Susa's breathing was a little heavier.

Because next, it's time for her to appear.

After the guitar skill version 2.0 was upgraded to the full level, Zhang Tan started the journey of picking up girls. He changed his previous sloppy dress, shaved off his stubble, combed his hair, changed into a new set of clothes, and raised an eyebrow in the mirror. Then he picked up the guitar on his back and left the room.

A whole set of actions, not coherent, just intercepted the representative actions of each of them, edited together, to create a unique charm.

The next moment.

On the bench, Susa and Zhang Tan sat side by side, and Zhang Tan played the guitar affectionately at her.

And sing: "I like you, those eyes are moving, and the laughter is even more charming......"

Change the fast pace of the previous one.

These few lines of guitar playing and singing, shot with normal shots, combined with the fast-paced evolution of the guitar before the climax, and the foreshadowing before the climax of changing clothes and going out, this section can be called the release after the climax tension. It makes people excited, and these lyrics and melodies are extremely beautiful, very pleasant, and deeply intoxicating.

"Hold hands and talk in your dreams, like yesterday, you and me."

The guitar and singing stopped, and Zhang Tan pursed his lips, looking a little reserved.

Susa, on the other hand, looked at him affectionately and said a sentence that echoed the beginning: "Wow, you play so well." ”

Then, leaned into Zhang Tan's arms.

A perfect picture of a beautiful woman.

"All in all."

"I learned to play the guitar."

Knock knock knock, the screen replays at a hundred times speed, and then the screen goes black and the cast and crew alphabet floats.

Director: Zhang Tan. Screenwriter: Zhang Tan. Starring:Zhang Tan......

Subtitles come and go as fast as they come.

The screen lights up again. Zhang Tan sat opposite Chen Li, with the pride of a winner in life. Playing guitar: "You damn cyst, I got my senses." ”

Chen Li expressed his admiration: "You play very well. But, what is the use of you telling me? ”

The camera was given to Zhang Tan, with an inexplicable smile on the corner of his mouth.

A sigh.

The picture is frozen on two lines of small print.

"All in all."

"I learned to play the guitar."

……

"Wow!"

When the short film of three minutes and six seconds ended, the four girls in the girls' dormitory shouted an exclamation together.

"That's cool." The big girl from the Northeast clapped her hands heavily, "This film is so cool." ”

The girl in the white T-shirt also stared: "Sasha, look at it again, look at it again." ”

The ponytail girl was even more nymphomaniac, exclaiming: "Who thought of this." Is it the Inspector? I've never seen a film like this, it's so short! But it feels even more exciting than watching a blockbuster, so fun, so talented! ”

"What kind of song is that Cantonese song, it's so nice to sing."

"Do you have a burning feeling?"

"I didn't expect Tan Zhang to be so handsome."

"Sure enough, it's a boy who can play the guitar and sing, and he can fascinate people and not pay for his life."

"That's a cool short film."

Listening to the comments made by her roommate, Susa's heart was filled with an indescribable surprise, and she felt that her heart was beating so fast. A small part of it is because the short film is cool and exciting, and it can arouse the atmosphere; A small half is pleased with the praise of Tan Zhang by others. As if there is an honor; The other half is because in such a wonderful film, Tan Zhang sang that song to her.

"Like You".

Zhang Tan said that tomorrow he would give him the full version of the guitar he recorded.

"Like you. Those eyes are moving, and the laughter is even more charming...... "This can't help but make Susa think that Zhang Tan sent this song to her." What does it mean.

Fang's heart fluttered and could not be stopped.

Allow your roommate to replay the video. The fast-paced picture and narration seem to be far away. It seems to be very close. Zhang Tan was on the screen, and every move made her like it the more she watched it, and she felt extremely handsome and chic.

There is no one in the world who can compare to Zhang Tanshuai.

Susa thought.

……

Some people in the girls' dormitory are amazed, some are admired, and some are fascinated and can't extricate themselves.

And on the other side.

Qian Kuigang squinted his eyes and watched Zhang Tan's short film three times, such a fast rhythm, he didn't understand it the first time, and he barely knew the plot the second time.

It's a boy who sees someone else playing the guitar and can attract the attention of a little girl, so he also goes to learn guitar. But his friend gave him a guitar with a missing string and told him it didn't matter, that string didn't work. Because this friend doesn't think it's useful to do anything.

It wasn't until the boy had a cyst in his eye that he woke up to the fact that it wasn't useless. So I bought a string, repaired the guitar, and continued to practice without giving up, and finally the guitar was a big success, and I successfully soaked it in the little girl. And with the pride of being a winner in life, try to persuade friends that some things are useful.

It's a standard fable-like story.

It's very short, fast-paced, not much side story, and goes straight to the end.

After understanding this story, Qian Kuigang, with the instinct of a professor in the directing department, felt that this film was actually very superficial and deviant. Besides, there has never been such a film, edited like this, and if you don't watch it carefully a few times, you can't understand it at all, and it's a bit pretentious.

However, the short film is novel.

