Chang Berry came to the company's finance office early. Somehow, whether she was fascinated by writing or something else, she just liked to talk to the man she hadn't met yet, and it was only through writing or creating that she had the opportunity to talk about more topics. So, as soon as she turned on the computer, she entered the secret file sharing:

My sensible daughter, your article is a sad recount of the past about your little brother, which makes people can't help but cry when they look at it...... Even though you were young at the time, the relationship between flesh and blood is different. I seem to see the remoteness and danger of the mountains at that time. You use a comparison between the life and death of the little brother, showing that although the little brother suffered from food and clothing during his lifetime, he was very lively and cute, and then combined with the heart-wrenching feelings of his family after he was bitten by a wolf and lost his life, especially your parents are so sad that they are almost crazy and sad! A family accident is a tragic tragedy! It's unforgettable! If you hope that the child, don't be sad! The right to change the nostalgia for his brother to the concern for his current brother (adopted by your mother). Actually, my father and I also have a sister, and she died of illness when I was less than five years old.

Oh Daddy, we're all in the same boat! It's just that you already have children around your knees, but I still have a long way to go, and my daughter always feels that she is always at a crossroads in life, where will she go in the future? There is really no definite number of difficulties and dangers.

I couldn't help but laugh at first glance! How old are you? As a father, I don't have your daughter around my knees! Although I haven't seen you yet, I think you must be beautiful, intelligent, and full of temperament. But you have to know that people have a family heart and a lock. Although you are still a little girl, Dad has found that you have already read a little bit of life.

Hee-hee, Dad, you don't see me, how do you know that I'm beautiful, intelligent and temperamental? But my daughter is very grateful for your comfort to me; I'll have to get by. Dad, I am also a little woman who greatly admires beauty and pursues beauty, if there is no more beauty in my life, then I would rather let the person who remains in the hearts of others will always be healthy, natural, and high-spirited, rather than living me......

Haha, Dad's sixth sense, anyway, my daughter is either beautiful and intelligent or naturally beautiful, oops, child, the problem you said seems to be social again. You have a lot of potential in creative consciousness, and the prerequisite for creation should be a unique language. Some people say that suffering produces writers, anger produces poets, and material and money can change everything, although these are not necessarily true, but still. What I want to advise you is not to be in a hurry, and to practice your pen well. Let's talk about a media joke, saying that it is east, west, north, south, and middle, and everyone will copy it! If you copy it, you will publish it elsewhere. Whether this is true or not, it can make a person who loves art very uncomfortable! Let me tell you, I'm studying at a home magazine, but I'm often thinking about my hometown, which is thousands of miles away, and I'm nervous and bored when I'm away, so I have to study because I'm the editor-in-chief of a monthly magazine. It is easy for people to pass through the fashionable or to come, but if they can find their roots in it, it will take the will of God to be conveyed by true angels. Therefore, I believe that there is always its own value regulation and function, and what fashion cannot convey in depth can fulfill its obligations. In short, we can't hope for luxury, but we can dream, maybe one day our father and daughter will embrace the spring together!

Dad, you said it so well! Although we are not optimistic about the current situation, we have come together because of love! Yes, it is also a dream that I have had since I was a child, I love writing very much, in fact, I even won an essay award when I was in junior high school! However, due to the hardships of my upbringing, my enthusiasm was gradually frozen. It's great to be able to fight with my dad now! Thank you dad for guiding her daughter.

Oh, yes. You're right, we're fighting together! Haha, Dad said, you are not only naturally beautiful, but also have a unique talent for writing, you see that you say this is enough to prove that my daughter is extraordinary! In junior high school, he won an essay award. I believe that my daughter will overcome difficulties and make persistent efforts! Now Dad will guide you. Regarding the article on Little Brother, I would like to suggest that you reconsider the title and focus on writing about your clear and hazy feelings.

That's good Dad, I will, thank you so much for your advice......

Another morning came, and as if she was addicted to something, she opened the secret file again to see what her father had said. But he didn't say anything. So she immediately called a paragraph:

Good morning, Dad! Yesterday you must have had something important to do, so you ignored me. Alas, Dad! I racked my brains and found nothing! Daddy, my good father, good father, help your daughter think about it. Hee-hee, you only need to turn your brain in one circle, which is more effective than a hundred turns in my head. Can you help your daughter change it? Please!

Haha, I'm sorry, Dad went to the branch yesterday. Leave my good girl alone! Dad said before, don't trust me too much, I have a head just as ordinary. But the father could not refuse his daughter's request.

I think this kind of sad family affair can be touching even if you don't pay attention to art, because our flow permeates between the lines of the novel, and I am afraid that you will think too much and hurt your mind, so I have not discussed more creative issues with you. You pay great attention to the color and weight of language in your creation, which is of course commendable, our mother tongue is the most magical, but in the creation we must create a reading effect artistically, generally speaking, can "deceive" readers who can't wait to read so as to get to the bottom of it, and explore the content, there is an artistic magnetic field in it.

I think you can write (design foreshadowing) from the little brother who is now (adopted by your parents), and show the clear and hazy and saddest feelings in your memory through your own emotional changes, in fact, the saddest thing is these two: what you can't remember is your brother's face (because you were young at the time, so the impression is vague), so you often try your best to recall; What I remember clearly is that my brother's situation and feelings after being bitten by a wolf were very painful. In short, it is necessary to put the focus of review and pain to the end, so that there will be a "flywheel effect" in the progression of emotions......

Oh, Dad, then I'll do as you say...... Oh Dad, I ran in after a while and you didn't come in, where did you go? I'm going to post it up for you now. Whatever you do, there's something to go.

