Chapter 17 The tip of the iceberg of Qu Jingmo
At this time, Xu Fu had no external pressure, and he could calm down and look at the secret "mysteries" of the flute. The so-called mystery is essentially a quantitative method for evaluating the quality of a work.
It's also very simple to operate. Like after learning the flute, he quickly turned over his work, and his fame skyrocketed.
But if no one clicks it out, it may not be able to figure out the way for the rest of your life. So I can only judge my works by the idealistic "I feel ......". thought he was good to heaven, and then he was slapped in the face by reality......
Xu Fu used this "inductive method" to summarize the second batch of storyboards into words, and found that it could be self-justified. After all, the storyboard script is transformed from the story script, so there will be no problems of rambling and chaotic plots. But at a glance, you can see that there is a problem with the drag in the storyboard.
The flute claims that he "likes to draw pictures with the same meaning", as do Xu Fu and Huang Tingting. In the second batch of storyboards, there are several shots that express the same thing over and over again. seems to be lively, but in fact, the plot is stagnant.
Each storyboard is presented as a shot with a length of a few seconds to more than a dozen seconds. If Xu Fu didn't find a problem, after the micro-film was uploaded, the audience watched Xu Fu describe one thing in a few seconds, and in the next few seconds, he actually repeated what he had just done in another way. The audience will inevitably feel the diaphragm and then impatient.
If Xu Fu didn't use the "mysteries" taught by the flute, he wouldn't have been able to see it himself. After all, every storyboard is designed by him himself, and it is easy to see the shortcomings of others, but it is difficult to see his own shortcomings.
He studied for a while, and Qu Jingmo and the three girls also went to the library to meet Xu Fu. When Xu Fu saw them, he said that he had a new understanding.
Qu Jingmo's throbbing when he was talking to Xu Fu before has now been concealed, and he will definitely not say strange things to Xu Fu at this time. She laughed, "No wonder the flute succeeded, it turns out that he has such a good way to hide." Now that we know this, could the third batch of storyboards be better? ”
"Yes. The storyboard gets better and better every time! Our subject matter is more flattering and relatively eye-catching, and we can get feedback now to improve it. This is our strength, and we must use it well to offset our other weaknesses as much as possible. Xu Fu said.
"What about the storyboard you did earlier? When will it be changed? Qu Jingmo asked.
"Once you've done all the storyboards, use what you've learned later to revise the previous content." Xu Fu said and said to Huang Tingting: "Senior Sister Huang Tingting, do you want to take a break?" Or do you want to start working on the third batch of storyboards now? ”
"Let's draw it now." Huang Tingting said. Then she listened carefully to Xu Fu's new design and prepared for writing. It can be seen that she has done this as her own business.
When she did the first batch of storyboards a few days ago, Huang Tingting was not very interested, so she had to be urged by Li Faka. Then when I was doing the second batch of storyboards, an Anya popped up, and after Huang Tingting was enraged, her motivation increased greatly.
Now that the qi is out, she has not changed back to her lazy appearance, not only has her mobility not weakened, but after she has calmed down, she pays more attention to detail when drawing.
Not only Huang Tingting, but Li Faka is also more involved in this matter.
She was helping Xu Fu design her lines. In order to polish the actors' dialogues to be as natural as possible, she read every sentence out loud and tried it in various tones. I hope to make the sound effect of this micro-film pleasant.
Looking at their appearance, it seems that shooting a horror type of micro-film has become their wish. It's hard to imagine that just a few days ago, when Xu Fu asked them to participate at the dinner table, they still thought Xu Fu was whimsical.
But seriously, they will still make trouble. Like this, Li Faka pulled Huang Tingting's sleeve: "I just learned your tone and read your lines, and I found that I love you more." ”
"Oh." Huang Tingting sent Li Hairpin card with one note.
"Don't you love me anymore? You watery poplar woman! I'm going to write your lines badly. Li Faka, who was given a cold reception, made trouble again.
"Oh." Huang Tingting is still cold.
"Tingting Sang......" Li Haircard lay on the table and looked sideways at Huang Tingting's face.
Huang Tingting squinted at Li Faka, and just wanted to say something shocking. But seeing that Li Fake's face was flattened by the table, and half of his mouth was pursed, Huang Tingting suddenly laughed.
"Don't be nauseous in front of me! Don't make a fuss. Qu Jingmo glared. When she saw this scene, she only felt putty all over.
Xu Fu was secretly disappointed, and he almost clapped his hands when he saw it from the side. But as soon as Qu Jingmo shouted, the atmosphere was completely destroyed.
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Three days later, the third batch of storyboards was ready. Xu Fu used the method taught by the flute, summarized it, deleted the four duplicate pictures, and then sent it to the micro. Wide.
At this time, in the page of "Huang Tingting", there are no traces left by Anya fans intuitively. Although Xu Fu did not perform any deletion operations, as time went on, those profanities would automatically drown in the comment area, and you had to deliberately rummage through them to find them.
