Wang Jian was suppressed by Chen Ge for a whole night, from the superior face-slapper at the beginning, to the failure of the idea of trying to regain a little face by singing, there was a kind of self-humiliating fidget, so he simply found a way to say hello to Mu Hai and turned to leave, and when he walked out of the room, he subconsciously looked at Chen Ge, Chen Ge was talking and laughing with Li Xuan, Li Xuan gently hammered Chen Ge's shoulder and punched it, a little ambiguous.

Wang Jian was like eating a fly, and he turned around and fled.

Chen Ge Yuguang has been paying attention to Wang Jian, and at this time he couldn't help but want to laugh, if he wants to slap someone else's face, he must have the consciousness of being beaten back by others at any time, his face is so thin, how can he get mixed in the entertainment industry.

After singing the song, Muhai clapped his hands and asked everyone if there was anything else they wanted to play, and he accompanied them.

Everyone was tired at this time, and they all shook their heads.

Mu Hai looked at Chen Ge and asked Chen Ge's advice, this move almost gave Chen Ge enough face, Chen Ge was flattered, but said quietly: "Mu Dao, I see that everyone is tired, why don't you leave it like this today, and get together again when the box office comes out." ”、

Naturally, there was no objection from the crowd.

When the people left in twos and threes, Chen Ge took out a stack of A4 papers from his body and handed it to Mu Hai.

"What is this?" Mu Hai wondered.

Chen Ge scratched his head, "Director Mu, in fact, I had a story in my mind a long time ago, I personally think it's not bad, this idea was even stronger when I joined the crew to shoot black Wangjiao, and I took the time to write down this story during this time." ”

Mu Hai understood, "You mean, this is the script?" ”

Chen Ge nodded.

Mu Hai shook his head in his heart, he has seen a lot of people like Chen Ge, young actors don't know how thick the sky is, and they just want to point fingers at everything, but in fact, which one is not a so-called mess. He thought that Chen Ge was different, and after observing this time, he felt that Chen Ge was quite stable, but he didn't expect that it would only be a few days before his true form was revealed, hehe, script?

Chen Ge said sincerely: "Pastoral guide, I hope you can take a look and point out the shortcomings." ”

Seeing Chen Ge's repeated requests, Mu Hai directly wiped Chen Ge's face and said, "Okay, then I'll take a look." ”

Mu Hai lowered his head and opened the script in his hand.

With the rapid growth of the post-war generation, tens of thousands of families lived in small units, coupled with the parents running around, and the cramming system was not perfect, many teenagers went astray. Chen Haonan, pheasant, nest skin and others have been friends since they were teenagers. They have no intention of studying, and yearn for life in the rivers and lakes.

Act I, on the school playground.

01: A group of teenagers were playing football, the ball went in, Chen Haonan ran over and picked up the ball.

: Brother Nan, I kicked it in again.

Chen Haonan: ****, where is the nest skin? Why didn't you see him?

: He's going to buy ice cream with Mei!

Chen Haonan looked at another teenager: Ah Er, are you skipping class again?

Ah Er: Today's English test, ABCD knows me, but I don't know them.

Chen Haonan monkey stole a peach and hit Ah Er: If you let your mother know, you will die!

Heckle on the sidelines.

Ah Er hit Chen Haonan back: Hit me!

Chen Haonan: How about beating you?

(Chen Haonan smashed the football in his hand on Ah Er's head when he spoke)

Chen Haonan: "Come on, you have the ability to catch me, stupid!" ”

Seeing this, Mu Hai closed the script, "Chen Ge, I am a person who speaks more directly, I know that you have good qualifications, but it is not an overnight thing to write a script, the opening of your first act, to be honest, I am not very optimistic and unattractive." ”

Of course, Chen Ge knows that it is not easy for a newcomer to make his script acceptable to Mu Hai, but he is confident in this movie, even if the script is from his own hand, it may feel worse, but the plot after that can definitely attract Mu Hai.

Chen Ge said: "Mu Dao, I want you to take a look and help me correct it, as for whether it can be put on the screen, I don't really care." ”

Mu Hai saw that Chen Ge didn't seem to be unconvinced, and said that maybe he was really interested in this, and it was not impossible to help him take a look.

Mu Hai said: "Okay, then I'll take a look at it again, but tonight is late, and I can see the third act at most." ”

"Thank you, Pastor."

Mu Hai lowered his head and continued to look.

02:(A young couple eats ice cream in the playground stands.) ）

A flat-headed, half-sized boy ran here and asked, "Nest skin, where is Anan?"

