Chapter 130: You Are Enron (Sixth Update)
An Ran saw the series of words "rely on", and he didn't know why, but a very refreshing feeling suddenly rose in his heart.
A little proudly, he sent a picture of wide-eyed and daze-stricken.
"Damn!" Duan Xinyu typed out the eighteenth word, and then there was a series of forced questions: "You are Enron?" β
"You're my favorite boss, An Ran?"
"Aren't you the Enron who sings?"
"How can you straddle two realms and be both geniuses?"
"Are you really human?"
"Or are you actually an alien? Have been hiding in the world and waiting for the right time to lure your people to destroy the earth? β
"Also, you weren't like that before! How innocent you used to be, but not as smart as you are now. β
An Ran couldn't help it: "It turns out that simplicity is stupid." β
Duan Xinyu: "No, no, no, you are the eternal god in my heart, guiding me in the direction of progress." I've decided! I'm going to learn to write a novel from you! β
An Ran laughed: "What do you want to write?" β
"I like a lot of genres, but I've been reading basketball novels lately. The protagonist is amazing at basketball! All those who are stronger than him are being surpassed by him one by one. Duan Xinyu excitedly chatted with An Ran about what he had done recently.
"So do you want to write a basketball novel?" An Ran was there to be a good one.
"Can I really?" Duan Xinyu asked with some uncertainty.
"Of course you can, the potential of people is endless!" An Ran began to take himself as an example: "Look at me, I am writing songs, singing, and novels, are they all colorful?" Also, my academic performance has not fallen behind at all! β
"But I'm dumber than you." Although Duan Xinyu was very reluctant to admit it, he still bravely poked out his weakness.
"No one is born dumber than anyone else. Unless you're lazy, it's hopeless. An Ran posted a picture of his hands: "Look at Liu Chong, he learns music with me every day, and now he is not the same and his academic performance has improved a lot?" Also, he's playing in the city, and you don't even see how many fans he has like him! β
"I see it." Duan Xinyu was a little depressed: "Even fat people can be so popular." Looks like I'm really lazy. β
"Then be diligent, let's discuss how to write your basketball novel." Enron said.
So, in the next two hours, An Ran and Duan Xinyu discussed the writing techniques that can be used in basketball novels, and where are the cool and poisonous points of basketball novels.
In the end, An Ran encouraged Duan Xinyu to write a few chapters first, and then he had the right to practice.
After saying 88 to each other, Enron turned off QQ and logged in to the author's background of Qingfeng Pavilion.
After glancing at the number of jΓΉ, An Ran began to code words.
After two hours of coding and completing three chapters with a total of 9,000 words, An Ran sent out all the chapters at once.
Now during the winter vacation, he has a lot of time to squander every day, so naturally he doesn't have to be as tight every day as he was in the singing competition, and he has to look at the clock from time to time.
The next day, Duan Xinyu came uninvited, and the first thing he said when he saw An Ran was: "You are An Dada?" β
"Big?" An Ran was stunned for a moment, and then realized that this was calling himself.
"I'm not big, I'm just your classmate and buddy." An Ran touched his nose, smiled and invited Duan Xinyu to sit down, and personally poured him a glass of water: "Is there a problem so soon?" β
"An Dada, please accept my worship!" Duan Xinyu's eyes were full of flowers: "I admire you!" β
An Ran was a little embarrassed: "Don't say that, everyone is good friends, what can't you say well?" By the way, I asked you to write a beginning yesterday, did you write it? β
"Written, more than 5,000 words." Duan Xinyu said how he conceived and started writing last night, and at the same time took out a USB flash drive from his trouser pocket and inserted it into Enron's computer case.
An Ran answered Duan Xinyu's question while scanning the novel that Duan Xinyu wrote last night: "You should write simply, and the beginning should not be too complicated, otherwise readers will not be able to read it." Readers read the novel in a light-hearted atmosphere, and you will only annoy them if you write like this. β
"Then why did I read suspense and horror novels before, and I wrote them all at the beginning of their books!" Duan Xinyu was a little unconvinced.
"A type of novel can only have a few ways to match, and if you force other types of writing, you will only end up with a four-way difference." An Ran said earnestly that he had encountered such an embarrassing problem in his previous life.
"You've written very well here, and as soon as the protagonist appears, it attracts the reader's attention. There must be something different from the supporting character in the protagonist's body, and you have written a few more sentences on the protagonist here, so that the reader will know who the protagonist is at once. Very good. Enron said.
Duan Xinyu's whole person was praised and embarrassed.
"On the whole, your level of 5,000 words is average, but the basic beginning is clear, I don't know what kind of plot you will write later?" An Ran read the entire beginning, and then began to ask Duan Xinyu questions.
"Uh, I'm thinking about making the protagonist a little better." Duan Xinyu thought for a while and said.
"You must not have an outline, do you?" An Ran said very strictly: "If you don't have an outline, it means that you don't have a general grasp of the overall context of the whole book." You don't know exactly what you're going to write in the next chapter, and you don't know what the next chapter is going to be written in the next chapter. I don't know what kind of ups and downs you will bring to the reader in the last few chapters. β
"And so much learning?" Duan Xinyu's eyes widened and he asked in surprise.
"Of course, you think novels are just for people's amusement? Everything in this world actually has a deep truth. Write more, think more, and you'll soon understand. Enron said.
"Then I'll make up the outline." Duan Xinyu unplugged the USB flash drive, and was about to go back to his home to write an outline.
"Since you're here, you can stay here with me for half a day. I teach you how to write an outline, you refine your outline yourself, see what you can write, how to write that makes readers feel excited, and makes your chapters flow more smoothly. These are the basic skills you need to do as a writer. Of course, I'll also write an outline of a novel about basketball, and if you can't do it, you can follow the outline I gave you. Enron said.
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(To be continued.) )