Chapter 143: The script is rough

There are three choices in front of Zhang Tan.

He can take advantage of the popularity of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" and the upcoming boom of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", and make persistent efforts to create the last part of the Condor Trilogy, "Heaven and Dragon Slayer".

However, although the story of "Heaven and Dragon Slayer" inherits the first two books, after all, it is no longer with the two familiar characters of Guo Jing and Yang Guo as the protagonists, but looks at a hundred years later, and the relationship between the characters is no longer close. So Zhang Tan felt that he could temporarily slow down the Condor Trilogy.

Let the first two parts fly for a while, consolidate the brand of the trilogy, and then create "Heaven and Dragon Slayer", which may be better.

If you don't write "Heaven and Dragon Slayer", you can write some new works.

Jin Gu Huang Liang Wen, Liang Yusheng's "Seven Swords Under the Heavenly Mountain" and "The Legend of the White-Haired Witch" are all classics, although Huang Yi is a little weaker, but his "The Legend of Double Dragons of the Tang Dynasty" and "Xun Qin Ji" can also be said to be a precedent, that is, the film and television adaptation of their works is weaker.

The only one who can compete with Jin Yong's novels in film and television is probably Gu Long.

Xiao Li Feidao, Lu Xiaofeng, Chu Liuxiang, these three series, the achievements are quite brilliant. Zhang Tan likes the role of Li Xunhuan in "Amorous Swordsman Ruthless Sword" very much, Wen Neng was admitted to Tanhua, Wu Neng ranked in the top three, and had to abandon the love between men and women for the sake of brotherhood.

When I was young, I read this book, Zhang Tan was Li Xunhuan himself, pretending to be a down-and-out uncle, with inner pain and a casual appearance.

This is the same as watching "The Condor Heroes", I always like to hide one arm in my clothes and then play the one-armed hero.

It's the same thing. It's all pretending to be handsome.

It's just that Gu Long's novel style is very different from Jin Yong's novel. Although the story can be written in the same way, can it write the taste of the ancient dragon. Hard. Zhang Tan claims to be the master of martial arts, but when it comes to his own writing style, he is still more similar to Jin Yong.

Besides, Li Xunhuan appeared as a down-and-out uncle, such a role, written by Zhang Tan, always felt very disobedient, after all, he was only seventeen years old at the legal age. Writing a character like Guo Jing is already amazing enough for a genius. If you write Li Xunhuan alive again, you really have to be careful of being dragged to be a guinea pig.

Therefore, "Amorous Swordsman Ruthless Sword" should be written later.

Now, Zhang Tan's best choice is to continue to write the Four Famous Catches series.

Wen Rui'an's four famous capture series, the story is more fragmented, chaotic, there are many pits, and it has not been written, Zhang Tan will definitely not copy so many good and bad things, the first two "Zhen Guandong" and "Huijing Division" he wrote are the four famous capture stories after the re-instatement.

This time you can catch the best part of the four famous ones. Create it. Based on Zhang Tan's personal taste, the quality of "The Four Famous Catchers Against the Cold" is the best, the layout is grand and the scenes are wonderful, it can be said that such a work is a work. is enough to prove that Wen Ruian can be juxtaposed with Jin Gu Huangliang.

And "The Four Famous Hunting Generals" is also good, it is written about the four famous young people, and their skills and taste are very clever.

Zhang Tan started with the four famous arrests. As a result, the Condor Trilogy has achieved great things. But it overshadowed the four famous catches, and he was somewhat regretful. The four famous catches this series. The number of adaptations into film and television dramas is no less than Jin Yong's works, and until he is reborn, they are still being adapted one after another, which is very popular.

There's no reason to put it on hold.

"Then let's write about the four famous catches."

After deciding on it, Zhang Tan no longer hesitated and began to conceive the outline. If you want to do a good job, you must first sharpen your tools, and if the outline is not planned well, it is easy to lose the direction of creation and deviate from what you originally wanted to write.

It was very interesting for Zhang Tan to write an outline.

He first rearranged and combined the synopsis of the story he had copied in his notebook, and then seamlessly connected these combinations one by one according to the order of the timeline, and finally combined them into a complete main line. Once you have the main line, you can lay out the branches, or dig holes on the main line with foreshadowing such as inverted narratives.

Then the main line and branch lines, according to the form of chapters, sort out the detailed outline, specific to what needs to be written in each chapter, there are lists.

It can be said that he spent nearly seventy or eighty thousand words just to write an outline.

Only by following such a clear outline can you reduce omissions and make the overall content more fluent. And when writing, as long as you use the appropriate writing style to advance the story, you don't need to rack your brains to think about how to write next and where the plot should develop.

Writing efficiency has skyrocketed.

In particular, Zhang Tan's memory is very good, recalling that he has read many novels and film and television dramas before, which can be organically interspersed with the books he created.

It will not be a hammer in the east and a hammer in the west, creating a hodgepodge.

I don't even know how to write, and I find myself writing on another bridge.

……

Three days passed in a flash, and tomorrow is August 10th, and he will fly to Nanli to participate in the second book signing meeting of the month.

Zhang Tan was a little entangled because he had already overturned the main line of the outline three times.

"The Four Famous Catchers Against the Cold" is undoubtedly the pinnacle of the series, but there are also some flaws, the most brilliant of which are Qi Shaoshang and Liu Dufeng, and several other characters are all a little face-painted and do not write characteristics.

The plot was suppressed all the way to the explosion, focusing on Qi Shaoshang's escape route, setting off a bloody storm, and the wide implication was the most common of Wen Ruian's works.

