Chapter 11 Whose Flowers Fall
Su Can held his cheek with his right hand, and half-leaned over the table with his left hand to recall the content of that classic article, and the gel pen kept rotating in his hand.
Sun Haodong wrote an essay outline on scratch paper, his Chinese grades are very good, and he is also very conceited about his own writing, plus his compositions are often read out as model essays, so it is easy to write a stable and decent composition.
If nothing else, this essay is regarded as a model article, and it is a choice between him and Cheng Keshu.
He finished writing a paragraph in one go, and when he looked up, he saw Su Can stunned there, not writing a word, and suddenly remembered that he had been lost face by Su Can before, and he was very unhappy when he saw that brilliant face, and the nameless anger in his heart rose.
So he sneered and said: "Some people are very good at playing tricks, but when it comes to doing the right thing, that's it, I dare to say, after these two classes, he didn't move a word." ”
When he said this, his eyes were even more focused on the classmates around him, as if he wanted his behavior to be seen by more people and recognized by others, but unfortunately no one was in step with him.
After all, it's only been a few days since he was classified, and everyone is not particularly familiar with him, so who will get used to him? Everyone is a high school student, and they have learned to look at problems rationally, from the beginning Su Can did not take the initiative to provoke Sun Haodong, but he kept targeting Su Can, which is right and which is wrong, at a glance.
Su Can put down the pen, his gaze was steady, calm, and faint, and said: "First of all, it's too challenging to quarrel with you, I don't care to waste saliva with you at your kindergarten level, and to put it bluntly, the IQ level is worrying." ”
"There are thousands of wonders in the world, and you are just one of them."
"You!" Sun Haodong stood up angrily.
"Why is his IQ in a hurry?" Luo Xi suddenly said loudly.
Su Can tilted his head and explained to his fellow tablemates: "Don't try to argue with Silly X, he will pull you to his level and then beat you with his rich experience." ”
Suddenly, there was a burst of laughter in the class, the remarks of this classmate named Su Can were so funny, and Luo Xi laughed even more.
Of course, the moment Old Man Yan stepped into the classroom with one trouser leg, the laughter in the classroom immediately stopped abruptly, as if the formation had been rehearsed countless times and was tacit and neat.
Old man Yan didn't say anything, just looked at it with a gentle gaze, nodded with satisfaction, and sat on the podium chair and took out a handout and began to read it.
Su Can was stirred up by Sun Haodong, and the idea he had just thought of was also disrupted, and he grabbed his unkempt hair with his hand and pulled it.
Glancing at the clock in the center, most of the time had passed, so he simply bit the cap of the pen and wrote with a gel pen.
Su Can brewed his feelings, and when he began to write the first word, the heavy pen and ink Jin Ge Tie drew on the text, opening and closing, and the desolate and tragic love was also spread out in the bottom of his heart, and the words of mountains and rivers burst out from his mind, and the sparks of thought collided.
Although he tried his best to suppress his inner emotions and not let these lava-like hot emotions overflow, it was difficult to suppress this surging emotion.
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When I climbed the ancient city wall, when I caressed the rotten pillars and beams, when I leaned on the railing excitedly and looked into the distance, there was always a trace of sourness rushing up to my throat, and I always heard a voice say loudly: Remember? Your ancestor's name is Yan Huang!
Someone told me that there was once a big fish, living in that place in the North Underworld, it turned into a giant bird, soaring between heaven and earth, the giant bird has wings like clouds hanging from the sky, although 90,000 miles can also soar, the sages have given us the mind to encompass the heavens, for us to shape a vast and magnificent palace.
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Today, thousands of years later, I sit in the hall of McDonald's, I wear Gucci brand fashion, I casually sing my, heart, will, go, on, but I am inexplicably sad, because I hear a voice say loudly: Forget? Your ancestor's name is Yan Huang!
Su Can now has a sense of bursting, he can't wait to finish all the words in one go, but considering that the composition is not allowed to exceed the limit of 800 words, he can only play to his heart's content under certain restrictions, and finally finished writing the composition in the fourth class and a half.
Su Can shook his numb hands, rubbed his sour eyes, and looked at the composition in regular letters with satisfaction.
looked around and found that most of the students had already handed in their essays to Old Man Yan for review, so he got up and sent them to Old Man Yan.
Liu Lei, who was sitting behind Su Can, had already wet his saliva and was sleeping in a righteous and awe-inspiring manner.
Su Can went up and pushed him, Liu Lei opened his sleepy eyes in a daze, and said, "What's wrong with Su Can?" Sleeping is fragrant! ”
"What did you dream about? The saliva is pouring out. Su Can said with a smile.
