I feel that the plot is too dragged on

The content of Surabaya Sword Valley is actually not very much

The text I used for plot foreshadowing and description was somewhat redundant

Things that can be explained in a few words

It often becomes a chapter that describes a fight

I also felt awkward after watching it myself

So give it a try

In the next episode, the pace of the battle will be accelerated

I try to keep the words I want to use to describe the battle as little as possible

On the basis of not changing the original plot

Try to write down the details that should be presented

And the superfluous plot that can be brushed aside is eliminated as much as possible

............

We hope you will support this book!

I've tried to write some words before, and I've published them

But the results were somewhat unsatisfactory

In addition, in the past, it was all superficial

The mind is not on writing a book

As a result, they often give up halfway

Not this time

Write a story of your own

It's a long-cherished wish I made when I was a child

Let's do it together!

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