Chapter 48 Grading
When Luo Hongbo came to the marking room with Wen Xun and Bi Qikai's exam papers, he had a weird smile on his face. Although he only glanced at Wen Xun's title before, and didn't look carefully at what Wen Xun's text was written, just seeing that Wen Xun's title was the same as Bi Qikai's title, which made Luo Hongbo feel something, and he felt that this time he could at least see the coincidental scene where two candidates wrote exactly the same question......
After returning to the marking room, Luo Hongbo taught the two exam papers in his hand to his editors, and asked them to mix the two exam papers with other exam papers and seal their names. In any case, this new language essay contest is also a national competition, and in such a level of competition, of course, the names of the students should be covered, so as not to give low scores to the professors who are not happy to see the students' names......
After covering all the names of the papers for more than ten minutes, the assembly-line marking is about to begin. In this competition, the review mode set by the organizing committee is the assembly line mode, that is, in the semi-final review, it is not that one teacher can determine the life and death of n students, but that each teacher gives his own score after reading the paper, and finally the final score of the candidate is the total score given by 10 marking teachers.
Soon, an hour passed, and the professors of 10 well-known universities had exhausted the novelty before grading. Although some of the articles are good for middle school students, it is still difficult for them to escape the perspective of middle school students.
Looking at it, when Dong Guoli, a professor in the Department of Chinese Language and Literature at Aurora University, finished correcting an exam paper, he began to review the next paper with some sleepiness. What came into his eyes was only a manuscript called "Peeping People in a Cup". Seeing this "look up", Dong Guoli suddenly felt that his eyes lit up.
He looked down uncomfortably, and found that this student used a style similar to Qian Zhongshu's style, laughing and scolding to express his contempt for all kinds of fake and ugly human worlds, and made a profound criticism of the traditional Chinese sauce jar culture. This kind of critical writing, the kind of humorous writing like Qian Zhongshu, made Dong Guoli feel very cool - except that the title seemed to be wrong.
However, he also heard that two students chose the new topic because they were late. From this point of view, Dong Guoli feels that the choice of this topic from this perspective is still very thoughtful. Although, this student seems to be young and his pen power is not as deep as Qian Zhongshu's, so the articles he writes seem a little deliberately humorous, a bit like deliberately making people laugh.
But Dong Guoli thinks that this is also understandable, after all, the student who wrote this article is still a middle school student! If a middle school student writes a very old-fashioned article directly, it will make people shudder......
Dong Guoli felt so much, and casually wrote the words 100 points on his assessment card, and then pasted it on the outside of the exam paper. Then, as he handed the exam paper to the next professor, he looked at another exam paper that no one had yet read.
When he opened this exam paper and understood the question, Dong Guoli only felt that he definitely didn't wake up - he actually saw the topic of "Peeping in the Cup" again! "Damn, I'm confused, I'm sorry, I seem to have passed you the exam papers I haven't read just now......"
Dong Guoli said as he reached out to the next professor's desk to get the exam paper. got the exam paper he had just put on, Dong Guoli didn't open it, just handed the "peep in the cup" on his table to the professor, and then began to continue reading.
It doesn't matter if you look at it, Dong Guoli suddenly found that this part is also "Peep in the Cup"! "Hell yes!" Dong Guoli hurriedly ran to the professor's desk next to him and opened the exam paper he had just put away, and it was indeed two copies of "Peeping in the Cup"!
"It's time for me to buy a lottery ticket......," Dong Guoli muttered to himself, it's not that he hasn't participated in the examination of the college entrance examination language, but he really hasn't encountered this kind of two students writing exactly the same and so rare title!
"What's wrong?" The surrounding marking teachers saw Dong Guoli's strange movements and came over to inquire. After inquiring, I found out that I had encountered such a strange thing, and suddenly the teachers were also interested. "Teacher Dong, you hurry up and watch, we can only watch it when we are optimistic, hurry!" All the teachers urged Dong Guoli to get up.
Hearing this, Dong Guoli sat down and hurriedly looked at the exam paper he hadn't read. Because the previous "Peep in the Cup" was too much of a pearl in front, Dong Guoli couldn't help but look forward to this second exam paper.
Who knows, when he just opened the paper and read a few lines, he was surprised to find that although the beginning of this exam paper is to look at the world with the eyes of the paper ball in the cup like the previous one, but this exam paper does not directly start the lyricism of the long speech, and does not use humorous words similar to Qian Zhongshu to ridicule and laugh at the sauce jar society...... Rather start observing from the classroom?
Yes, at the beginning of this exam paper, there is no superfluous description and discussion, just like telling a fairy tale, the paper ball in the cup is regarded as a person, and the surrounding environment - the classroom is seen through its eyes! In this way, it seems very logical, very much like a novel!
In this article, from the perspective of the paper ball, I first looked at the expressions of the two invigilators, expressing the kind of demeanor that the two of them were angry and unhappy about, and such a side description made Dong Guoli extremely curious about the state of the two candidates! What did those two students do to make the two invigilators look like this?
Gradually, the perspective of the paper ball in the article slowly shifted to the two late students in the examination room. One of the students, at this time, was immersed in writing. The paper ball passed through the concave lens action created by the cup and the water, and saw the essay written by that student.
The paper group found that the student would only satirize society through lyricism and funny, "Lyrical Party! Commenting on the student, "Who wouldn't find faults?" When someone else is stupid? Others can't see that the social atmosphere is not good? In your words? Take off your pants and put that ......"
"Yes......" Dong Guoli suddenly slapped the case, he only felt that the last exam paper was farther than the average student, and saw the problems in society. At that time, Dong Guoli didn't think much about it, but now that he thinks about it, it seems that this is really the case - young people only know how to comment on some things that everyone understands, as if no one but him knows about it...... Originally, when Dong Guoli didn't think about it so much, he still had a very high evaluation of the student's article just now, but after reading the current article again, his evaluation of the article just now was lowered......
Unconsciously, Dong Guoli was attracted by this article, he felt as if he had met a peer, and this peer was also very personable......
He felt as if he had met a mild-mannered old scholar who never seemed to deliver anything, and would always maintain his demeanor to explain to the other party no matter how difficult it was...... In the face of such an old man, Dong Guoli felt that he had no way not to believe the other party......
Then, another student is mentioned in the article, and this student is mentioned sleeping! Such a sudden change made Dong Guoli interested, and he wondered why someone would sleep in the rematch of the national competition......
After reading the feature article, Dong Guoli only felt unfinished! "That's awesome!" Dong Guoli didn't even recall that this was a middle school student's essay, so he praised it like this. And when he recalled this incident, he had to give the current one a score of 200 points in order to distinguish it from the 100 points of the previous article "Peeping People in the Cup......