Oh kid, I've seen what you changed and posted, and it feels pretty good. It is to write in this way, to press the focus to the end, so that the reader can understand the hardships and sufferings of life at that time from the heavy feelings, so as to cherish the present.

Thank you again for your kind advice, Dad, Dad, and good man! I have a good dad! Good Dad!

Haha, all the big girls are singing nursery rhymes again. Why did I see a good article in the call for papers folder, I don't know which heavenly daughter or a fairy on earth wrote it? But hey, hey! I beg your pardon, Dad doesn't have time right now......

Dad, I said Daddy! Don't you see that your daughter wrote it? Hee-hee, I deliberately posted it there without a signature, let you guess! Let's see if you can recognize me from the writing, Dad, you really recognize me. Okay Dad, if you're too busy, yours first, it's okay. Don't be a veteran who cares about his daughter.

yes, that's the sixth sense, too. You don't know how many times you've called me dad, and I don't know how many times you've been moved. But I remember very clearly, our father and daughter have been married for more than a month, and last time I was going to go down to pay the press fee to see my daughter by the way, but because of the entangled affairs, I had to ask someone to bring you, so I really want to meet and talk to my daughter. If one day one of us accidentally meets, haha, Dad really wants to hear the good girl in the outside world call me Dad in person, don't you blush, like a "distant" bee calling me.

Dad thinks the title of your article is very good! It looks plain but very textured. It is a natural sigh from the heart, and it is also the expression of the theme; The article is also quite good. Oh...... I'm sorry kid! At this time, Dad is going to a meeting......

Dad, I'm looking forward to the day we meet, hee-hee, what day is that? Red dragonfly in the sunset...... Okay, if you're busy, you can go, we'll all be good.

Under the same roof, look up and meet, haha! Dad turned into a red dragonfly and met you in childhood, what day was that? It's a pity that Dad has entered the prime of life, and then he is old. The days are flying so fast, it's another day, the sun is shining in through the window, the weather is so good...... Oh yes, in a nutshell, you found the best feeling in this article. In fact, there are generally two main factors that stimulate writing: external (natural, social) and internal (spiritual, spiritual).

Hee-hee, Dad, you also talked about dragonflies, and I'm smiling trickly here. I'm just putting together a lot of small things in this article. At first, I inexplicably wrote halfway through before I thought of the topic, and only then did I open up ideas. Is it good or bad to write like this, I don't know? But I wish I could walk along the road on a winter morning and run in the warm sun, as described in the article. But in fact, the intense work turned me into a lazy cat who didn't want to get out of bed.

Young snoozes generally have a lazy cat spirit. So this problem was inevitable for my young daughter.

Personally, I think good headlines tend to be inspirational. It will be like a star in its mind, and it will be a cow if you can catch it in a flash! You sometimes look like a full adult, but this article is full of childlike fun: "It is approaching winter, the morning sun seems to be sneezing when it has a cold, and the earth and sky are raising light mist; The earth is sleeping, like a man's chest rising and falling, and the golden sunlight is like a transformed quilt"...... Look how beautiful your descriptions are! Dad saw the "girl running in the golden sunshine...... With these accurate and vivid depictions, the reader has a comfortable feeling. However, due to age restrictions, it is impossible for the article to have a deeper ideological content. However, you are a talented girl and I believe that you will soon have a depth of thought.

Dad, I had the feelings you talked about when the article was first written. Just don't know how to deepen the content of your thoughts?

Just dig as much as you can. Thoughts will grow with you. For individual creation, I think the so-called ideological content is actually the real self and the soul of the self "awkward" trouble, haha, the more awkward the trouble, the deeper the thought, in fact, some ideas should not be afraid of absurdity, strange and unique ideas are often born in absurdity. I'm not sure if that's the right thing to say.

Alas, Dad! Thoughts will grow with me! My daughter is laughing at what you said, but she doesn't understand it very well. Are you talking about trying to get out the thoughts that are different from ordinary people in the depths of your heart?

Daddy's thumbs up here, that's smart! But dad usually talks a little nonsense in front of his daughter, you understand it right, that's what happened! You think, when we leave our homeland and leave our ancestors, we are away all the year round, and sometimes we may think crankily when we are lonely and depressed.

Hehe, my daughter is willing to listen to her father's nonsense! I often have the loneliness and depression you mentioned, and cranky thoughts are inevitable. What is this pursuit of life? I'm really lost. Sometimes I want to leave this company and go somewhere else, but I feel that sometimes, I am not used to the good attitude of some smart people, so I spend every day in tension, boredom, and boredom, if you don't inspire me to write, I really don't know how to get rid of my loneliness?

I think this person is mostly lonely because of his writing. In fact, I have a hunch for you, this is the fate of workers, and Dad is also a lonely person in the company, and he may not have been here for too long. Although you know some other trades, the harsh reality tells us that just because you know something or can do it doesn't mean you can do it. Now everywhere talk about connections and teams, and the so-called smart or good mentality will definitely succeed, these chicken soup sayings will make Chinese bad, because in my opinion, mentality does not necessarily equal quality, smart depends on where it is used. A robber can be very smart and have a good mentality...... So don't worry about it when you're so young, do things well is a good attitude.

As for what is the pursuit of life? Dad himself is confused, and he has to think hard to say a little famous, hehe, but I don't have time. Therefore, we have to sense and comprehend in real life, and accept enlightening life experiences or information, but some information cannot be life guides, and celebrity quotes cannot be our signposts towards the future. Therefore, child, I can only believe that thoughts will grow with you!