A note on the revision of this book
It has been more than a month since the book was released, and during this time, thanks to everyone's attention, I felt the joy of writing a book. During this period, some book friends raised the current problems of this book, and I looked back and found that some of the problems were indeed stricter. To that end, I spent four days fixing the relevant issues, adjusting the story outline, and republishing it starting today.
The first problem is a question of rhythm. Some book friends say that the progress is too fast, and I strongly agree with this. It's too easy for the protagonist to get the technique, and at the beginning of the book, it's a bit omnipotent, and in the later stages, I'm afraid I can't control it myself. To this end, I modified the relevant settings to make some vague settings jù, such as the protagonist can redeem huàn credits from the Tiandao credit card through guò real money, and then buy technology and products. In addition, there are some small adjustments, the purpose is to make the use of Tiandao credit card simpler and clearer, after all, the setting is only to promote the plot, which is too complicated to affect reading.
The second problem is the problem of the male protagonist and the female protagonist, and this aspect has also been adjusted, including the identity background of the two. The emotional line of this book should be very long, from the two acquaintances, acquaintance to marriage, childbirth, including the plot after the two get married, and even the protagonist's children have a lot of plots, so this adjustment is also necessary in my opinion.
Regarding the emotional scene, I originally wanted to write a love at first sight, but now it seems to have failed, the image of the heroine is too thin, and it has not achieved the desired effect at all, and I will slowly correct this later. The actor's family background has also been criticized, especially the scene where he doesn't go home for several years, which has also been modified. The purpose of the revision is to make the image of the protagonist fuller, and also to be able to get more recognition from everyone.
The third problem is the plot. At present, this book has just begun, and the protagonist's current skills are too many and too scattered, and the plot of this guide is too scattered, and it looks like a running account. This evaluation is very pertinent, so the adjustment of the plot is the focus. No matter what the ability is, I will do my best to make changes so that the plot will not be dull and boring.
The last thing to talk about is the update issue. Because of the previous adjustments, there have been few updates in the past two days, and I apologize to the book friends who like this book, and I hope you can forgive me. I'm actually very afraid of reading book reviews and being scolded, but even if I am scolded, I have to read book reviews because some of them do have good opinions. For that, I am also deeply grateful. When I decided to make adjustments, I was hesitant, but I thought that if I didn't take advantage of this opportunity to make adjustments, it would be difficult to have a chance in the future, so I finally made up my mind.
After the tweaks, it will be re-released from the first chapter. Due to the short time, I can only release 20 chapters today, and after that, I will do my best to update 3 chapters every day, and if the reason for work is to guide zhì to update and decrease sometimes, I will make up for the chapters I owe within three days. I don't know if I'll be able to keep it up to the end of the book, but I'd like to give it a try, so let's start with a one-month deadline.
Thank you for your support!