It's just that there are more characters on the scene, and it is inevitable that the characters who should be distinctive will become a trick of soy sauce, which will make the work lose a lot of color.

Zhang Tan doesn't plan to write more stories about the four famous catches, so he wants to write all the faces of all living beings once and for all in "The Four Famous Catches".

skillfully integrated the four famous capture stories he had seen into this bloody escape.

It's difficult.

It's difficult.

The main line of the outline has been difficult to finalize.

The original work "The Four Famous Catchers Against the Cold" is based on Qi Shaoshang as the protagonist, and the character of Qi Shaoshang is a small boss in the previous "Four Famous Catchers of Beijing", who was defeated by the iron hand and retreated. As a result, Lianyunzhai, which he worked so hard to run, was betrayed by his closest brother. The whole village was attached to the imperial court.

Qi Shaoshang, who was seriously injured and betrayed his relatives, had no ability to turn the tide, so he could only die in the world. Hunted down by his former brothers and the court. Flee all the way and fight all the way, and roll in the iron hands of the four famous catchers. swept the confidante into the red tears, and the characters one after another were involved.

ruthlessly swept the bosses of the four famous arrests in, and involved Liu Dufeng, the god of the imperial court...... The escape around Qi Shaoshang was like a whirlpool, involving all the people. Qi Shaoshang, who was the protagonist from the small boss counterattack, broke out with a strong protagonist aura and finally survived.

And when Tie Shou left the four famous catchers and went out for a walk because he questioned what "catch" was and what was a "thief", he was favored by Zhuge Shenhou and temporarily took the position of Tie Shou.

This character has a shadow of Wen Ryan himself. Because Wen Ruian was arrested by the Taiwan authorities on suspicion of "rebellion" in his early years, he began a period of exile and miserable escape, and finally settled in Xiangxiang. He wrote his depression and hope when he fled on Qi Shaoshang's body.

This shaped Qi Shaoshang's huge personality charm.

Zhang Tan wants to make the plot fuller and stronger while not damaging the charm of Qi Shaoshang's character, and the difficulty can be imagined.

However, there is no difficulty in copying the book, but Zhang Tan feels bored.

Difficult challenges can better test your level.

"There is no rush in this outline. Grind slowly, strive to grind to the best! ”

With such a mood.

Early the next morning, Zhang Tan took a plane and flew to Nanqi and started the second stop of the publicity work of "The Condor Heroes". Sign autographs for our readers.

At the same time, he also paid attention to the progress of the script of the TV series "The Legend of the Condor Heroes".

The novel was changed seven or eight times by several screenwriters in the industry. When it became a script, I couldn't say anything, Zhang Tan read the script by email. He called Zhang Dabeard on the spot and said that he was not satisfied. The script needs to be revised.

When Zhang Tan wrote novels, many places were written according to the content of the TV series, such as Ouyang Ke, who played soy sauce in the original book, and he gave a lot of scenes in the book. As long as the novel written by Zhang Tan is summarized and refined, it can be regarded as a good script.

As a result, these screenwriters had to change randomly, and many details that should be focused on were deleted as a matter of course, such as Huang Rong's psychology of falling in love with Guo Jing, which was intermittently incoherent. Although the supporting characters in the book are well written, the novel still features Guo Jing and Huang Rong as the protagonists, and all the supporting characters are to serve these two protagonists.

You can't take the lead from the crowd.

"Director Zhang, this draft of the script is too reversed, it must be revised, I'll summarize my opinions later, and mail it over. You let the screenwriters work out a little more and revise the draft again. "Calling Zhang Dabeard, Zhang Tan said directly.

Zhang Dabeard quickly replied, "Okay, I'll let them watch the changes again." ”

Zhang Tan sent his opinions over and didn't pay much attention to it.

He believes that with his own guidance, the screenwriters can change very good scripts.

Then Zhang Tan was busy running the book signing club, while sorting out the outline of "The Four Famous Catchers Against the Cold", and by the way, the outline of "The Four Famous Hunting Generals" was sorted out together.

Who knew it wouldn't be a few days before it would be a mess.

There was news from Zhang Dabeard's studio that the screenwriters were very dissatisfied with the revisions pointed out by Zhang Tan, and thought that there was no need to revise them according to what Zhang Tan said. Although under the persuasion of Zhang Dabeard, they reluctantly changed the draft, but almost moved a little in a few small places, Zhang Tan thought that the rough details had not changed at all.

"Xiao Zhang, you see if this book is okay, the editors say it's okay, what do you think?" Zhang Dabeard called to ask.

Zhang Tanhua pulled the computer screen, looked at the script that had not been revised at all, and forcibly endured the unpleasantness and said: "Director Zhang, I think the studio has invested in such a large-scale shooting, running around the country to shoot scenes, and strive to be realistic." With such a big price already spent, there's no reason not to work on the script...... I speak straight, this script is too rough to capture the essence of the novel. ”

"What do you think is rougher?"

"One is that the plot is incoherent, and the other is that the description of the psychological activities of the characters is weak, especially the psychology between Huang Rong and Guo Jing. The rivers and lakes must have swords and swords, but they must also have children's affection, right...... Director Zhang, you have a good talk to the screenwriters, let them work harder, and strive to write the script well, and if the script is good, the story can be filmed better, right? ”

Zhang Dabeard happily agreed: "I will let them rewrite it." ”

However, the result was unexpected by Zhang Tan.

Because three days later, Liu Changshan, one of the screenwriters, was interviewed by reporters and openly complained that Zhang Tan, the original author, pointed fingers at the script and interfered with their screenwriter's creation. (To be continued.) )

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