Bathed in the warmth of the early spring sun, she wakes up in the gentle morning light every day, and sleeps quietly in the quiet night. A qiē is so beautiful, everyone's face has the message of spring written, and even the breath seems to be fermented by spring, and there is a drunkenness in the breath.

Liu Yunxi sat at the table, with a calm expression on her face, and a shallow smile on her eyelids.

"Sister, they're too cheating." As soon as class ended, Ouyang ran over and threw an essay in front of her.

"Hurry up and get to your composition class." Chen Sisi rubbed his hands on the side, "Our whole class writes novels and kills them." ”

Liu Yunxi glanced at the book, it was from Huang Zixi in the second class, she opened it casually, one page, two pages, three pages, it didn't seem to be finished, so she picked up the book seriously and turned it seriously. God, she actually wrote twenty-four pages, and one composition was almost finished!

Then she saw Ouyang and Chen Sisi with expressions spraying dog blood.

"What did you just say? Kill them? Liu Yunxi asked.

"Yes, you see, this essay took us a few lessons, and my sisters are not so idle, you know, sister." Ouyang flipped Huang Zixi's notebook into a loud noise.

This semester's essay review, Liu Yunxi handed it over to some students, and after the students finished correcting it, she did a second review. Not only the students themselves are criticized, but also the people who review them. When Ouyang came over, she was in the process of reviewing for the second time, and found that the students who had reviewed looked good, and some of them were more careful than her, far exceeding her expectations.

Now that Ouyang is so excited, they know that Huang Zixi's composition must have taken them a lot of time to come over so affectionately.

She read page by page, and really did a lot of side criticism.

"What did she write?" She asked, looking at it.

"Look, who knows what the hell." Chen Sisi picked up Ouyang and ran away.

I don't know what the hell, you changed so hard?

Looking at the two cheerful backs, Liu Yunxi smiled.

Then she opened Huang Zixi's composition, read it carefully, read it, read it, and she was happy. Laughter continues.

The humanistic pen written is humorous and witty, and the person who changed it is even more funny. Let's show you a few highlights!

Text: Long bangs cover her eyebrows and eyes, hiding her indifferent face. On windy days, the breeze can always pull up some hair. But she never could blow her bangs.

Underneath the sentence are bright red, thick wavy lines.

M.R.: Don't ask me why I like this sentence, it seems to leave some suspense, as if there is some secret.

Text: After the head teacher's constipated expression, an unfamiliar face appeared.

Batch: Just ask, put one person behind one expression. Sister Huang, do you think something is a little wrong?

Wen: She was trembling with nervousness because of this......

M.R.: Why is there a "but"? I didn't see any turning point.

Wen: He may be too dazzling but it will make it difficult for her to sleep.

The sentence "or" and "but" are emphasized.

M.R.: What kind of ghostly correlation is this?

Then in the following text, there are no less than ten "or" words, each of which is missing a pinch from the waist. Then the side criticism is such a sentence: "I'm scared of the baby, write a good 'or' word to death." ”

Later, the content of the article was a little sad, and next to the sad paragraph, there was a side comment that made Liu Yunxi spray rice: "Heartbreak, will you be pregnant if you write positively?" ”

What's even funnier is that there is a variety of emojis after each side batch!

Well, one last look at Ouyang's general comment. You'll be able to tell how well she's revised.

The story is well written, the plot is wonderful, and it is interlocking. The baby almost got brought in, oh, how dangerous! The typos are really the highlight of the article, and a kid like me who practices calligraphy must have looked miserable (crying avatar). However, some scenes are very graphic, and there are two scenes that even make me feel the urge to accompany pictures.

This is the end of the composition, and Liu Yunxi has almost laughed out of breath.

It's a complete and complete novel about early love!

No wonder Ouyang said that he didn't know what the hell it was!

Twenty-four pages are sprinkled around, and each paragraph on each page leaves traces of correction. If Ouyang's correction is sorted out, it should be a literary review sprinkled with joy.

Not bad!

Liu Yunxi is still unfinished at the same time. Chen Sisi's words swirled coldly in his ears, "Our class writes novels and kills them." ”

Her meaning is obvious, the people in the second class write such a long novel. Let them change it, it is time-consuming, and it also has the meaning of challenging the show. So the next time she writes, she will definitely call on the class to write an essay like a footwrap to fix them.

If that's the case, come and go. Isn't it a vicious circle?

No, you have to provide positive guidance in time.

Immediately, she arranged a fifteen-minute interview for Huang Zixi in the second class, and another fifteen minutes for Ouyang and Chen Sisi.

It's okay to try to write a novel, but you can't write it in composition class, only in your spare time, and you have to make sure that it doesn't affect other coursework. Like Shangguan, he is also writing novels, but it does not take up study time.

As for Chen Sisi's saying that he wants to reorganize the second class of the family, it is even more ridiculous and absurd. At a young age, the revenge mentality is so strong, and he can't tolerate anyone else, so what happiness will there be in his future life. Especially Ouyang, last time, because she was bent on revenge against Wang Shumin, she led someone to report to Lao Dong's wife, so Wang Shumin had an unbearable life later, and let Lao Dong lose his job for no reason.

Whether Lao Dong is going home or finding a job again, no one knows. The people in the office also seem to be deliberately avoiding mentioning him, so no one knows what his current situation is.

I haven't looked for her in this matter yet, and I'm thinking about taking revenge on the classmates next door, so don't make any trouble when the time comes.

"You don't have anything on your mind but revenge?" Liu Yunxi is coloring.

"Yes, study." Ouyang immediately responded, "We are studying hard every day, can't you see it?" ”

What words? Licentious!

"Who's got fined for not handing in their English homework?" She asked unhurriedly, staring at her.

"Well, this one, an accident, a pure accident." Ouyang was embarrassed, and looked like he was smiling without smiling, "Besides, no one is perfect, and no one is perfect, isn't it?" ”

"Strict sù point!" Liu Yunxi's face was straight, and although his voice was small, it also revealed strength.

Ouyang really had a smile on his face. took the corner of his eye and secretly glanced at Chen Sisi on the side.

"Do you know what I'm looking for you for?"

"Yes." This time, it was Chen Sisi who answered.

"Tell me about it." Liu Yunxi is still very strict.

Chen Sisi glanced at Ouyang Yaya, scratched her head, and said, "Write essays seriously, don't be embarrassed by the second class." ”

"Uh-" Liu Yunxi dragged out her voice and stared at her.

"Don't embarrass the second class." Chen Sisi immediately repeated it and removed the "bei". (To be continued.) )