One morning, in addition to harvesting a yellow carp, Zhang Tan also bought a catfish beard weighing more than ten catties, two or three catties of hairy crabs, a few fat yellow eels and loaches, and more than a catty of river shrimp and white shrimp.

River shrimp is probably also called green shrimp, looks a bit like shrimp, widely distributed in the Yangtze River Basin, this kind of shrimp thief essence, difficult to catch, sold is more expensive than crayfish. White shrimp is more expensive, also known as Taihu Lake white shrimp, because it is abundant in Taihu Lake, but there are also many Chaohu lakes on this side of Heqi, which spread to the surrounding small lakes and rivers.

River shrimp and white shrimp grow almost little, often mixed together, especially after dyeing algae, they are gray-gray-green, not very clear, anyway, the taste is almost the same, everyone is too lazy to distinguish.

The shrimp of river shrimp and white shrimp, after peeling out, are made into shrimp paste, which is Zhang Tan's favorite, and the taste is fragrant and delicious, soft and tender. Eat with shrimp paste, and you can eat two large bowls.

The harvest is very rewarding.

When I got home, it was almost noon.

Tan Mingxia has already rushed back from Dayang Town, and at the same time there is also her sister Zhang Yan, it is because she knows that they are coming back today, Zhang Tan will go out to catch fish with Brother Lobby, so that her mother can cook a delicious meal.

"Mom, I got some fresh river from the three stations, and I made a good meal at noon today."

"Go to the third station, is there pumping over there?"

"Hmm."

"I'll see." Tan Mingxia took Zhang Tan's net pocket and opened it, "Not bad, hairy crabs, river shrimp, ouch, such a big silver carp beard." ”

"It's more than ten pounds."

"You caught it?"

"No, I bought it from someone else."

"You know how to spend money indiscriminately." Tan Mingxia said with disgust, and then commanded Zhang Yan, "Swallow, go and peel out the shrimp from the river shrimp." ”

After handing over all the fresh water to his mother, Zhang Tan turned to run and took the yellow carp in the bucket in the lobby brother, took out a basin from his house, filled it with water, and put the yellow carp in it. He plans to go to the town to see if there are any big fish tanks for sale, this kind of yellow carp is rare, and it looks good to raise.

"Mom, I'm out the door."

When he arrived in the town, Zhang Tan walked around, but he saw stalls selling fish tanks, but they were all small fish tanks, and there were some small colored carp with a finger length in them, which were all ornamental carp and did not grow big. asked the boss, and said that there was no big fish tank, and seeing that it was about to be dinner time, Zhang Tan had no choice but to return.

"It seems that I have to go to Hehuai to buy it, but it is not easy to get it back, and I have to find a car, which is a bit troublesome."

Anyway, summer is boring, so Zhang Tan decided to go to the city in the afternoon to buy it back.

When he got home, Zhang Tan suddenly found that the basin he had filled with yellow carp was gone.

I can't find it if I look left or right.

"Hey, Mom, where's my carp?"

"The carp is here." Tan Mingxia's voice came from the kitchen.

"Where?"

"In the pot."

"What!" Zhang Tan hurriedly rushed to the kitchen, and then saw that in the tumbling fish soup, a fish that had been shuttled with more than a dozen knives stared at the dead eyes, in the steaming pot, exuding a rich fish fragrance.

In this situation, Zhang Tan wanted to cry without tears: "Mom, why did you burn my yellow carp, I want to raise it!" ”

"What kind of yellow carp to raise, except for the different colors, is there any difference from the carp sold on the street?"

"It's just that the color is different, I raised it."

"There are small carp sold on the street, so if you really want to raise them, go buy a few and come back."

“……”

At lunch, Zhang Tan ate most of the braised carp with grief. The remaining half was eaten by grandfather Zhang Henong, and both of them liked to eat fish.

The food was extremely delicious, prompting Zhang Tan to cook three bowls of rice, and they were almost finished.

But the mood still hasn't melted, and there is still a touch of sadness.

When the digestion was finished, he ran to the backyard under the pear tree, under which there was a small bench modified swing, on which Zhang Tan sat on, holding the guitar, and played and sang in a sad tone: "If every fish is an excerpt, release your joys and sorrows in the play." If the world loses its colorful masks, will there be people who will be nostalgic and regretful? ”

A little yellow dog raised by the uncle's family heard Zhang Tan's guitar and ran over happily, wagging his tail at Zhang Tan.

