About the storyline advancement setting, friends, please come in!

Hello ladies and gentlemen,

First of all, I would like to thank the bounty master for his pertinent comments on this book. The big boss mentioned that the plot of this book progresses slightly slowly, and as for the setting up and rhythm of the plot, I also have some doubts, mainly the following points I want to explain:

1. I am also a reader of online novels for many years, and I also love online novels, but the more I read, the more critical I become, and I find it difficult to have a book that can completely suit my taste, many books can't keep up with it, and I believe that many friends have similar feelings, so I germinated to write a novel that I can control the plot and plot and the characters' personality experiences and behaviors, so as to be suitable for readers like me to see a fresh and comfortable novel.

Second, for the setting of the plot, my original intention was indeed to deliberately slow down the pace and advancement of the plot, and wanted to maintain a relaxed overall situation and local tension and crampedness. This is due to the fact that I often see a book, one of which makes me feel a little depressed, breathless, and tired after the bloody plots, troubles, and conflicts, so I deliberately create an overall relaxation, so that readers will not be too worried to look at it while relaxing.

3. I really want to reminisce more about the good times of my youth with readers and friends, and my student days are a very important part, and I want to write more about campus life. I really don't want to be like many rebirth texts.,Just a few days after being reborn, I began to participate in all kinds of competition and struggles in society.,Begin to suspend school.、Drop out of school or something.,So I don't want to push out all kinds of intense plots that require a lot of energy too quickly.,In this way, the protagonist will only have to drop out of school.、Suspension of school.,This is also a place where I'm very conflicted and entangled.。

To sum up, the speed of the plot may be the difference between modern commercial fast food literature and traditional aesthetic literature. In order to attract people's attention and arouse people's appetite, the purpose of commercialization has been achieved, and it is necessary to cater to the short-term and fast psychological needs of modern people, which has given birth to commercial fast food literature.

As a newcomer, I am very entangled in contradictions, I hope that all friends can point out the maze, more mention your true feelings, at the same time I also came out of a survey, please take a little time, give me a comment Okay, let me find a balance between reality and ideals, I thank you in advance for supporting my friends!