Chapter 135: Dance Department Confession Incident (II)
Writing a novel is not just about having reading experience, as early as last year's winter vacation, Lin Yu tried to write a book of gods, but he insisted on it for a few days and then he gave up directly, there were many things in his mind, but he couldn't write it.
The feeling of not being able to write can make people rush, but this does not prevent him from saying that many of them are enough as long as they follow the plot and writing techniques in his memory, but if Lin Yu really wants to explain to Duan Jiantao at a deeper level, I am afraid that he will also make difficulties, after all, he is also a reader.
Seeing Duan Jiantao looking at him with blank eyes, Lin Yu sighed: "I think the novel should be based on the plot, and the writing is secondary, the point is not to let the protagonist have nothing to do, it is best to hold a small event with a small event, and make something out of it if there is nothing to do, small events to promote the development of the main line, and then write slowly like this, even if you don't write well, it's not bad, don't you think it's too wordy for a long paragraph here?" It doesn't make sense to introduce so much, so let's delete and rewrite it......"
"Huh?"
Duan Jiantao's expression of pain was normal, knowing that his expression after the fruits of his labor were rejected.
"Big brother, this is more than 4,000 words, is it easy for me to speed a thousand per hour!" Under Lin Yu's speechless gaze, Duan Jiantao sighed, "Okay, I'll rewrite ......"
"Anyway, you should ask your editor, and I'll ask you about it."
Lin Yu stood up.
"Hehe, don't I think you're reliable! Besides, my editing is too procedural, and there must be a lot of authors below, and everyone can't be busy if they are carefully guided, right? How can I get that kind of treatment as a newcomer? ”
Duan Jiantao smiled, very shameless.
"Okay...... The next words......" Lin Yu pondered for a moment, "Next, you can open a new branch, and then go outside the city to develop it, and when you come back, you can have something to do with the imperial academy, and recruit students to grab places at will, the process is simpler, probably just find a reasonable reason, don't talk about it at length, and then compete for places, that kind of plot is boring to think about." ”
"And then?"
Duan Jiantao nodded, looking very serious, it seems that he also wants to write well.
"Then you can let the protagonist go to the academy, or you can go outside, the academy is nothing more than writing some secret caves in the back mountain, or the mysterious predecessors have eyes, and the outside words can be related to the creation of the old man in the ring, preferably a defective product, in short, don't let the protagonist get the artifact at one time...... There are a lot of things to write, and if you write these down, there are hundreds of thousands of words, right? When the time comes, you can deal with the matter of the arrogant fiancée, and you can also use the fiancée to stimulate the protagonist again, for example, she happens to be from an academy, and she can write no matter how she writes......"
Duan Jiantao: "......"
He pondered for a moment, and then looked at Lin Yu unconsciously, with a capital letter on his face.
"Suddenly?"
Lin Yu raised his eyebrows, after saying so much, he wanted to drink water, but his mouth was too dry.
Duan Jiantao's head nodded like a chicken pecking rice.
"Okay, then come on, it's good to write that it can be adapted when the time comes, say it in advance, don't trouble me in the future with this kind of plot problem, and be self-reliant." Lin Yu smiled and walked out.
"Adaptation? I'm thankful that I'm making five hundred a month now. ”
Duan Jiantao's disapproving words sounded behind him.
Outside the dormitory corridor, Nangong Yun raised his head while looking at his mobile phone, and then looked at him speechlessly, and said, "Brother Lin, did you put on makeup?" How long is it going to take? ”
The corners of Lin Yu's mouth twitched.
After a while, he and Nangong Yun parted ways, Lin Yu went straight outside the school, and Nangong Yun went to find Wang Xiaoqin.
Now the pair of Nangong Yun and Wang Xiaoqin has become celebrities in the school, and Wang Xiaoqin is also envied to death by a group of female compatriots, after all, for the entire J University, Nangong Yun has become a male god on a par with Zhu Jinghao, and he is still victorious, all the girls in the school know that their school has a big and small fresh meat in the archaeology department, as for Zhu Jinghao, the limelight will be compared.
After a while, Lin Yu reluctantly walked back from outside.
The reason for his helplessness is very simple, that is, there is no news from Taifeng Dijing, and he could have asked about the sales MM that was added, but it is still safer in the past, this is a major event in his future development, and he must not be sloppy.
When I went back to the dormitory, it was still early, and they happened to have no classes this afternoon, so Lin Yu thought about it and went directly to the dance department, followed by Nangong Yun, who had nothing to do and was ready to find Wang Xiaoqin, originally he didn't want to bring this goods, but Nangong Yun followed him with a dead face, rolling and begging to take it away, which really made Lin Yu shiver a lot.
I can't stand it...... So I kicked the guy and reluctantly let him follow.
It's just that...... If you guessed correctly, Liu Suyue and the others happened to be in the dance practice room today, and when they just took a break, they said that the class was almost over, so Lin Yu went straight to wait outside the dance room.
You can see the inside from the outside of the dance room, Lin Yu glanced at it casually, and soon found that Liu Suyue smiled, and then waited outside, chatting with Nangong Yun without a word in the process, basically Nangong Yun was shouting on the side, and he couldn't stop at all, there were a lot of things yelling, nothing more than how many love letters he received, how jealous Wang Xiaoqin was, and then Balabala said a lot, listening to Lin Yu sleepy for a while, he suddenly remembered the time when he was in politics before, The hypnotic process of the two is also very similar.
After a while, after the dance lesson was over, Yoo Suyue walked out.
Looking at Liu Suyue, whose forehead was covered with fine sweat in front of him, Lin Yu showed a smile and then walked over.
Then he stopped......
There is no other reason, because there is a boy who looks familiar, who has already taken a step ahead of Lin Yu and stopped in front of Liu Suyue, Lin Yu narrowed his eyes slightly, and after a moment of hesitation, he also recognized this kid.
What's it called......
Oh yes, it should be called Chen Xiaobing, a boy who knows from Wang Xiaoqin's mouth, and he is also a cream boy, very shy.
He could feel a breath from this boy's body.
The breath of a rival in love......
It's been a long time since I've said it's been a long time, but I remember that time, he also gave his own one a gift, right?
Lin Yu narrowed his eyes, Nangong Yun also raised his eyebrows, as for Liu Suyue, who was originally going to come over, she was also blocked in place by the sudden blockade, and Wang Xiaoqin, who found that Nangong Yun originally wanted to come over, was also stunned in place, as if she couldn't understand Chen Xiaobing's intentions.
When everyone was stunned, Chen Xiaobing looked at Liu Suyue nervously, and then said as if he had plucked up great courage: "I like you!" ”