japanese works, and the plot integrated into the characters' personalities is rigorous, and the character conflicts that conform to the plot fully reflect the concepts and charms of each character, this work is like a Japanese-style fantasy opera, full of the flavor of Japanese fantasy literature without the frivolity and impatience of most Japanese entertainment novels.

However, "Fate/Zero" still has the narrow cognition of Japanese novels, with more mouths than hands, too persistent in the construction of the plot, and the rigor of some aspects has lost the tension it should have, the performance of the big scenes is insufficient, and the conflict of ideas between the characters is not strong enough. Neither the fourth or fifth Holy Grail victory is enough to be worthy of the name of [War], it is more like a game with a planned ending.

Although the content of the four volumes makes the audience exclaim, just a closer look will make you feel that something seems to be missing in these four volumes of novels, and the answer is the balance between the plot and the characters and the overall structure of the novel. Fate/Zero is an excellent novel, with a great story and distinct characters, but it doesn't make you want to go deeper into the novel.

Yu Kamiya believes that the most important thing to revise in the novel is the background of Fuyuki City, which takes place in a city where only ordinary people live, and the commotion caused by the fight between seven heroic spirits with superhuman strength is equal to nothing, which greatly limits the expressiveness of the scene. Why not expand the world view, for example, to include magicians other than the master, for example, to set up a subspace where the heroic spirits can fight to their heart's content, such as deepening the background of their respective characters, Director Kenneth is no longer alone but located inside the clock tower The magician family sent out a test of the Holy Grail War, in addition to using the power of the heroic spirits, each master can also rely on the power of the magician family to compete.

Yu Kamiya plans to make "fate/zero" but has no idea of making the fifth Holy Grail War in a short period of time, since "fate/zero" is in front, then Yu Kamiya will not be affected by the factors of the original work to a large extent, and there is no need to think about the constraints of chaos, if you plan to make the fifth Holy Grail War in the future, then it should also be the reset of "fate/zero" by Yu Kamiya as the previous work. He has repeatedly experimented with many ideas in the space of consciousness, using the most ideal effect to transform the novel into a real-world replication.

At the very least, this Holy Grail War is worthy of the name of war.

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In June, the animation of "Madoka Magical Girl" has not yet ended, and the animation production company of [Edge's Sky] is in full swing planning the animation production of "Fate/Zero". Character Yu Kamiya still has some thoughts about the original characters of "Fate/Zero", so he took the approach of drawing a general character sketch for Uehara Emueki and Gogen Ruri to try to perfect, in which the image of Saber is personally responsible for Yuu Kamiya, except for some changes to the details of the costume, the overall character design remains the same.

The promotion of "Fate/Zero" was not carried out with much fanfare, because at this time, "Madoka Magica" was still the backbone of the [Edge-no-Kong] animation production company, and the increase in popularity of the animation was still crazy, and it was hard to imagine what kind of sensation the end would bring, and Yuki Kamiya was not stupid enough to wait to promote the new work during the explosion of the power point of "Madoka Magica".

"Madoka Magical Girl" has been broadcast on TV to the twentieth episode, only four episodes away from the end, this part of the plot also belongs to the play of the protagonist team, Xiao Meiyan, the character who runs through the clues throughout the whole story, has begun to dig deeper, the twentieth episode [Witch Night] has come, and the twenty-first episode will reveal the identity of the Witch of Xiao Mei and the true reincarnation of the world she has been controlling. The overall plot ends with the final reversal and conflict, using the vision of Xiao Meiyan turning into a witch to depict how deep the bond between her and Kameka is, how twisted and dark it is, and finally through the ending of Kame's self-sacrifice to become [Yuanshen] to end all cause and effect.

Since the seventeenth episode, the progress of the entire plot has not let the audience breathe. To say how popular the current "Magical Girl Madoka" is in Japan, Kamiya Yu himself can't say, what is certain is that with a wide range of social influence, the animation ending has surpassed the popularity of the original work in the original world before it has been broadcast, Kame Mado, Xiao Miyan, Miki Sayaka, Sakura Kyoko, and Yama Meijie The five characters occupy the top five of the annual animation female popularity list, and the specific rankings are Sakura Apricot> Xiao Miyan> Ba Asami> Miki Sayaka >Kamedo, the fifth-place Kameka shook off the sixth-ranked heroine of "Mobile Suit 007" several times the vote difference.

At this time, Yuu Kamiya's young generation in Japan may not be interested in animation, but they must know something about "Madoka Magical Girl".