Hivep handed the ice cream to the girl, looked up at the pitch and said, "I'm playing football."

On the court, Chen Haonan happened to see the pheasant and shouted: Pheasant, come and play football.

The pheasant raised his hand: Here it is.

(Chen Haonan kicks the ball at his feet to the pheasant.)

When the ball flew over, it happened to run into Liangkun and his group.

Liangkun slapped the ball to the ground and looked at Chen Haonan with an unkind face)

Liangkun: Hey, boy! Come here!

Chen Haonan: What are you doing?

Liangkun: Do you know that I'm covering this court?

(Chen Haonan looked around at a few friends who were playing football.) ）

Liangkun: I called you over!

Chen Haonan walked over.

Liangkun: Damn, you almost hit me with the ball just now.

Haonan Chen: I'm sorry.

Liangkun: Where are you mixed up?

Chen Haonan: Above the thirteenth floor.

Liangkun pushed Chen Haonan: That means there is no boss!

A4 opens the paper, and the first page is here.

Mu Hai turned the next page, and at the same time glanced up at Chen Ge, and admired it slightly in his heart, he thought it was a mess, but he didn't expect that in addition to the fact that the main line was a little chaotic, the writing was actually not bad.

Chen Ge laughed secretly in his heart, this movie will definitely conquer Muhai, he won't know that in another world, once this movie is broadcast, the box office is second, and the most important thing is that it has become a classic in the minds of everyone after 8090.

Chen Ge waited quietly for Mu Hai, not in a hurry at all.

The plot continues with 02.

Chen Haonan was pushed by Liangkun: What do you want!

Liangkun: How's it going? My name is Liangkun! Tomorrow each of you will come to this stadium with a sum of money!

Chen Haonan: Brother Kun, this stadium seems to be covered by Brother B, and he didn't ask me to pay protection money, why are you?

Liangkun: Damn, you look down on me, huh?

(Liangkun smashed the Coke glass bottle in his hand on Chen Haonan's head.)

Several teenagers went to help Chen Haonan)

Liangkun: Bring me the money tomorrow, and so will you! Otherwise, one person will reward you with a bottle of Coke, damn, Lao Tzu will beat you one by one when he sees you!

Chen Haonan jumped up from the ground, pounced on Liangkun and waved his fist, "it!" Bullying the small! ”

Liangkun's many younger brothers soon knocked down Chen Haonan and the others.

(At this time, the eldest brother B came over with the younger brother.) ）

Brother B: Liangkun, adults don't remember villains, they're just little hairy children, don't shoot so hard.

Liangkun: I'm just teaching them how to be human! Ooh! Hit hard!

(Brother B pats Liangkun's shoulder)

Brother B: It's just children, let them go, huh?

Liangkun: Okay, give you face. Hey, stop!

(Liangkun's little brother gradually stopped)

Liangkun: Brother B.

Brother B: How is it?

Liangkun: The fourth master asked me to go to Tsz Yun Mountain tonight to do things, but I am not very busy.

Brother B: Okay, I'll just talk about it in the evening.

Liangkun: That's it! See you in the evening! Hey, you guys, let's go!

(Liangkun left with all the little brothers,

Brother B walked over and pulled Chen Haonan and the others up)

Brother B: Boy, are you okay?

(Chen Haonan looked at Brother B.) ）

Brother B: If you want to be a good child, go home and study, don't come out and mess around! If you want to play in this stadium, just call me A's name!

Brother B turned around to leave.

Chen Haonan: Brother B!

Brother B turned around.

Chen Haonan: I want to follow you!

Seeing this, Mu Hai exhaled a long breath, looked up after a few seconds and asked, "You wrote this script during this time?" ”

"I wanted to write a story for a long time, and it wasn't until some time ago that I felt that it was perfect, and I started writing, and I just finished it yesterday."

Mu Hai shook his head in admiration, looked at Chen Ge again, and laughed, "I really don't know how your head grows." ”

Chen Ge asked, "How is it, pastoral guide, is the writing bad?" ”

This is a knowingly asked.

"It's not bad, let me put it this way, for a newcomer, you write too well." Mu Hai satisfied Chen Ge's desire to pretend to be forced as he wished, "In this way, I'll take the script back, take a good look at it tonight, and I'll revise the things that are not so good." If you're writing as well as the first act, I think my next film isn't far off. ”

Chen Ge said confidently: "Don't worry, Mu Dao, if the first act is still passable, I guarantee that the plot behind it will be more exciting than the first act." (To be continued.) )