Chapter 138: Plotted
Hearing her say this, Zhao Feiyan immediately smiled and said, "Miss Hua, what you said is wrong. "Peach Blossom Walk" is a poem about peach blossoms, which will definitely inspire the sisters at this time, and maybe lead to one or two masterpieces. ”
Seeing that Zhao Feiyan didn't have the slightest intention of relenting, Su Wen couldn't wait to kill her directly. Ya is so annoying, I won't stop until I make her a public enemy. It seems that she has to come up with some means, otherwise she will really be looked down upon by this guy, thinking that she is really afraid of her.
Thinking of this, Su Wen smiled and said, "I just said that today's atmosphere is not suitable, but I didn't say that you can't recite poetry. I heard that the Peach Blossom Festival has been held for several years in a row, and every year there are excellent works. Let's ask Miss Bai to recite some of the best works from previous years, just to help the sisters find some inspiration. ”
Hearing her idea, Bai Wei immediately responded with a smile: "Okay, Miss Hua's idea is good." It just so happened that a few days ago, I sorted out some of the best works from previous years, and now I can take them out and share them with my sisters. ”
Seeing Bai Wei relieving herself, Su Wen was relieved. Judging from this point alone, Bai Wei was not bought by Zhao Feiyan. Her performance today is very much in line with the actions of an organizer, so it is inferred that inviting Zhao Feiyan should also be for the purpose of organizing the Peach Blossom Party. In this way, Su Wen breathed a sigh of relief, at least there was no worry about being met by others.
Complimenting Su Wen's proposal, Bai Wei ordered his subordinates to bring a drop of manuscripts. With a smile on her face, she distributed the manuscript to the crowd, and discussed inviting a few young girls to recite some of the best works.
As the judge this time, Su Wen naturally wanted to choose one song. She skimmed through the manuscript in her hand, and immediately picked out a small and fresh poem from it. This poem focuses on the subtleties, writes the beauty of the peach blossoms, and at the same time expresses a girlish feeling.
See Bai Wei speak. Zhao Feiyan had to stop the act of pulling hatred for Su Wen. She was targeting Su Wen, but she was not a Yunzhou noblewoman here, so she didn't want to refute Bai Wei's face.
After assigning the task, Bai Wei began to invite the girls present to recite the selected poems one by one. Perhaps because they felt that the opportunity was rare, they abandoned their usual reserve and generously shared with everyone present the poems they chose and the reasons why they loved the selected poems.
From the poems selected by everyone present. Su Wen learned about their preferences and styles. As a judge of the day, this observation is very important.
By sharing the selected poems, the atmosphere in the gazebo quickly warmed up. Coupled with the warm hospitality of Bai Wei, the host, the girls present were full of interest. While appreciating the poems, they tasted the tea carefully prepared by Baifu, and it didn't take long for them to become one.
After sharing the poems they have chosen, it's time for them to show off their talents. From this time on, Suwen's judging work can be regarded as the official beginning.
Under the service of the maids, the girls picked up pen and paper to write the peach blossom poems brewing in their hearts. They had been preparing for this for a long time. So there was no hesitation. After they finished writing, these poems were sent to Zhao Feiyan and Su Wen, who would evaluate them.
For the appreciation of poetry, Su Wen still has some experience. After all, she had been influenced by Tang poetry and Song poetry in her previous life, and she had the teachings of Hongqian in this life, and her appreciation level was not low.
I saw the manuscript of the poem sent in front of me. Zhao Feiyan turned her head and smiled at Su Wen and said, "Miss Hua, I have a proposal, I don't know if you are willing to agree?" If you want. What we can do this time is much more innovative than what has been done in previous years. ”
Hearing her take the initiative to mention it, of course it was not easy for Su Wen to refuse directly, so he replied with a smile: "Miss Zhao, if you have any good proposals, if it is really feasible, I will naturally agree." ”
Seeing that Su Wen did not directly refuse, Zhao Feiyan smiled heartily, and said slowly: "Miss Hua, both of us are judges. But the angle of judgment must be different. Shall we, then, write down our judgments and read them out to the sisters here? ”
Listened to her proposal. Su Wen thought about it for a while, and found that there seemed to be no room for Zhao Feiyan to cheat, so he became interested in it.