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"Sure enough, it's still an izakaya, an izakaya or something, it's the best!" Yuuki Chinatsu drank a large glass of beer in one gulp, and the sweet and astringent taste of the wine made her breathe a long sigh of relief, and the white foam still stayed on her lips after putting down the glass. After drinking the beer, he picked up a skewer of barbecue on the table and muttered: "What a number of Yokiya Hashijiro sushi restaurants, except that the sushi tastes better, it's not fun at all, and sure enough, it's still the highest in the izakaya, long live the barbecue!" Long live beer! Long live the atmosphere! ”

The corners of Kamiya's mouth twitched, it was a little strange to bring the "girl" of Yuki Chixia to the izakaya, but now there is an urge to cover her face and jump away from her. Just now, Yuu Kamiya and Chixia Yuuki have already gone to the so-called Sukiya Hashijiro sushi restaurant, as the most well-known sushi restaurant in Japan, the price is naturally not cheap, and if you eat it openly, one meal is equivalent to the salary of the average Japanese white-collar worker for a whole month. In such a stylish sushi restaurant, even Chinatsu Yuki is embarrassed to open her throat and talk, and most of the sake served is homemade Japanese sake in small glasses.

However, Kamiya Yu didn't see the "sushi god" who appeared on TV, but his disciple made sushi for Kamiya Yu. Yu Kamiya knew that the master's hands were professionally disinfected and he was still very unaccustomed to seeing others pinch sushi with their hands in front of him, so Yu Kamiya didn't continue to eat after a few bites, if he was given professional-grade ingredients Yu Kamiya was confident that he could still make sushi at the same level, Yuki Chixia needless to say that his eyes were shining from the beginning, and he looked like a big gluttonous cat with saliva.

Yuki Chinatsu was brought by Yu Kamiya herself, and her personal bills were paid by Yu Kamiya, otherwise Shuichi Kitagawa, a senior animation supervisor, would have to drink the northwest wind this month. Yu Kamiya focused on exchanging ideas about animation production with Shuichi Kitagawa, who was the animation supervisor of Yuu Kamiya's first real contact in the real world, and a lot of accumulated practical experience and understanding made Yuu Kamiya refreshing and interested.

Previously, Kamiya Yuu was in a state of self-study.,Although there is a perfect animation supervision and teaching in the last world, there is a lack of actual experience verification.,For example, which angle is best to show the happy expression of the character.,The construction of a close-up storyboard when a character is very happy.,How to highlight the intensity of the battle scene, etc.,Occasionally I will talk to Fujiwara Tiger and Yuki Chixia, a gluttonous cat who only cares about eating.,The atmosphere is very harmonious after a meal.。

The only problem is that after eating sushi at Sukiya Hashijiro Sushi Restaurant, Chixia Yuuki still insists on coming to the izakaya to drink, and the fresh yakiniku with delicious sauce does attract Yuu Kamiya's attention more than sushi.

"What's wrong? Don't you drink it? If you don't drink it, it's a drinking party! How to pronounce the first word of the cocktail party, the answer is wine~~ pull! Yu is a man, even if you don't like to drink, you have to learn, if you don't learn, you can't! Yuuki Chixia grunted and poured herself a sip of beer, and her flushed little face held back a smile and taught earnestly in the tone of her senior.

It's not that Kamiya Yu can't drink, but he really doesn't like the smell of alcohol, and thinks that even the cola in the vending machine is much better than expensive sake, Kamiya Yu picked up a bunch of grilled vegetables and stuffed it into her mouth and said perfunctorily: "It's almost nine o'clock, I'm serving you, I'm really not afraid of stomach trouble at night after eating so much." ”

"It's okay~! Never mind~! It's the other stomach that holds the wine. ”

――Dome often says that desserts and snacks have another stomach, and what the hell is wine?

Kamiya smiled and picked up a skewer of barbecue and ate it, looking at Yuki Chinatsu's contented appearance, which was very funny. If you say that Aoi Morishita and Uehara Aetsuki have played the role of sisters in the past few years, Yuki Chixia is a willful sister who needs to be taken care of, and her natural blonde hair is often tied into a double ponytail with girly style clothes taste, Yuki Chixia is younger than Kamiya Dome no matter how you look at it, well~ It's this headache sister who is a whole round older than him, likes to drink beer, and likes to speak in an uncle-like tone.

