() In the whole article, the two most difficult characters to write about are Xiuyi and the fox, they are too complicated.

Xiuyi, he is the son-in-law of the gate valve family, and he has many court etiquettes to be regularized since he was born, and at the same time, he has been accepted as a closed disciple by the world's masters since he was a child.

Fox, he was born a fox demon, and when he first changed into a human form, he even had to twist his waist when he first changed into a human form, and I was going to write him as enchanting and charming, evil and crazy (forgive me for being bohemian and uninhibited, aren't such characters essential in other novels, hehehehe...... But as the plot develops, under the gags of the ninth year, he slowly grows up, beyond my control, as if he has a life of his own (thanks to the ninth day of the year for saving the little fox's vulgar path).

Many people say that Xiuyi and the fox's personalities are sometimes very similar, and this has to start with the fox turning from a demon to a human.

In one chapter, Chu Jiu mentions that when he first met the fox, the fox had just taken on a human form, and Chu Jiu was the first human to come into contact with the fox in human form.

In fact, the fox is a child growing up, there is a clip I don't know if you remember, he used a carriage by the lake at the beginning to break down, and he laughed very happily after hitting the ninth day of junior high school, it was a laugh after the treacherous plan succeeded, and it was a little silly, he wouldn't hide it at all. For the blood of the ninth year, he played cosy close to the ninth day, how could he twist his little waist enchantingly at this time, this is the first step of the ninth year to save him invisibly. Later, the more he came into contact, the more he was attracted to Chu Jiu, but Chu Jiu kept laughing at him Long Yang, and rebellion was the second step of Chu Jiu to save him.

How to rebel? How to rebel?

Therefore, the fox didn't twist his waist at all, and put away his bewitchingness, and his eyes naturally focused on the nearest man beside Chu Jiu, who was Yang Xiuyi.

At that time, the fox was still a child's heart, and it can be said that Yang Xiuyi was like his mentor, who invisibly influenced him a lot, and his personality also had a lot of subtle changes. But like the image, the fox is still a fox. The biggest difference between him and Xiuyi is that Xiuyi has the natural domineering and possessiveness of the gate lord in his body, and the fox is a real outsider, he can well restrain his feelings for Chu Jiu, and carefully maintain his friendship with Chu Jiu and Xiuyi. Only before the ghost gate is closed, do you allow yourself to break out once.

In addition, if someone saves or helps, Xiuyi will say thank you (everyone will say, orz), but the fox will not, Chu Jiu saved him, he only thought about a pot of fish soup...... (It's not that the fox is unkind, I believe that if the children's shoes who gave the fish soup at that time were bullied, the fox would definitely help him, if he hadn't given the fish soup, he would have laughed directly with the soy sauce bottle with his character of looking down on the affairs of the rivers and lakes...... ）

As for Xiuyi, he grew up in the mountains since he was a child, and his master had great hopes for him, and he basically didn't think about the love of men and women. If it weren't for the ninth day of the first month, he might marry a litter of girls that his parents picked for him when he reached the age, and then give birth to a litter of children to breed incense for his Yang family.

But he has Tian Chujiu in his life.

In fact, Chu Jiu is also the mentor of Xiuyi.

Chu Jiu's body personality and life experience are very special, and he is a turtle attribute, so he hides in trouble. When I met such a girl, Yang Xiuyi, who had to be windy and rainy since she was a child, and had to shout to a hundred Lang Zhong to serve Uncle Feng when she sneezed, learned to forbear. But the temper is really unbearable, sometimes the cranky thinking of the first nine, the nonsense will drive people crazy, it just so happens that the ninth body will not be injured, if the ninth body is the same as ordinary people, beat up and lie on the g for three or five or six days, do you see that this kid surnamed Yang will still do it in the future. Therefore, the ninth day of the first year also taught Yang Xiuyi to be violent. (A flock of crows croaks over...... I'm just telling a joke, hehehe...... ）

Xiuyi's character is the most complicated, and there is a very significant difference between him and the fox, one word, crazy.

His birth and pen fun pavilion www.biquge.info inevitably the conceit and arrogance in his bones, but this madness is not the madness of no one in his eyes, and he is still very cultivated in cultivating people and things.

I think the most reflective of his madness is not the scene of saving Chu Jiu on the Hongru Stone Platform, but the place where he was seriously injured and humiliated Yao Niang without knowing whether he was alive or dead. Speaking of which, let's talk about my two favorite details in the article, one is Xiuyi shouting the bracelet finch "flower demon", I don't know why, I feel so loved. The second is that when Chu Jiu gave the bracelet a drunken dream of Nanke, Xiu Yi ran to let the bracelet bird decide for himself, which is one of the places where I think he is most careful and considerate of Chu Jiu.

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When I write an essay, I often wonder if this detail will be illogical, abrupt, or unrealistic.

Although the novel is originally unrealistic and illusory, not to mention that I am a whimsical Xianxia text.

But I still want to write better, including their character dialogue, I don't like to be too strong in the way of expression, whether it is feelings or details, I tend to be long-winded.

Although Xiuyi and Chu Jiu are often like glue in the back, making others disgusting and speechless (thanks to the good mountains and rivers of Wangyun Cliff, they have developed such a good character that is shameless), but in fact, the relationship between the two of them has really been a long stream of water along the way, and it is not vigorous at all (I hate vigorous, I always feel that there is nothing after the passion).

Because it's a first-person text, all the visuals are the visions of the ninth year, and in the first volume, there was a lot of foreshadowing about the ninth year, so at first Xiuyi was scolded by many readers, and even a reader compared him to a policeman, saying that after the heroine escaped by herself, he was only good at it, and he ran to clean up the scene (Volume 1, Hall of the Dead). In fact, at that time, the turbidity of the ninth year had not been written, and this reader had no idea that Xiuyi could not find her at all.

Speaking of which, I have to say that I really don't like that as soon as the female protagonist is in danger, those male protagonists fall from the sky. I don't want my heroine to be stunning, how powerful, I just hope that she can be strong, and when no one is protecting, she can be alone, and she has enough courage and responsibility. In fact, you can also see in the article that many times even if Chu Jiu thinks that he is dead, he has to fight to the death, which is a kind of unyielding and tenacious.

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