From time to time, I would go back to the chapters I had written, and I realized that I was really bad at first (blushing, sweating, but I didn't bother to revise the chapters on a large scale), and the more I went to the later chapters, the more I felt better than the previous ones--- I felt personal.

Sometimes, when you see something that is inappropriate or inappropriate, you will change it.

For example, a sentence in chapter 55 "Unexpected-2": Even Grand Duke Ivan couldn't help but wonder: "What is this crazy woman calculating in her heart?" ”

Looking at this sentence now, I myself feel that the phrase "what is the calculation in my heart" is too Chinese--- perhaps, daily thinking habits will be involuntarily revealed in writing.

After thinking about it, I changed this sentence to: Even Grand Duke Ivan couldn't help but wonder: "What is this crazy woman thinking?" Dare to defy the authority of Emperor Eric. "It's more contextual.

I also hope that book friends will comment more.

(December 6, 2014 morning at home)