After watching a lot of other students' lengthy, nutritious and unskilled works, it was really refreshing to see such an unconventional short film that was only more than three minutes long. It seems that after a long-distance run, a bottle of mineral water is poured on the head, and the refreshing feeling cannot be stopped.

Qian Kuigang didn't know how to evaluate this film for a while.

So he watched it a third time.

The third time I watched it very slowly, froze from time to time, and dragged it back. After going back and forth several times, all the content of this short film was memorized in his head. He examined the film according to the eyes of a director, and felt that many places were too frizzy, and the actors' acting skills were honestly not good.

All the plot transitions are basically driven by super-fast narration, and there is no trace of self-transition. This is a very inferior way of transitioning, and a good director will make the audience not feel that the camera has changed at all. Just follow the camera, as if you are in it.

This short film. The transition has been rough to the level of elementary school students.

As for other problems, such as the lens is not rounded enough. There are only a few fixed-point shots back and forth, all of which are close-up shots and no long shots. For example, the lighting is not done well, and when the seasons change, it can be clearly felt that the tone of the film is simply adjusted, rather than designing the light.

The storyline is indeed complete, but this is more like an outline, without any details that drive the plot, and it is directly staged roughly.

Arguably. Looking at it with the eyes of a professional director, this film is useless.

But can Qian Kuigang write this "useless" comment?

Ask yourself, Qian Kuigang doesn't think that this is a "good-for-nothing" film.

Under this rough and rough appearance, there are too many director's ideas.

When Qian Kui just tried to find himself to watch it for the second time, the emotion that accompanied the protagonist hooking up with the girl all the way down. Then analyze the source of this emotion.

Then I found out that this short three-minute film turned out to be a standard Hollywood commercial film routine that was suppressed first and then promoted.

Start with someone else's success. to stimulate the protagonist and also the audience.

Then the protagonist acts, mobilizing the audience's sense of substitution.

Then the protagonist is repeatedly frustrated, which is an unconscious depression.

Then the protagonist comes to his senses. Troubles solved.

Then it was time to practice the guitar and start laying the groundwork.

Then the guitar was completed, and the hair was washed and changed. One more step to foreshadowing the rendering.

After is the final climax, hugging the beauty.

The paragraphs are clear enough to fit into a textbook.

Especially the last paragraph. Sublimate the theme directly.

"Such an analysis is similar to watching a Hollywood blockbuster?" Qian Kuigang thought about it. I think it's ridiculous, how can I compare a three-minute short film with a Hollywood blockbuster.

It's too much of a short film.

After rejecting this idea, Qian Kuigang didn't know how to evaluate it.

It's not good, it's really bad, and it's a bunch of shortcomings. It's really commendable to say it's good, and it's okay to tell the story to this extent in three minutes, and there's nothing to say.

So is it good or not?

Qian Kuigang rubbed his head, suddenly stood up, took out the DVD, and decided to let the other teachers watch it together and listen to their opinions.

……

The professor of the directing department is ready to convene the people to watch together.

In the girls' dormitory, Susa's roommate is ready to promote the film and share it with more people. Over there, Liu Qianwei's dormitory and Zhu Lili's dormitory are also similar behaviors.

On the men's dormitory side, anyone who has seen this film has also joined the ranks of promotion.

"I Learned to Play the Guitar" is already going to be a fire within Nortel.

And Zhang Tan, the director of this short film, still doesn't know the reaction of others, in fact, he just adapted an ultra-short drama that he had seen in his previous life.

This French ultra-short drama called "Bref." (in short) is a short play in the same form as "The Man with the Sling", except that "The Man with the Sling" is a latecomer and "Bref." is the pioneer. "Never Expected", known as the online drama, is called Beast Yi Xiaoxing, and he also admitted frankly that the transition form of "Never Expected" is copied from "Bref.".

Each episode of "Bref." is probably only a minute or two, and it tells the ordinary life of an unemployed man in Paris in the first person. This is a short drama with a unique and charming style, relying on crisp editing, a large number of character relationships and plots are stuffed into the audience in a short time.

In fact, when it comes to being funny, many episodes of "Bref." are not funny, such as the episode of learning to play the guitar adapted by Zhang Tan. If the color is small, there won't be much funny. And after Zhang Tan adapted, he even put these yellow. The color dots were removed.

"Bref." has never relied on these yellow dots to attract people, but has a unique style to win.

Zhang Tan inherited it and carried it forward, retaining the characteristics of the transition, making the foreshadowing of the pretense, and perfectly interpreting the handsomeness of the guitar. The length of the film was increased to more than three minutes to make the story more delicate, and the chorus of two classic songs was put in, which was difficult not to appeal.

It's just that Zhang Tan didn't pay much attention to how attractive it is, he just finished recording the song "Like You", and now he is ready to go to the codeword.

I've been busy making short films these days, and I've been delaying too much time to code.

Turning on the computer and looking at the Word document inside, Zhang Tan sighed: "The ugly person has slept, and the handsome person is still coding words." ”

Get into the state and get started! (To be continued.) )