"Morning, how's your cultivation going?" Ren Kongwen asked not uncomfortably at all.

Lu Zichen shook his head: "Today is not as big as yesterday. ”

Ren Kongwen waved his hand in an old-fashioned manner, and said earnestly: "Cultivation is not something that can be achieved overnight, you must take your time, be down-to-earth, and move forward step by step." Don't be anxious, calm down. ”

After saying that, he felt that his mood suddenly improved. I didn't expect to feel so good about being a master, and it seems that I can consider accepting a few more disciples in the future.

After listening to him, Lu Zichen nodded and said, "Master, I will work hard." ”

Ren Kongwen smiled with satisfaction, and was about to turn on the computer to continue the code, and at the same time see how the response to the three chapters published yesterday was.

"Master, aren't you eating?" Lu Zichen saw his movements and hurriedly asked.

"Huh? Are you cooking? Ren Kongwen looked at him in surprise, because when he was alone before, he had no money and couldn't cook, so he ate one meal a day.

I didn't expect that after accepting the apprentice, good things will come one after another!

"Originally, I wanted to wait for the master to get up and make breakfast, but now we will have lunch." Lu Zichen wondered in his heart, what kind of life did this person live before.

Ren Kongwen was so moved, he stepped forward and patted Lu Zichen on the shoulder, "It's so happy to have a good apprentice like you as a teacher!" Go cook it. ”

Listening to the first half of the sentence, Lu Zichen was quite happy, but when he heard the end, the corners of his mouth twitched, and he went to the kitchen to cook.

Taking advantage of this time, Ren Kongwen opened his author's background, and was immediately hit by dismal clicks, favorites, and 0 comments.

I still remember that I was on the website that was seized, how to say that it was also a big cry!

Alas...... I really overestimated myself before.

Must be introspected!

Ren Kongwen did not lose his fighting spirit like this, this article he expected to be a big length, and now it is only 10,000 words. There was still so much time for him to work hard, and he remembered that when he was on that website before, some readers said that his choice of words and sentences was a bit too literary, and he couldn't read some places.

Thinking of this, he re-read what he had written, and changed some of the words that were too jerky to bring into this small world.

Before he finished revising, Lu Zichen called him to eat.

Looking at the table full of dishes full of color and aroma, Ren Kongwen saw that his apprentice was more satisfied.

After eating with a big appetite, Ren Kongwen called out to Lu Zichen, "You come over first to take a look at the article I wrote and see if there is anything else that needs to be revised." ”

There are natives of a small world around him, and if you don't ask him, it's a tyrannical thing.

Lu Zichen walked over, saw his master's pen name - Immortal Eternal at a glance, and asked, "It's better to modify this." ”

"Huh?" Ren Kongwen was stunned, he didn't bother to think about the pen name before, so he just used it.

"You have to know that the site has been shut down, and you start over now, and it's better to use a new pen name." Lu Zichen explained.

Ren Kongwen nodded clearly: "You're right, then I'll change it to 'I want to become an immortal'." ”

Lu Zichen: "...... Is it so simple and crude? ”

"When you reach the step of becoming an immortal, you will understand my feelings." Ren Kongwen sighed.

Lu Zichen didn't speak, patiently looked at his master's article, and had to say that it was very well written.

The plot, logic, structure, and writing are all quite good, and the only deficiency may be the problem of using words, which is a bit incompatible with the online text.

Lu Zichen said his thoughts directly, Ren Kongwen nodded, opened another document and said, "This is part of the revision I just made, how about you take a look at this time?" ”

After reading it, Lu Zichen found that it had changed a lot, although there was still a big gap with the traditional online text, but it was much better than before. Then he pointed out a few places, telling his master that these places were still a little jerky, and it was better to change them.

Ren Kongwen frowned and said, "If these places are changed, I feel that the overall style of the article will change." ”

After hearing this, Lu Zichen pondered for a while and said: "Then don't change it first, maintaining your own style is the most important thing." Of course, I don't know how to write essays, so why don't I try to sign a contract and ask the editor when the time comes. ”

"Signing?" Ren Kongwen is a little unfamiliar with this term.

Lu Zichen explained to him, and by the way, he helped his master hook up with the editors of the relevant categories. He didn't know much about the site himself, so he clicked on the first one.

Ren Kongwen heard that he could make money after signing the contract, and he looked forward to it at once. Now the money in his card is all given by his master, and he is not very comfortable spending it.

When he was in the fairy world, he often did some sect tasks, not only with contribution points to earn, but also with spirit stone rewards.

Although his net worth in the fairy world is not particularly rich, he still has a very good life.

When Lu Zichen was practicing, he was changing the article while waiting for the editor's reply.

Lu Zichen helped him hook up with the first editor of the pure love group, that is, the team leader.

Generally speaking, the team leader is no longer signing new people. So Ren Kongwen was hit again, and he was rejected.

He looked at the reply with a heart, feeling that why was it so unpleasant?

Before he could calm his mood, he found that his apprentice, Lu Zichen, had actually drawn qi into his body!

It's only the next day!

It's still in a small world where the aura is so thin, not to mention that it's because of the Spirit Gathering Array, which is only arranged by lower-grade spirit stones, not to mention that there is a Spirit Gathering Array wherever you cultivate! Unless there are no spirit stones, there is no way.

What to say about his current mood, there is no jealousy, but envy is inevitable.

Who wouldn't want to have great talent?

The more I think about Ren Kongwen, the more I look forward to it, hoping that I also have such a good talent, in that case, will I have become an immortal now?

Just when he thought about it more and more, the speed of the spiritual power in his body became faster, and faster and faster, faintly out of control.

Fortunately, at this time, a small golden sword in Ren Kongwen's sea of knowledge shook slightly, making him suddenly wake up from his imagination.

Discovering that the spiritual power was about to get out of control, he hurriedly ran the exercises, and after nine weeks, the spiritual power in his body had returned to normal.

He wiped the cold sweat on his forehead, so dangerous!

He almost went mad just now, but fortunately, his natal magic weapon broke through the rules of the small world to help him.

Otherwise, he would be dead by now.