ps:Comrade Lao Hua went back to his hometown for the holidays.,This chapter is automatically updated.,I wish all the people who read the book a happy Dragon Boat Festival and a happy family.,I ask you to celebrate the festival and don't forget to support me enthusiastically.,Thank you.。

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The title of Mr. Dai's review is: "The essay can still be written like this".

The subtitle is: An Analysis of Xiao Fei's Two Essays.

At the beginning of the article, Mr. Dai wrote in a very relaxed and casual manner, I recently read two essays in the supplement of the "People's Daily" that can move my heart, both of which are from the same author's hand, the author's name is Xiao Fei, read the editor's note after the article, I know that the author is only 19 years old, but his writing is sophisticated and mature, and the novelty of the interest shown in the article is breathtaking. It's really unbelievable that such a profound text full of life philosophy and life meaning was actually written by a teenager.

Regarding Xiao Fei's two essays, Dai Houying made an analysis and comment, and listed the following successes of Xiao Fei's essays:

First, the author makes good use of personification and metaphor, the words are concise, precise and vivid, and the article is written in a simple and flavorful way, which makes people feel fragrant when they read it.

Second, although the materials he chooses are ordinary and visible, he can explore the unfamiliarity and novelty of art through personal meaning, which is very refreshing, easy to read, intriguing, and thought-provoking.

Third, the article continues the broad and profound tradition of Chinese prose, and sees the real and beautiful life experience in the small places. Prose masterpieces like this are really rare now.

Fourth, the author's pen has done the most poetic treatment of his own native land, and uses a poetic form to think about life and describe the philosophy of life that is closest to nature and the earth.

A 19-year-old boy can make extraordinary shots and write essays to such a point, which is enough to prove that he is wonderful.

Xiao Fei carefully read Dai Houying's comments on his work and was very pleased.

In other words, this is the first time in two lifetimes that he has seen a literary review that evaluates his work so highly.

"Teacher Dai, this evaluation is a bit high." Xiao Fei said.

Dai Houying shook his head and smiled: "My evaluation is very objective, maybe you yourself haven't realized the literary value of your works, but I've seen too much in the past few decades, and it's really rare to be able to write prose to your level." ”

"Oh, Mr. Dai's encouragement makes me feel motivated now, and I think maybe I can write better." Xiao Fei hurriedly expressed his determination.

"I also believe that you are still young! There's still a lot of room for improvement, but even now you're already amazing, Xiao Fei, do you have any new works recently? I suggest that you submit more articles to mainstream literary journals and show your face more, which will be very beneficial to your future development. Dai Houying suggested.

Xiao Fei listened and touched the thick manuscript in his bag.

He thought, maybe it's time to take it out for Dai Houying to see, and then ask her to recommend it for him.

It's just that he always feels that when he does this, the so-called drama of traveling thousands of miles to visit his idol is tainted with utilitarian flaws.

Dai Houying is a very smart person.

When she saw that she had pulled out such a thick stack of manuscripts, she must have immediately known that the real purpose of her visit to Shanghai this time was to take advantage of the situation.

Thinking about it, Xiao Fei was a little ashamed.

It seems that the thickness of his skin is still too thin, and this aspect needs to be strengthened.

Well, my careful thinking is always exposed in front of the glass-eyed Teacher Dai, so don't hide it anymore and take it out as soon as possible.

"Teacher Dai, I came this time with a long novel and a short literary review that I wrote, and I would like to ask you to take a look at it."

"Oh? There is still a long story written? Then I'll have to take a closer look. Dai Houying's face showed a strong interest.

What kind of long story can such a young man who is so amazing and so beautiful that he is almost demonic can he write?

She's looking forward to it.

However, Dai Houying doesn't think that Xiao Fei can control the genre of novels at this time.

Mainly because the writing of novels is too much of a test of the author's life accumulation and life experience, a rural boy who has not experienced much life can write good stories, but he must not be able to write excellent novels.

Dai Houying thought to herself, Xiao Fei must have written an emotional novel, the hazy love of adolescence always makes many young people sink into it and can't extricate themselves.

Love is an eternal theme in literature, and young literature lovers start from this aspect at the beginning.

Xiao Fei took out his manuscript from his bag, opened the oiled paper bag, and handed it to Dai Houying with both hands.

Seeing the thick stack of manuscripts, Dai Houying was taken aback.

She didn't expect that the long story Xiao Fei said would be such a tome.

It's not too easy to write so long.

Dai Houying believes that Xiao Fei's writing and literary talent are not to say, and what she doubts now is whether he can tell such a grand narrative.

"Teacher Dai, the above is a small review draft I wrote, which has five or six thousand words, you can read the short one first and give me your opinions." Xiao Fei said.

"Oh, okay."

Dai Houying said, picking up the dozen or so pages of small manuscripts placed on top of the novel manuscript.

I took a look at the title first, and the title turned out to be "Literature is dead, please burn paper if you have something".

This topic is too bold, and it directly sentences literature to death, and the saying "please burn paper if you have something" is very novel and interesting.

Regarding the recession of literature, Dai Houying naturally has a deep understanding.

Pure literary magazines were dumped in batches.

Even if he is still alive, he is far less nourishing and chic than he used to be.

However, if you want to say that literature will die, or even that literature is dead, Dai Houying does not believe it, how can literature die? If there was no literature, what would the world be like?

Young people after all!

It's still inevitable that you want to be grandstanding.

Dai Houying thought so and began to read this little article. She read and read as she read it, and her brow changed from a slight wrinkle to a tight wrinkle, and she found that she had a tendency to be persuaded.

Because of many strange phenomena in the literary circle mentioned in Xiao Fei's article, she also has a deep understanding.

But she doesn't think much of the idea that "online literature" will replace traditional literature in the future.

For the Internet, Dai Houying naturally knows, it is a new and very magical thing, you can communicate with people in distant places through the telephone line.

However, it is unrealistic to say that online literature will be incubated on the Internet, and this kind of literature will even replace traditional literature.

Another point that Dai Houying wondered about was that Xiao Fei was just a rural child, how could he make such a far-reaching forward-looking prediction? It's not scientific.