First, take a day off.

Although I said last month that I should take more and more this month, it is very unreasonable to take a leave of absence on the first day, but I still want to ask!

I've figured out that my rhythm is wrong again by now.

The details are not appropriate, the details should be written in detail, and the details that should not be detailed are also detailed. makes the whole text very procrastinated, and the plot advances very slowly.

I re-read the whole book today, but it's still not enough, and I have to change the outline a little bit later, and the rhythm is really a big problem.

In these two volumes, there has always been the problem that the foreshadowing in the early stage is too long, although I said that the first 700,000 words and 500,000 words are doing foreshadowing, but when I divide them into the volumes, I find that this kind of writing is not good.

The foreshadowing of the first 500,000 words has laid enough foreshadowing and clues for the whole book, and the one million words I have in the back should be unraveled one by one, and the rhythm of the middle and late stages should also follow the clues to advance the plot.

But I found that I was indulging too much on irrelevant things, not that I couldn't inking, but too much inking made the whole rhythm go wrong.

This was the case in the previous volume, which made it anticlimactic.

I actually made the same mistake again in this volume, which should not have been.

Originally, I thought it was a content problem, but when I read Tomato's new book today, I finally understood that there was something missing, and that was the rhythm!

I re-read my book and realized that the problem was the rhythm.

Volumes 1 and 2 of this book are the two best grades, and the rhythm is the most appropriate except for the content.

In the last two volumes, the pace is getting dragging on and the grades are getting worse and worse.

Readers' eyes are bright, although no one said it, or didn't know how to say it, but by feeling I knew that the rhythm of my writing was wrong, which made people look uncomfortable.

Subscriptions are actually very reflective.

Another is the problem of anticipation, my sense of anticipation is too poor, especially the latest chapters, so that many people have no motivation to chase more.

And in the first few volumes, when I didn't know the term anticipation, I inadvertently wrote it most appropriately.

Many people say that my book is good in the early stage, and the more you get to the back, the worse it is.

The first thirty chapters, to be honest, turned around dozens of times in my heart before opening the book, although there are a lot of self-congratulatory words, but the quality is definitely the highest so far, so it has attracted many readers and friends.

And my current creation, many times in a hurry, because there is a demand for updates, the urging of full attendance, and even the impact of recommendations.

In this way, the written articles are naturally unsightly, and it is difficult to bring you a high-quality reading experience.

So, please give me a day, tonight and tomorrow during the day, I will go through the article, outline, plot, and character design.

Instead of rushing to update.

I'm sorry to wait for an update, but I want to write a better plot, so please give me a little time.

Whether it's absorbing the nutrients of others or forming my own style, it takes time, and now that I've found the problem, it will take a little time to solve it.

I'm sorry!

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