Nodding at her, Su Wen smiled and agreed, "Well, that's a good idea." We split up and wrote down our judgments and shared them with the sisters in the room. In this way, not only is there a competition between them, but the two of us are also judging a competition. ”
Seeing that Su asked and answered, Zhao Feiyan smiled and turned her head to Bai Wei and asked, "Miss Bai, Miss Hua and I both want to do this, I don't know if it's okay?" If it doesn't conform to the rules, then forget it. ”
Bai Wei listened and replied with a smile: "That's very good, I don't have any opinions here." Since both judges are willing, let it be arranged in this way. In previous years, it was only the sisters who wrote poetry competing with each other, but this year even you have to judge it, which is really interesting. ”
After agreeing on the rules of judging, Su Wen and Zhao Feiyan were each assigned a desk. Only the maids were left around them to serve the pen and ink, and the noble ladies who wrote poems were taken by Bai Wei to enjoy the flowers in the garden.
After they left, Su Wen began to write comments on each poem. According to her usual habit of writing homework, she wrote down the advantages and disadvantages of this poem on paper. She writes with great care, and soon forgets about her surroundings and immerses herself in the comments on the poems.
After more than half an hour, Su Wen finally finished writing all the comments. After she put down the brush, she felt some soreness in her shoulders, and hurriedly asked Xing'er to help massage it.
At this time, Bai Wei came back with the girls. They were all in good spirits, and it was obvious that they had seen a lot of beautiful scenery. Even when they returned to the pavilion, they still did not forget to exchange experiences with each other. As the richest man in Yunzhou, Baifu's garden is really good, no wonder they are so excited.
Seeing that Su Wen and Zhao Feiyan were both sitting in their seats resting, Bai Wei immediately walked over and asked with a smile: "I heard that the comments of the two judges have been written, even if I bring my sisters back, I don't know if I can start revealing the comments now." ”
Nodding at Bai Wei, Zhao Feiyan replied with a smile: "There is no problem on my side, just look at Miss Hua's side." If Miss Hua is fine, then you can start now. Looking at Miss Hua's leisurely appearance now, I guess there should be no problem. ”
Receiving the look from Zhao Feiyan, Su Wen immediately replied with a smile: "No problem, Miss Bai can start whenever she wants." ”
Seeing that the two of them had no opinions, Bai Wei smiled and said, "Since the two judges are ready, then we might as well start now." The time is just right, and by the time we're done reading the comments, the kitchen should be ready to enjoy the flowers, drink and eat together. ”
After getting the two of them done, Bai Wei took the two stacks of manuscripts with comments from the maid's hand. The two stacks of manuscripts had been sorted out by her personal maid, and when you looked down, you could see their comments on the same poem.
Bai Wei coughed deliberately, which immediately attracted the attention of everyone in the pavilion, and then said with a smile: "I wrote a poem, I believe the sisters must want to know what others say." Now the comments of the two judges are in my hands, and I will read them out one by one. ”
Hearing her say this, the faces of the girls present showed nervousness. The poems they wrote after meditating on them certainly hoped to receive countless praises.
Showing a reassuring smile to the girls present, Bai Wei said: "As the owner of this Peach Blossom Party, I naturally take on the responsibility of throwing bricks and attracting jade. In order to prepare the sisters, I will first read out the comments given to me by the two judges, hoping that the sisters will not laugh. ”
After speaking, Bai Wei read the comments that Zhao Feiyan and Su Wen gave her poems. She first read Zhao Feiyan's comments, and then Su Wen's comments.
Listening to her read out the comments, Su Wen listened quite seriously. After listening to it for a while, she couldn't help frowning, and secretly despised Zhao Feiyan's unkindness in her heart. Zhao Feiyan, as a judge this time, was full of beautiful words in her comments, but she pointed out some trivial problems very euphemistically.
As for those relatively large shortcomings, Zhao Feiyan adopted an attitude of turning a blind eye. Her poetry and poetry are so accomplished that it is impossible not to see it, and the only explanation is that it was intentional.
At the beginning, Su Wen just thought that Zhao Feiyan was not kind enough, but soon discovered her sinister intentions. The comments of the two of them were read together, and the shortcomings pointed out by Su Wen were particularly prominent. After listening to it in a hurry, others did not have much impression of the advantages she pointed out, but kept in mind the part where she criticized the shortcomings of others.
In this way, less than half of the comments were read, and Su Wen had already received eye knives thrown by many people. By this time, she was about to hate Zhao Feiyan to death.
Staring at Su Wen, who was paralyzed, the girl who looked at her at the beginning whispered: "Didn't you just write a poem, I really thought I was a talented woman in the world." Picking on this and that, I feel that I have reached the point of being invulnerable. ”
was complained about in person, and Su Wen was so depressed that he was going to die. She really didn't mean that, but unfortunately now everyone else thinks so, and I guess no one will believe her explanation.
Depressed in his heart, Su Wen naturally calculated all the accounts on Zhao Feiyan's head. Zhao Feiyan's plan this time was indeed seamless, which made her enter the game unconsciously. was calculated like this, how could she bear this breath. She kept thinking in her heart, intending to find a way to fight back.