Recently, the bar friend @ Luxia Gray Ai gave the author some suggestions and some encouragement, the author feels very happy, and readers are welcome to put forward their opinions, as long as they don't spray, they don't refuse.

Extract:

Lu: Really good article, don't say anything else, just say that a lot of Conan men wear fanfiction, generally Conan automatic male number two, and then the thinking is extremely naïve compared with the pig's feet, and the ability is also thrown by the male protagonist A few streets, it's basically a foil, but the text of a sauce is not, Conan is not a god, the male protagonist is not omnipotent, he will make mistakes, he will be confused, encourage each other, and enlighten each other, which is very good

Zuo: I'm relieved when you say that, and I'm really happy. I've always been careful to write for fear of ruining Conan's image. Anyway, I'm really happy

Lu: A sauce, this article is relatively good in men's wear, although the character is still a little collapsed, and there is a fatal violation of a certain Ke's character, but it doesn't matter, as long as a sauce is happy to write, and then someone is happy to read it, after all, a work, an author can't satisfy everyone's tastes, in short, even Su likes a sauce very much

Made:Thank you O(∩_∩)O,But there are shortcomings and I want to point them out.,About Conan in the text...... I've kept him from tears.

Lu: Regarding the problem that the character is a little collapsed, A-chan has been writing better and better, and there is basically very little that can be said about it now, as for the fatal flaw I said, I really can't say it, because if A-chan wants to change this, then this article will not be established at all, and when the time comes, look at me, where will I cry? Besides, as long as there is no major problem with logic, why do other F care so much

Z: Okay, but my heart is tickling

l (the author is really getting lazy): Itchy? Tickle what?

Z: What are the shortcomings, even if I don't change them, I have to know

L: Well, I still don't want it, even if I don't have a habit of complaining about the society, I don't have a hobby for finding fault with other people's writings, and if it suits my taste, I don't see it, after all, it's all written by people's brains, and we must respect the author's labor results

Z: It's okay, just point it out, this is the first time I've written about fanfiction, and if there are any shortcomings, I need to improve

L: That's it, to put it simply, Conan of 73 is still in a category of jurisprudence, how to say that Ke's character is simple, Ke is an absolute supporter of the law, and the identity of the pig's foot itself is a big problem, and if Ke doesn't send him in, it will be good to become a comrade-in-arms? Not to mention the villa bases and private collection of guns and even munitions in the back

According to the original book, a certain Ke will never be able to accept it, and black charcoal will not accept it either, of course, the identity of the pig's foot is an established one, and weapons are also needed to fight the organization, if I had seen this article earlier, there would be a way to make this change more natural (for example, Lan He and Ye encountered life danger because of the organization or something), and it was permissible to change the ridiculous so-called righteous heart of a certain Ke and black charcoal

This will not conflict too much with the character of the original book, after all, if there is an important person in distress as a premise, the personality change will at least have a reason to say, it will not be so sudden, now if there is a fairy shell from the Tucao Society, come and see this article, it is not what I said, it will definitely not sound very good, the above PS: This vegetarian a sauce is not to make you angry

I can't stop writing

There is also a fatal flaw, that is, the other side of the world revealed by the identity of the pig's foot, according to the character of a certain Ke, I really can't tell how he will react, anyway, he will definitely not accept it so calmly

The above mess is a bunch of A sauce, so you should look at nonsense, don't take it seriously

Z: I've thought about what you've said, but I don't think Conan and Hattori are actually so dull, because according to Emperor Xue's words, it is actually against the law to keep Gray Yuan (because Gray Yuan used to work for a terrorist organization, so he is half a terrorist), and your statement is also very pertinent, I have thought about all of this, don't worry

It can be seen that you are very attentive to my work, and I am already very happy when I see this!

L: The problem of the mourning hall can only be said to be needed by the plot, and the mourning hall is forced, and the situation of the pig's feet is not the same thing at all, and it is useless to say that these messes are useless, and the text of the most important vegetarian A sauce is very suitable for the appetite of the couple

Z: Thank you for your guidance