"No, I get drowsy thinking about it." Liu Lei hung his head listlessly, scribbling on the back of the text with a gel pen.
"Are you done with your essay?"
"I've already finished writing it, I'm going to hand in the essay now." Liu Lei said with a nonchalant look, and casually threw the composition to Old Man Yan.
Su Can frowned, thinking that this guy should be disciplined and disciplined, otherwise how could he get admitted to university with such a sullen personality?
Old man Yan held a large number of essays in the process of correcting and reading, sometimes nodding with satisfaction, sometimes crying and laughing, sometimes laughing, sometimes shaking his head helplessly.
After a while, he finished the change, stood up, knocked on the podium, and coughed twice to moisten his throat.
Old man Yan said: "This essay, some students write very wonderful, such as Cheng Keshu's "Feel the Sea" is very well written, this is an examination room semi-proposition essay, can complete such an article in 70 minutes, it is not easy, Cheng Keshu has never seen the sea, but she can seriously observe life, feel life, experience life, feel the sea is to feel life, feel life, transform the yearning for the sea into the pursuit of a better future, write the kind of 'facing the sea, Spring Blossoms', the language of this article is vivid, the words are correct, the center is clear, and there must be a lot of gain after reading. ”
There was thunderous applause at the bottom, Cheng Keshu already had a high popularity when she was first assigned to the first class, and some boys who secretly admired her applauded even harder, and even their hands were red.
Cheng Keshu sat indifferently, her hands on the table, her eyes were calm, and the arc light was faintly smeared on her amber pupils, which was surprisingly beautiful.
Old man Yan's words were an affirmation for her, but she was not too excited, because she had heard these words countless times since she was a freshman in elementary school, junior high school, and high school, and she was already unmoved.
However, what still made her a little puzzled was that Old Man Yan didn't immediately say that she was a standard model essay, so could it be that she had to choose other people's essays to compare?
Old man Yan continued to comment quietly, and said: "Then there is "Feeling the Agility of School Sports" written by Sun Haodong, which is also very vivid, and the demeanor, psychology, and actions of the students in the sports meeting are described very well, which is immersive, as if you really watched a sports meeting. ”
Sun Haodong did a lot of hard work on the surface, looking disapproving, calm as water, and modest, but a trace of triumphant eyes flashed in the corner of his eyes, and he still didn't hide it from Su Can and a few close friends.
Liu Lei cut disdainfully at the bottom, looked at the scenery outside the window, and at the same time, there were only a few applauds at the bottom, and it could be seen that Sun Haodong was not very popular in the class.
Old man Yan coughed lightly, "Of course, there are also a few classmates' essays that are full of loopholes, so I'll read them." After saying that, he read: "There is a classmate who writes that trees dance in the air, is this a tornado?" Oh, it's Liu Lei's, the imagination is too rich and jumps like a whimsy! ”
"And another student wrote that a gust of wind blows, dust blows, and garbage flies all over the sky, are you a sandstorm or a typhoon? Oh, it was written by the labor councilor, no wonder, the garbage really has to be swept away. ”
"There is also an essay written by a classmate that says that the red flag pole is fluttering in the wind, and the students pay attention to the word 'pole' and the word 'swing', is this the red flag pole broken?"
After he finished reading, the whole class burst into laughter, some students bent over with laughter, some students slapped the table and stepped on their feet with laughter, some students clapped their hands and said yes, and some students laughed so much that their stomachs hurt.
Old man Yan suddenly smiled, looking very mysterious, clapped his hands and lowered everyone's voices, and said, "Okay, students, be quiet, you all want to know who is today's Fan Wen?" ”
Crash...... The classroom suddenly fell silent, everyone looked at each other, and shouted in unison, "Yes!" ”
Old man Yan said with a smile: "The articles of the two classmates I said before are very exciting, but they are only wonderful, if you want to talk about the majestic pattern, Su Can's essay "Feeling the Beauty of Hanfu" is undoubtedly the best!" This is no longer something that ordinary students can write, and it jumps out of the pattern of student composition, and it is more magnificent than what those writers write. ”
"Su Can's composition, whether in terms of scene blending or sophisticated writing, the appeal of the article and the pride of the nation have reached a kind of straightforward expression of the mind and the freedom of retraction!"
The students held their breath at first, until the old man said the name, and the students were in an uproar.
Su Can clearly saw that everyone had a stupid look in their eyes, and after a few seconds of silence, the classroom immediately boiled.
Sun Haodong was also completely stupid, muttering: "National pride? What the hell did he write? ”