Now all the members of the working group are looking very seriously, and the disdain and contempt for Lin Xiao before have long disappeared without a trace, and even in their hearts at the moment, the trace of exclusion of Lin Xiao has long been gone.

Most people smiled at Lin Xiao, and a trace of admiration rose.

How old is Lin Xiaocai? Under the age of twenty-three! At this age, it is not admirable to write this kind of article that even those of them who have been immersed in the education industry for many years?

Especially Bai Yongnian, he was shocked to read Lin Xiao's article again.

This article called "Back" is really well written!

This is a piece of prose, but there is another flavor in Lin Xiao's pen, the 'meaning' to be expressed in it not only does not think that the form of prose has become scattered, but the more I look at it, the more I feel that it is dignified!

This is something that can only be done by a top master, when Bai Yongnian read this article again, he asked himself many times, can he write such an article? After thinking about it repeatedly, Bai Yongnian came up with the answer that he couldn't, he couldn't write such an article.

The whole article seems to be easy, but it is deeply touching, incomparable, without a trace of writing and showmanship, written ordinary and simple, and even very inconspicuous, but between the lines, it can make you feel the plain, real, but great family and fatherly love.

In just more than 1,000 words, Bai Yongnian read it for more than half an hour before reading it.

When he looked up after reading it, he found that everyone was still bowing their heads and contemplating, silent, and everyone had a strange expression on their faces, serious with a hint of overwhelm, it seemed that everyone was shocked by the wonderfulness of this article.

In the whole article, Bai Yongnian's impression of Lin Xiao has undergone earth-shaking changes, this article has left a deep impression on people, and the feelings are also very deep, ordinary things, common little things in life, but it is written so emotionally, it can be seen that Lin Xiao must also have his own feelings, so as to write such an article close to people's hearts.

Being able to be grateful from small things proves Lin Xiao's character, Bai Yongnian is a traditional person, so he likes Lin Xiao's personality.

"Okay, I'm sure you've all finished reading the first part of "Back", right? Without further reading, let's discuss this article first. Fei Bin clapped his hands and dragged everyone's thoughts out of the article.

Everyone put down the manuscript in their hands and looked at Fei Bin, but everyone's face still had the same expression of indulgence in the article.

"I just read the article, but I'd like to hear everyone's opinions." Fei Bin said.

Everyone looks at me, I look at you, look at each other, but no one speaks, it's not that they don't want to say, but they don't know what to say!

The article is very good, but if you want them to say what is good so quickly, but they can't say it for a while, it's like a good glass of wine, after drinking it, you think it's very delicious and mellow, but let you immediately say the advantages of this wine, even if you are a person who takes wine as a companion all year round, you have to taste it before you can say it.

It's just that the wine tasting time is slightly shorter, and Lin Xiao's article takes a longer time to reminisce.

"Let me talk about it first, if there is anything lacking, everyone will make up for it." Bai Yongnian spoke first.

He is the most senior and senior person here, and it is more appropriate for him to stand up first.

"First of all, I apologize to Lin Xiaoxiao first." Bai Yongnian showed a hint of a smile, looked at Lin and smiled: "What you just said is right, I was so arbitrary that I said something very unprofessional, I'm sorry, Lin Xiao." ”

Bai Yongnian didn't feel any embarrassment because of his identity, in his heart, Lin Xiao gave him a big lesson, this time, it can be remembered for a lifetime, this time, it can completely get rid of his bad habit.

Therefore, he was grateful to Lin Xiao.

Lin Xiao saw Bai Yongnian apologizing to himself, and hurriedly waved his hand and said, "Professor Bai, you are serious, I am a junior, how can I stand it, forget about this matter." ”

Bai Yongnian nodded, and then said: "Back to this article, I think this article is fully qualified to be selected for this adaptation, and no matter how many adaptations it will be made in the future, it will always be able to be retained, and it has this strength." ”

First of all, Bai Yongnian gave this article a positioning, and the positioning was very high.

None of the people present showed any objections, this article, they also think so, this is a rare good article, easy to understand, so that everyone can feel what they want to express inside, a very simple thing, under Lin Xiao's pen, it was endowed with great feelings, and the taste changed immediately.

This wonderful expression is profound, and if you can't achieve this positioning, it will be too unreasonable.

"After reading this article, I was deeply touched, and there are only two words in my mind to describe this article, which is 'wonderful'! The whole text is unpretentious, and there is no direct expression of the father's love for his son between the lines, but everyone can feel it and understand it, which is remarkable. ”

"I won't say anything superfluous for the time being, and when we make notes, we can study it carefully, now, I just want to hear everyone's opinions, I can't say it alone, let's take a look at the shortcomings of this article again, so as to revise it." Bai Yongnian looked at everyone and said.

"Professor Bai, in fact, you just said so much, and it is also my idea, but as for the shortcomings of this article, I really don't see it, if I insist on saying it, I think the background in the article seems to be a bit old." A female teacher spoke her mind.

Professor Bai shook his head and said: "Actually, I am not old, I think Lin Xiao wants to use this background era to tell you a story of father's love as a person who has come over, so that students can feel the taste of history more and be able to drill into it. ”

Professor Bai explained this question, and the female teacher thought about it and nodded thoughtfully.

Lin Xiao really didn't think of this, this "Back", he just changed some place names, and didn't think of the background of the era, but now listening to Professor Bai's words, it seems to make a little sense, Lin Xiao is also a little crying and laughing, is this a crooked hit? Or is it crooked?

"I don't think there's any need to discuss it, this "Back" can be passed, and I see that Lin Xiao has already written the remarks, and then we can improve it, what I want to ask is whether we need to vote or not?" Fei Bin said. (To be continued.) )