Chapter 53: "Tomorrow Will Be Better" has to be changed!

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Shu Hongming and Mi walked around the courtyard of the hospital for a while before returning to the ward hand in hand.

In the ward, there was silence.

Lilac was already groggily asleep, and Ding Manshuang sat on the edge of the bed, looking at Lilac on the hospital bed blankly.

Zhang Caixia is no longer on the hospital bed, she should have gone to the next ward, and Xiaomi did not shout to watch cartoons like before, but held a comic book, flipped it gently, and turned her head to look at Lilac on the bed next to her from time to time, and seemed to be in a very bad mood.

Shu Hongming and Dami walked in, and Ding Manshuang, who was smiling with a strong face, nodded, which was regarded as a greeting. Then, Shu Hongming picked up the notebook on the hospital bed, pointed out the door, and made a writing gesture, meaning to go outside to write songs.

Rice nodded and followed Shu Hongming out of the ward.

Seeing this, Xiaomi also jumped off the hospital bed and chased him out.

The three of them walked together, and when they walked to the corner of the corridor, Xiaomi suddenly reached out and tugged at the corner of the rice's skirt: "Sister, sister, is Sister Lilac going to die......"

Rice was worried in his heart, so he patted Xiaomi's head with his hand: "Bah, bah! Don't talk nonsense, you know? Why is she going to die, so she won't die! Lilac she's going to be fine! ”

Xiaomi was scolded by Rice this time, and rarely did not talk back to Rice, and said in a low voice: "I, I am also reluctant to Sister Lilac ......"

"Don't worry, Da Shu and my sister are trying to find a way to save Lilac's ......"

As he spoke, after seeing a figure not far away, he immediately shut up, patted Xiaomi's head again, and pulled Xiaomi away.

The figure not far away is Lin Yanyan, Lilac's mother.

When Xiaomi spoke just now, her voice was not small, and she might have been heard by Lin Yanyan.

Shu Hongming, rice, and millet ran out of a distance as if they had escaped, turned their heads to look again, and vaguely saw Lin Yanyan covering her face with her hands, as if she was sobbing softly......

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There is also a waiting place in the inpatient department, but the environment inside is not very good.

After thinking about it, Shu Hongming simply took the notebook again, went to the gazebo in the courtyard, wiped the dust on the table briefly, and opened the notebook.

Clicking on the software for writing songs, Shu Hongming recalled the melody in his memory, and the notes began to appear on the computer one by one.

The two heads of rice and millet were next to Shu Hongming, and they didn't dare to say a word, even the sound of breathing was suppressed, for fear of interrupting Shu Hongming's inspiration.

About ten minutes later, Shu Hongming wrote the song and checked it carefully.

Rice and millet were already humming softly beside them.

They could feel it, it was a very light melody, full of hope and expectation, and full of love.

Shu Hongming didn't pay attention to what the rice and millet were doing, but put his hands on the keyboard again, and tapped "da-da-da", and soon, a series of lyrics appeared on the computer screen: "Gently wake up the sleeping heart, slowly open your eyes, and see if the busy world is still lonely and spinning~~ The spring breeze is incomprehensible, blowing the young man's heart, and letting the tears on yesterday's face dry with the memory......"

After writing the sentence "Dried with memory", Shu Hongming's hand stopped suddenly, and then reached out and pinched his chin, thinking carefully.

This time, Shu Hongming's song to help Lilac is "Tomorrow Will Be Better".

The song "Tomorrow Will Be Better" is a very famous public welfare song, because the first version was sung by many superstars, and the melody was catchy, which made this song very popular, and it sold 250,000 copies in just a few months, becoming a model of public welfare songs.

However, the theme of the song "Tomorrow Will Be Better" is mainly about anti-war, calling for world peace, etc., and has little to do with medical public welfare. If you really copy the lyrics word for word, it will give people a strange feeling. Therefore, in order to make this song come out and maximize the effect, Shu Hongming must change the lyrics and change it to a type suitable for medical public welfare.