Eat and drink to your heart's content, Kamiya Yu helped the drunk Yuki Chixia back to the [Edge of the Sky] animation production company, at present, the company does not need to rush to work, so there is no staff at this point, and the dark piece has to be Kamiya Yu himself to open the electric switch. Where there is no one, Kamiya Yu is much bolder, and the state of supporting Yuki Chixia has been changed to a princess hug, and Yuki Chinatsu is still restless and gnaws on Kamiya Yu's neck, muttering "It's not delicious" and "tasteless".

"Qianxia, wake up~ Wake up, it's already at your house." Yu Kamiya opened the door of the office, put Chixia Yuki on the table, patted her little face, and got a silly smile in response, helplessly took out the futon from under the desk and laid it out.

After a while, Yuki Chixia raised her little head in a daze, first looked at the surrounding environment in confusion for a while, then reacted and muttered, "What, I'm back." After saying that, he yawned again, and slowly walked to the futon laid out by Yuu Kamiya and lay down.

Kamiya Yu had a black line on his face, and reached out to grab her collar: "Since I'm awake, I'm going to take a shower and sleep, what does it look like to be drunk." ”

"What~ I'm so tired now~ I'm going to sleep, it's so troublesome, are you my mother?" Yuuki Chixia shouted out unhappily, but obediently took out her change of clothes from the drawer on the side, and made a grimace at Yuu Kamiya before leaving the office, "Whoever peeks is a puppy!" ”

"Don't say it, I look like I'm going to do that."

Yuu Kamiya's face darkened, not to mention that the company's bathroom is a private sealed mode, but Yuki Chixia's small body really makes it a little difficult for him to be interested. After waiting for about ten minutes, Yuki Chinatsu returned to the office in pink pajamas after taking a bath, her cheeks were still crimson, and she still looked satisfied and stupid, and her eyes didn't look so confused.

Kamiya Yu waved his hand: "Then I'll go back first, and then call me if there's anything." ”

Yuki Chixia came to the futon and sat down and glared at Kamiya and said unhappily: "Haven't you had fun yet, play fps with me!" ”

"I'm sorry, I'm going to be angry if I don't go back to the firmament."

Yuki Chixia pursed his lips and looked at Yu Kamiya angrily, until he ignored this look and shouted with a crying voice when he was about to leave the office: "Dome, dome, dome, I know Dome all day long, there is no one else in your eyes, I don't care!" Warm me a little more, don't you want to play fps with me! I don't care! I don't care! ”

"Let's have fun! FPS is also fun, so let's play it! ”

"Yo, please! It's a request of a lifetime. ”

Turn on the kid's mess mode!

Kamiya was speechless: "Your life is so worthless, it's just that, this is the last time, I'll go back at ten o'clock at the latest." ”

"Huo ~ Huo." Yuki Chixia waved her pink fist excitedly, patted the position next to her and said, "Here~Here~ Sit here!" Here's the gamepad, know how to play it. ”

"Don't underestimate me, the technology is much better than yours."

"It's just a leisure, but the tone is quite arrogant."

Yu Kamiya himself is also a game lover.,Besides, Yuki Chixia is still playing a popular fps game.,Of course you know the operation.。 As soon as he sat down, Yuki Chixia this Niko drilled into his arms, and the fragrance of the shower gel seemed to waft into Kamiya Yu's nose with a hint of wine, she found a comfortable position to sit down and said satisfactorily: "Well, that's it, put down your handle a little, otherwise it will block my view." ”

"Yes~ Yes, it's all up to you." Kamiya Yu shrugged his shoulders and said, it's not strange to Yuki Chiatsu's intimacy, Yuki Chixia has a targeted attitude towards Kamiya Yu in front of outsiders, once no one still maintains the "tiredness" of rubbing, all kinds of performances are unconsciously close to a lot, in addition, Yuuki Chixia has never been taboo about physical contact with Kamiya Yu.

"Papapapa~!"

"Bang Bang Bang~!"

"Bang bang bang!" Fierce gunshots rang out, and Yuuki Chixia's FPS technology was terrible, not that Yu Kamiya, as a teammate, estimated how many times he died was not enough.

However, not five minutes into the game, Yuu Kamiya noticed that Chinatsu Yuuki's character had stopped, and the handle had slipped off, and he fell asleep soundly in his arms.

"Good night, Chinatsu."

PS: I regret very much that I didn't write this book as a transformation essay! Seriously, don't laugh. If I write a transformation essay, the protagonist is the standard comic sister type, and it can be cute or cold, offensive and acceptable, it can be a lily in the open, eat tofu, and there is a lily soul close to the type of wife in FZ. (To be continued.) )