Chapter 016 in the same issue

The word is the face of the article, and it is often said that the word is like the person, the word is good-looking, and the article can add an impression point in the first place. Zhang Tan's good handwriting quickly hooked Wang Conglun's spirit.

At the top of the first page of the letter, a large letter is written in large letters in a pen line.

"The four famous people captured the Kanto region."

"The Four Famous Catches? It's kind of interesting to write about catching fast. Wang Conglun looked down the title.

"He once smashed the seventy-six horsemen of the evil wind and sand in the endless desert; In the most chilling and icy Kurotaki River, he captured the murderous Rolling Dragon King Xue You. ”

"He had been in ambush for a day and a night in a place where it was hot enough to bake an egg; It is also in the terrible valley of Kaman, which travels thousands of miles. ”

"He once served as the governor of the seven provinces, and he was an official who had to bow down when he saw him, and he also worked as a pig butcher in the market when he was undercover."

"He's killed people, and he's saved people."

"Now willingly still working under the door of the man he admires most......"

"Hmm." Wang Conglun's original contempt was gradually replaced by surprise, "This start is very imposing, quite a bit of 'the powder face contains the spring power is not revealed, and the red lips are not laughed and smelled first', the first voice is the first to grab people, the first to win people!" ”

Thinking about it, keep reading.

The description continues: "He was twenty years old, and he didn't look ugly at all; His sword killed the people he wanted to kill, and for more than a decade, only one person could escape his pursuit and pursuit. He is never excited, and when the enemy is agitated or afraid, that is when he captures and kills. This is his usual style, like a wolf chasing a deer. ”

But when he took the order of extermination against these unforgivable men, he pursued the enemy and his men in desperation. Whether it is public or private, although, he knows that he is probably not the opponent of the other party. ”

"He, one person, the other party, thirteen people, and a wolf. Before he learned to draw his sword, the other party had been a wolf for more than twenty years. This man was the only one he couldn't pursue, and he nearly died at the hands of the other man. ”

"He narrowly escaped back, and three years later, he has to hunt down again."

"He was arrogant, withdrawn, and stoic."

"He uses the sword secretively, spicily, and quickly."

"His hand is firm; He's got an arrow galloping......"

"Wow!" Wang Conglun exclaimed uncontrollably, the contempt in his eyes had already dissipated, and only surprise and surprise remained, "This is a martial arts that a freshman in high school can write?" It's really amazing, I have also reviewed a lot of martial arts works, the beginning is so amazing, and the portrayal of the characters is so focused, rare, rare! ”

In just a short space, the origin of this person, the origin of the incident, the character of the character, and the number of martial arts are all explained. The text is lifelike, there is no jerky feeling at all, I can't believe that this is from the hand of a high school student. Those martial arts masters in Hong Kong and Taiwan are probably at this level. ”

Wang Conglun died happily, and after only looking at the beginning, he had a strong premonition that he had unearthed a piece of gold, a gold full of golden light.

And the more he looked down, the more Wang Conglun could feel that this freshman high school student whose real name is Zhang Tan and whose pen name is Tan Zhang, and his writing skills are definitely not under Yang Rebellion, Xiao Linden, and Ye Run, who have been unanimously affirmed by them. On the contrary, compared with the slightly pretentious at the beginning, the subsequent text is more simple.

"This is not like the level that ordinary teenagers can write, talent!"

Wang Conglun quickly read the identity of the protagonist, the four famous catchers, ruthless, cold-blooded, and cold-blooded in the pursuit of life: "The names of the four famous catchers are very domineering, this seems to be a complete story structure, and the protagonist who is written now is just one of this complete story, interesting, interesting!" ”

The neat killing, the unpretentious description, the perfect details, and the atmospheric layout, Wang Conglun likes it the more he looks at it.

It's been a long time since I've read such a high-quality martial arts novel.

When the fifth of the thirteen murderers was killed in cold blood, Wang Conglun's intuition rose from his feet to the top of his head, and he almost broke the Heavenly Spirit Cover and erupted out.