Since the hot spot of the Anya incident has passed, the enthusiasm of the fans is no longer high. After Xu Fu posted the third batch of storyboards, there was no reappearance of enthusiastic likes. A few hours passed, and there were only thirty or forty comments. Due to the small base of fans, professional and deep reviews did not appear.
After a while, the flute sent a private message: "My method is good, isn't it?" It feels like your new diagram is progressing again. ”
"Thank you so much. I've used your mysteries and I've really improved a lot. Xu Fu replied.
"I always feel that your drawings don't look like comics. There are too many backgrounds. The flute wondered.
Xu Fu immediately sold Meng and changed the topic. After chatting for a few words, I wanted to try to ask the flute to help forward it to increase popularity. He didn't make a direct request, but typed in a corner: "It's so strange today, there are so few comments." Is my plot flat......"
Xu Fu was about to release it, when he suddenly felt someone staring at him. He hurriedly turned around, it turned out to be Qu Jingmo, who didn't look very happy, and his expression revealed a strange aura.
Qu Jingmo said in a very erratic tone: "Xu Fu, you tell him the truth, don't lie to him with a girl's tone anymore." ”
So Xu Fu hurriedly nodded and told the flute truthfully: "This is the storyboard script for shooting micro-films." Not a comic. I am not Huang Tingting herself, I am the director of the micro film. ”
Suddenly, a long list of ellipses came from the flute's side. In the past few days, "Huang Tingting", who has made the flute think about it these days, was suddenly disillusioned in his heart.
"Then come on." The flute replied in a pretentious manner, and then there was no more news.
Xu Fu looked at Qu Jingmo and smiled: "If you don't like the song, I will never do it again in the future." ”
"You know what? Continue like this, and you'll soon taste the sweetness of playing with human nature. I don't want you like that. Qu Jingmo stretched a stool, sat next to Xu Fu and said, "If a person is honest, there will be many people to deceive him." But when he was determined to deceive people, there were a lot of people who could deceive him. But I'd rather you be honest than go the wrong way. ”
Xu Fu was silent. During this time, he saw a lot of incomprehensible things. For example, he participated in the screenwriting of "Killing Machine", which is obviously a super bad movie, but he can make a lot of money. For example, his salary was fraudulently claimed, and it was annoying to ask for an account. and Anya, who became a big V by stealing other people's things.
Seeing those people mixing so well, Xu Fu's heart would of course feel unbalanced.
When communicating with the flute three days ago, Xu Fu just had the idea of trying it out, but asked the other party's secret. Finding that a flute was so good at talking, Xu Fu admitted that he did have some thoughts.
Although Xu Fu only hopes that the flute can forward it, or help with opinions, etc. But Qu Jingmo saw Xu Fu's intention to use others.
Maybe Qu Jingmo's experience made her so sensitive. Xu Fu thought to himself. If you didn't shoot a micro-movie with her, everyone would be giggling all day long, and Xu Fu would never have discovered the deep side of Qu Jingmo.
Qu Jingmo saw that Xu Fu didn't speak, and smiled: "Look at you, you're not happy." Also, I'm not qualified to say these things to you right now......"
When Xu Fu heard this, he immediately stared at Qu Jingmo and said firmly: "No, Quzi, you are qualified!" ”
Qu Jingmo's face was slightly flushed when he was looked at by Xu Fu, and he knew what Xu Fu meant. But she didn't have the courage to agree to Xu Fu, dodging Xu Fu's eyes, and said a little cluelessly: "I just don't want to see you take that road, okay?" ”
Is it good or what? Xu Fu didn't know what "that road" was. But instead of asking, he said, "Not good! If no one is watching, I don't even know what I'm going to do! Still, as long as you can watch me from the sidelines, I won't do anything bad. You're right, Sister Quzi? ”
"I'll have to think about it." Qu Jingmo glanced at Xu Fu sideways, turned around and left.
Xu Fu sighed in his heart, the euphemistic confession just now failed again. In other words, Qu Jingmo is so resistant to others doing bad things? It's nothing to follow her, it's just that you don't use Huang Tingting's account to sell cuteness anymore.
"Momo, what did you just say to your little boyfriend? When I came back, I was depressed. Li Faka asked Qu Jingmo very gossipily.
Qu Jingmo came back just now, and he lay on the table to let go. Xu Fu is only a trivial matter of "not using a girl's account", but in Qu Jingmo's eyes, this is the first step to become a demon.
If Xu Fu gradually discovers that human nature is so easy to use. Then, he will definitely go more and more excessively, and finally become a person like Qu Jingmo's father. is also the kind of person Qu Jingmo hates the most.
"You say, Xu Fu, will he listen to me?" Qu Jingmo muttered.
Li Faka and Huang Tingting glanced at each other, and they both felt inexplicable. Xu Fu is so obedient to Momo, Momo still thinks he is disobedient?
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After the third batch of storyboard scripts were uploaded, Xu Fu still had to analyze and give feedback. There are no comments that can objectively point out problems, but there are comments that point out the merits. For example, some people say that the first one is "the little brother is so handsome", and the third one is "the female ghost is so cute".