Alcoholic's note: The following is a book review by Brother Liu Wannian, similar to a book review, the more the merrier, and the alcoholic is deeply grateful.

The heart of the minister is a magnetic needle stone, and the guide is endless~ Every time I read this, I am full of blood ~ To be honest, I hate the type of alternate history, the drunkard is a rare applaudation and popularity on the Internet, but I read about 1 million words, I feel very tired, I feel that there is no connotation in it, if you have to study what system, science ~ then readers can go to see the history of the Ming Dynasty or discuss the history of the Ming Dynasty, we want to see nothing more than a kind of feelings and ideals to sustenance, this book I found is obviously better than the Ming, But emotionally, I feel that I don't have a good grasp of Wen Tianxiang's psychology and feelings~

A novel is a novel, a novel is not a theoretical work, the guide has been written so far, the drunkard's writing skills and historical background are impeccable, and readers dare not beak ~ But what is most lacking now is the description of the characters, Wen Tianxiang's unique compassion and resoluteness, as well as the complex psychology he faced, the author did not show us, although the author used a lot of side descriptions, but I feel that side descriptions can never replace positive descriptions. I hope that the drunkard will write better and better, and gradually get better

It is rare for a person to show his true self only in times of difficulty and crisis, and it is rare for him to be generous and righteous in the face of the enemy's bayonets, but it is even more rare to maintain his dignity in the face of the enemy's prolonged torture and temptations! If the Manchu Qing killed him because of Hong Chengchou's refusal to surrender, instead of imprisoning him, then who will know who the real hero is in descendants! Wen Tianxiang chose to die on a hunger strike, which is the most test of people's endurance and unyielding death, food is placed in front of him at any time, and he just doesn't eat, this spirit is always worthy of sighing!

People are not afraid of death, Wen Tianxiang I don't think it can be surprised, in the end, Wen Tianxiang is afraid of the name behind him, he can't leave his name in history and die, or he is angered by the brutal rule of the Yuan people and generously righteous, I think this problem is also a contradiction in Wen Tianxiang's eyes~ Who has not died since ancient times, and he has left Dan to take care of his sweat. This poem is not only a relief for his generosity, but also a warning to future generations~ And whether Wen Tianxiang is loyal to the rivers and lakes or the temple, if it is a peasant uprising to change the dynasty, will Wen Tianxiang die generously? If the same will die, then Fang Xiaoru, who was punished by the Ten Clans, is not more dignified! This is also a contradiction

In the years when the country was broken, I think the tone of the novel should be gloomy and tragic but hopeful~ But I can't see this feeling that can only be hidden between the lines from the novel, and I can't see the contradictions and waves in the heart of the protagonist Wen Tianxiang~ Although it is said that Wen Zhong has integrated into Wen Tianxiang in the plot, it is not Wen Zhong who replaced Wen Tianxiang as I imagined at the beginning, but this integration seems so perfect, but think about it carefully, an elite of modern civilization, and a master of ancient culture. It's that easy to blend together? Fusion in just 7 days? The author strives to make everything reasonable and realistic, but this biggest unreasonableness is there

Understand that alcoholics must substitute themselves into that environment when writing, and imagine how to develop and win if they master these techniques, but I feel that such alcoholics are not real alcoholics, a alcoholic is completely intoxicated with wine when drinking, and completely intoxicated by the taste is really an inferior alcoholic, and a high-level alcoholic should be a drunkard's intention is not to drink, to be drunk, but to be in the mood~ Zhuangzi said that he didn't know whether he was a butterfly or Zhuangzi, but in fact it didn't mean that he didn't know. It is to say that he himself is neither a butterfly nor a Zhuangzi, but that he is transcendent from the outside of things~~ I often see readers commit suicide for the sake of articles, and it is rare to see an author who commits suicide by writing an article~

Having said so much, let's summarize my central idea - 1. The soft details of the article should be strengthened (the inner feelings of the characters, the atmosphere of the novel environment) 2. Is the drunkard thinking more about humanistic feelings, and don't completely immerse himself in the world of his own structure 3, Wen Tianxiang is one of the most virtuous and sentimental representatives of our nation, and he is really my idol, please write it well, it will be too sad and disappointing if you don't write well, and I feel no different from those traitors~ Treat national heroes, or don't write, write it well! Or it's a defilement of the hero~

Below is the bug found by Brother Weasel, which has been fixed.

Catch insects for the drunkards to see if they can change some wine to drink. ^_^1, seventy miles northwest of the city, there is also the glossy city and the Taiping Silver Field, which is the same name as Wen Tianxiang's defeat of the enemy, can hide, if Wen Tianxiang does not chase, everyone can still find a place to escape. ............ "It's Lin Qi", Huang Qujian was sharp-eyed, hit the back of a horse, and took the lead to the northeast (changed to west) and ran. The gloss is northwest of Shaowu, and both cities are on the left bank of Shaowu Creek, and it is impossible to run northeast (to cross the river, and both are mountains).

2, the luster is lost, Shao Wujun no longer has a place for Huang to go to the disease, he can't go east, there are chasing soldiers to the west, and the routs around him are slipping less and less, and they can reach Xixi, and only Huang Tianhua and a few henchmen are left. ............ "Then turn over the mountains in front of you, it is the new city, that is the ground of the Jianchang army, the Jianchang army is in the west of the Shaowu army, and there are no pursuers (there are ambushes) in the west." The chasing soldiers are in the south (Lin Qi), bypass the luster and continue to go north to the Taiping Silver Field, I am afraid that the Taiping Silver Field will also be occupied, and then the Tang Dynasty, who occupies the glossy city, will chase after it, so I will make dumplings, so I have to go to the new city in the southwest direction.

3. If it weren't for the timely response of the generals, it may be that Huang Quji's troops would have fled to Jianning Mansion. Jianning Mansion was changed to Jianchang Army, and Jianning Mansion was east of Shaowu.

In the future, I will continue to sort out the book reviews and put them in it. The drunkards are not familiar with the history of the Song Dynasty and the geography of Fujian, so I hope you will find more mistakes and improve this book.

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