Subsequently, cold-blooded fell into the encirclement of four people.

It also made Wang Conglun's heart and eyes fall from the sky to the ground in an instant, for fear that cold-blooded would not be able to escape this fatal counter-killing, and as mentioned above, cold-blooded knew that he was afraid that he would not be able to defeat the other party.

"You have to hold on!" Wang Conglun exclaimed in his heart, and then turned the page.

Then, staring at a pair of eyes, staring at the hands.

Ten pages of the letter had already been read by him.

Nope.

Just the highlights are gone.

"Ahh Wang Conglun really wanted to swear, such a wonderful place, such a critical place, such a dangerous time, there was no follow-up, isn't this an appetizing.

……

"Well, this manuscript is good, isn't it?" The editor-in-chief of the story edition comfortably admired Wang Conglun's expression from contempt to amazement, and when he saw this manuscript, there was also such a change.

Wang Conglun sighed at the thin ten pages of paper, and said with unfinished admiration: "It's not only good, the text is excellent, the writing is also excellent, and the story is even better, it is definitely the first-rate work of quality among the manuscripts we have received in the "Martial Arts Edition" these days." ”

"Stop, please note that this manuscript is invested in our "Story Edition", and I have decided to publish this "Four Famous Capture of Kanto", a new martial arts work with a good flavor, improve the pattern of the "Story Edition", and adjust the reader's taste, which is very good." Zhang Yiyuan stretched out his hand and made a pause.

"Lao Zhang, you have to be kind, our "Martial Arts Edition" is preparing for a trial issue, which determines whether our "Martial Arts Edition" can be successfully launched, so we urgently need high-quality works to support the faΓ§ade. Lao Zhang, you have always been affectionate and righteous, this favor will not help it, rest assured, not in vain, in the next issue, we will also give you a good manuscript! ”

Seeing Wang Conglun's "low voice", Zhang Yiyuan touched his chin proudly: "Alas, how can I be the kind of person who is not emotional, and it is not impossible to let it be given to you." ”

"Then thank you Lao Zhang, I'll invite you to dinner another day!"

"Don't worry, I'm not done yet, I have a plan."

"What assumptions?" Wang Conglun became nervous again, for fear that Zhang Yiyuan would regret it and not hand over "The Four Famous Capture of Kanto" to him.

This short ten pages and two chapters of text is nothing, the key is that this novel of more than 10,000 words is obviously just the beginning of a work, and there is still a lot of content in the follow-up, if you can't take the first two chapters, you can't publish it in the future, and this loss will be big.

"How did this Zhang Tan do it, didn't he see so many advertisements in our "Martial Arts Version", and he actually voted for the "Story Version", which made me too passive." In Wang Conglun's heart, he complained a little about Zhang Tan, but thinking that Zhang Tan was just a freshman in high school, he was relieved again, it must be that the other party was young and not very clear about the submission.

I'm afraid that I've only read "Ancient Legends: Story Edition", so I submitted it according to the above submission address, and I didn't know that "Ancient Legends: Martial Arts Edition" was being launched.

Zhang Yiyuan didn't know that Wang Conglun had changed many thoughts, and said to himself: "I think so, the next issue of your "Martial Arts Edition" is a trial issue, right, after the trial issue is the first issue, these two issues will definitely not have a good circulation, and the accumulation of readers is still small." It's better to let "Story Edition" bring you a little bit of readers. ”

"Oh, how?" Hearing Zhang Yiyuan's words, Wang Conglun relaxed.

"We published the two issues together, and our story page published the beginning, but we will not publish the follow-up, and inform readers that they can subscribe to the "Martial Arts Edition" to watch the follow-up. If you like to watch martial arts, you will definitely subscribe to your "Martial Arts Edition", and if you don't like to watch it, you won't publish it anymore and you won't have any opinions, right. ”

"That's true, Lao Zhang, you are so far-sighted, so it's decided!"