Wu Lili's script adds an element of revenge to Junfei on the basis of inspiration, still telling the story of a ballet girl who is betrayed by a good friend, regains her strength and steps onto the stage, and takes the one away from herself, but Xiang Junfei adds a new villain to the script, a woman who is less dizzy by the fire of jealousy.

In Xiang Junfei's latest setting, this villain is a good friend who grew up with the heroine, and finally entered the same ballet company, but this villain has always been jealous of the heroine in his heart, jealous that the heroine's dancing talent is better than herself, jealous that the heroine is more popular than herself, and jealous that a senior she likes is in love with the heroine, so the jealous girl finally turned into a poisonous snake and stretched out her magic hand to the heroine who has always trusted herself and treated her as a sister. During a trip to the group, this vicious woman invited the heroine to a cliff at night, and then pushed the heroine off the cliff when the heroine was not paying attention. But fortunately, the heroine was lucky not to die, but her face was cut by a branch, leaving a deep scar on her originally delicate and beautiful face. After that, the heroine re-entered the ballet company with a new identity through a makeover, regaining the honor of the top ballet dancer in the troupe from the enemy, regaining her boyfriend who belonged to her from the enemy, and regaining everything that was originally taken by her from the enemy. At her marriage ceremony with her boyfriend, in the face of the enemies who came to make trouble, the heroine told the truth of the matter in front of everyone, and finally achieved perfect revenge.

Compared with the original script of Wu Lili, the script after Xiang Junfei's re-revision has twists and turns, overlapping and fascinating, and the excitement has increased tenfold. However, the only thing he is worried about is that with Wu Lili's current experience, such a ** comic plot is something she can't control, and such a plot is only suitable for long-form comics, and it is really inappropriate for a junior high school student to draw this kind of **-oriented long comics.

Forget it, I'm thinking about it later, let's take a look at Ma Qiang's script. Xiang Junfei, who sighed, began to pick up Ma Qiang's script and look.

Whether it is Chen Jia's script or Wu Lili's script, Xiang Junfei is not satisfied, perhaps because he has read too many excellent comics, which makes Xiang Junfei's vision too much, if he is an editor, no matter how good the other party's drawing skills are, but as long as the comic plot does not reach the level he recognizes, Xiang Junfei will not let it pass the review. However, after seeing the script written by Ma Qiang, Xiang Junfei actually praised: "Hey, I didn't expect the script written by this kid Ma Qiang to be quite interesting, but I really didn't see that he still has talent in this area." ”

It turns out that the theme chosen by Ma Qiang this time is a campus funny romantic drama, which tells the story of an indecisive male protagonist who falls in love with a very strong heroine in the class. Although this heroine looks very domineering and is a problem girl in school, she is actually a good girl who is rigid on the outside and soft on the inside, only she doesn't like to expose her true self to the world. Although the male protagonist likes each other, he doesn't have the courage to turn white to a girl because he is very timid, but one day this boy drank a bottle of unknown drink on the road, and there was an incredible change, as long as he said that he liked the word, he would transform into a very cute girl. The male protagonist who didn't have the courage to date the heroine as a man dated the heroine as a girl befriended the heroine, and a hilarious campus love funny story kicked off in this way.

For Chen Jia and Wu Lili's scripts, Xiang Junfei has made significant revisions, but Ma Qiang's script, Xiang Junfei not only did not change a word, but also thought that Ma Qiang's script was more suitable for Chen Jia and children of her age to create than the two scripts that had been revised by himself. After all, this kind of campus love comic is the closest to their lives, and there will be no strangeness in drawing, and although the other two are also very good scripts, they are too far away from their lives, and it takes a lot of time to collect information to create, and the author needs to have a strong ability to control the plot. After some careful consideration, Xiang Junfei had an idea.

"Last night, I read the scripts written by the three of you carefully, Chen Jia and Wu Lili, the two of you will first take a look at the revised script I gave you and tell you your opinions." Xiang Junfei handed back the notebook in which the two wrote the script to each other, and then waited for the other party's reply.

"Junfei, my script, what do you think of my writing?" Seeing that Chen Jia and Wu Lili both took back their scripts, but Xiang Junfei did not return the scripts he wrote, Ma Qiang asked a little anxiously.

"Don't panic, I'll talk about you later." Xiang Junfei sold the guanzi, although Ma Qiang was anxious at this time, but when he heard Xiang Junfei say this, he had to be patient.

After a while, Chen Jia and Wu Lili both finished reading the script revised by Xiang Junfei for them, and sat on their chairs thoughtfully, as if they were greatly inspired.

"Really, it's amazing, why didn't I think of that kind of plot before, the story background was changed from the Sui Dynasty to the Shang Dynasty, and the heroine was attached to Daji, ah, such a plot is really interesting to think about, if I'm a reader, as long as I see the content of this comic, I will definitely can't help but read it." Chen Jia said excitedly.

"It's the same with my article, when I think of the plot where the heroine is framed by her friends and then takes perfect revenge, I think of Alexandre Dumas's "The Count of Monte Cristo", which is simply so interesting. But such a good subject、I ...... I'm really afraid that I won't be able to draw well. Wu Lili was obviously attracted to Xiang Junfei's revised script, but at the same time, she was also worried that she would not be able to draw such a work.

"It seems that you are all satisfied with my revised script, but to be honest, with your current level, it is indeed too reluctant to draw a comic with this theme, you can keep the script for the time being, and wait until you feel confident that you can draw a work of this theme before creating. For now, I propose that the three of you work together to create this work. Speaking of this, Xiang Junfei took out Ma Qiang's notebook and put it on the table.