Frowning and thinking, Shu Hongming seemed to be much slower next, and it took a long time to type a sentence.

Rice and millet are the first time I have seen Shu Hongming fill in the words so hard, two people, you look at me, I look at you-

Wasn't it very easy for Dashu to write songs and lyrics before, and he didn't even hesitate? Why is it so slow today?

Could it be that the power has declined?

The two big loli suddenly stopped humming and waited quietly for Shu Hongming.

This time, in order to fill in the lyrics, Shu Hongming spent a full half an hour and revised all the inappropriate lyrics before it was completed.

After Shu Hongming finished writing, the rice immediately sang according to the cappella, millet followed the rhythm next to him, humming together, and after the rice finished singing, millet immediately clapped his palms and danced: "Sister, you sing so well!" ”

"Hmm...... "Da Mi tilted his head and smiled, sticking out his tongue, "It's still Da Shu's song that is well written." Da Shu, this song, am I still singing it? ”

"Rice! How can you sing alone? I'm going to sing it too! When Xiaomi heard this, she immediately stopped calling her "sister".

Rice glared at Xiaomi, and Shu Hongming smiled: "This song, rice, millet, and cloves, the three of you can sing it together." However, before that, the lyrics were changed slightly. ”

"Do you have to change the lyrics?" Rice was surprised.

She thinks the lyrics written by Shu Hongming are very good! Especially the sentence "The spring breeze does not understand the customs, blowing the hearts of young people", it sounds so beautiful.

Shu Hongming nodded and said, "Yes, there are still some problems with the lyrics." You didn't sing it just now, I don't feel it yet; As soon as you sang it, I noticed that some of the lyrics seemed to be a little gray and negative......"

Those problematic lyrics are all lyrics replaced by Shu Hongming.

Shu Hongming pondered in his heart that this may be because of his current mood, so the lyrics he wrote also appeared a slightly gray side.

This song, Shu Hongming's overall definition, must be the kind that calls on everyone to lend a hand, give love, and be full of hope for life.

So, the lyrics had to be changed!

"Yes?" Rice thought about Shu Hongming's words and found that it was really a little, "How do you change it, how long do you have to change it?" ”

Shu Hongming thought for a while: "Just tonight, we have to get it done tonight!" ”

"Tonight, can you get it done in one night?" Rice was a little worried.

"It's really not good, I'll ask someone else to help me and change it together!" When I said this, I thought of a person in my heart - Professor Ning.

Professor Ning is a real songwriter, and with his help, it will definitely be much smoother.

If there is more time, Shu Hongming would rather modify it slowly, but now Lilac's current situation, according to what the doctor said, can no longer be delayed. Perhaps at some point in the future, once the condition worsens, it may ......

Thinking of this, Shu Hongming stood up, took out his mobile phone, and called Professor Ning, and a few seconds later, the phone was connected, and Shu Hongming took the initiative to greet: "Hey? Hello Professor Ning, I'm Shu Hongming......"

"Well, I know it's you. Teacher Shu, call at night, is there something wrong? Professor Ning spoke.

Shu Hongming replied, "That's right, Professor Ning. I wrote a song, but I'm not satisfied with the lyrics, I want to ask you for advice, is it convenient for you now? ”

"Lyrics for a new song?" Professor Ning was surprised for a moment, and then immediately said, "No problem, you can come to me." It just so happens that I'm in the school office right now. ”

"I'm really sorry for you." Shu Hongming thanked him.

Professor Ning said: "It's okay, musicians, it's just a little help to each other, you can come over quickly." ”

PS: I have selected a lot of songs, but the most catchy and shocking one seems to be the melody of this song. Therefore, I still chose "Tomorrow Will Be Better" and added the plot of changing the lyrics.

As for really changing the lyrics...... Forgive me for not being literary enough......