Just now Zhang Tan sent a bunch of fish bones to the little yellow dog, and the little yellow dog has since remembered the "generous" Zhang Tan.

Reaching out and touching the little yellow dog's head, Zhang Tan remembered a long time ago.

A big yellow dog that was raised at home.

The name of the big yellow dog is rhubarb, which looks similar to this little yellow dog, and they are all ordinary local dogs in the countryside. At that time, Zhang Tan was still young, and his favorite thing to do was to run around with rhubarb, although rhubarb was docile and timid, he may have the blood of a wolf dog, and he was very tall and majestic.

Those little heroes who bullied Zhang Tan were all frightened by Zhang Tan's instructions to rhubarb.

Unfortunately, rhubarb later ingested rat poison by mistake and was buried in the soil.

"Xiao Huang, don't eat rat poison in the future."

……

Tan Mingxia's bowl of braised carp completely dispelled Zhang Tan's leisure in raising fish and planting flowers.

After two days of idleness, he quickly adjusted his mind and prepared to concentrate on writing. The creation of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" has to be intensified, and once Li Yan has negotiated the publication matters, he will have to make every effort to prepare for publication. After all, he couldn't copy all of Jin Yong's original version, because he didn't have Du Niang in his head.

What can be done is to reuse your own language style according to your own memory and tell the story.

His writing is biased towards Jin Yong's simple style, and under the deliberate reference, there is not much difference between him and Jin Yong's martial arts taste. And the writing thing, to say that it is important, it is indeed important, it affects the fluency of reading, but to say that it is not important, in fact, it is not important, as long as the story can be told satisfactorily.

What really moves people is the story itself.

After all, Jin Yong's works are popular, not only the writing of the novel, but also the adapted TV series, which are also popular. It can be seen that the story he tells is the core part, and Zhang Tan can grasp this core part. Incorporate a little more excellent highlights and jokes from other works, and the whole story will be even more rich and complete.

And, most importantly, Zhang Tan was able to fix bugs. "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" was serialized by Jin Yong in the newspaper, and in order to catch up with the manuscript at that time, there were omissions in many places, and even if it was a revised version, it still retained a lot of bugs.

For example, Ke Zhenwei said that his eyes were blind by the black wind, and then he introduced that he was blind when he met the other six heroes, and the six heroes didn't know why he was blind. But later, when Ke Zhenwei was in a temple with Ouyang Feng and others, he recalled that when the Six Heroes were young, he actually remembered that Xiao Zhu Cong shook his head and read a book.

There is also the problem of snake venom, Ouyang Feng's snake venom is very powerful, it can poison N sharks, Yang Kang died on snake venom, as a result, Guo Jing's fourth master Nan Xiren was bitten by a snake on his tongue, and he carried it for N days, and only when Guo Jing came did he write that the murderer was a ......

There is also Hong Qigong asked Guo Jing to write a fake "Nine Yin True Scripture" to Ouyang Feng, Guo Jing wrote it scribbly, Ouyang Feng asked Guo Jing to verify the truth and falsehood, and then wrote it silently a few times, but as a result, Guo Jing turned out to be word for word! Did he memorize it at the same time when he scribbled?

ANOTHER, THE BIGGEST BUG IS HUANG RONG'S AGE, IN THE STORIES TOLD BY DIFFERENT PEOPLE, HUANG RONG'S AGE IS UP AND DOWN, ONE WILL BE A FEW YEARS OLDER THAN GUO JING, AND THE OTHER WILL BE MORE THAN TEN YEARS OLDER THAN GUO JING.

All in all, these are the things that Zhang Tan needs to modify and overcome.

There is a long way to go to create a classic.

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PS: Some people say that they don't understand the ranking of Lao Zhang's family, so a pedigree table is specially attached here.

Grandparents: Zhang Henong & He Luxue

Parents: Uncle, Zhang Quanshun ranks second, third, fourth, and sister-in-law

Peers: Uncle (lobby brother Zhang Qiang, second cousin, lobby sister), Zhang Quanshun family (Zhang Yan, Zhang Tan), third uncle's family (third cousin, third cousin, sixth cousin, fourth cousin), fourth uncle's family (fifth cousin), this generation, there are more children, boys are ranked together, Zhang Tan ranks fourth, girls rank together, Zhang Tan ranks second.

The E era Internet café was opened by Zhang Quanshun and Tan Mingxia, the daughter-in-law of the second cousin, and the daughter-in-law of the fourth uncle.