One

Jiang Nanchun: "I've written a review of your book, go and read it, I don't know if you're satisfied?" ”

Wang Zhihong: "Yes, you have to find the shortcomings, thank you!" You didn't choose a long review! Can you help me resend it? Pick a long comment. I'll copy it for you, and you can resend it to the long review. ”

Jiang Nanchun: "Okay, I'll send you a long comment."

The "Fairy", which plays with the hostess of the knife, is written with some attraction and can infect readers. But I also want to say a few words objectively, although I was invited by the author to write some reviews.

First of all, I would like to comment fairly, whether it is good or bad, please accept it calmly, so that I can write more wonderful works in the future. Let's talk about the lack of first, the appearance of the characters in "The Fairy" is a bit chaotic. It can be seen that the author wants to write it well and write it more attractively. But it backfires, and if you want to hurry, you can't reach it. This is a kind of literary performance, but this kind of literary performance is not very good. Here's a little advice.

Secondly, this way of writing is too conventional and lacks new ideas. It would be better to come up with something new and special. Xianxia, you should boldly use your imagination, write about what others are useless, write about your own unique, be different, and stand out.

Furthermore, writing agents must have a background in life, you lack these, you can't write agents well, you have to put these aside and learn to use your strengths and avoid weaknesses. For example, Agent Cold Rain, you have to highlight the agent side of Cold Rain, and you have to reflect the agent flavor in her. But you are not familiar with these things, and you can't write thoroughly. You don't have experience as an agent, it's hard to write. In this case, it is recommended that you read some secret agent novels, and it is better to have the opportunity to contact agents, so that you can continue to write without jokes.

The above said some things that upset the author, and the advice is against the ear, but this is good medicine, don't let me down what I have done to you. Now it's time to talk about some good ones, not to say that they are insufficient, but also to encourage the author.

The advantage of "The Fairy" is that the language is fluent, the pen is simple, and there are some language skills. Although the storyline is more ordinary, there are also wonderful and funny places that make readers read it tirelessly. The author has a good grasp of the cohesion of the work, which is basically closely linked. This also reflects the author's good writing accomplishment and quality.

Let's talk about that for now, I'll come back when I have time. Because I have a career in painting and dentistry, my writing time is relatively tight, and some of my works have been discontinued and have not been updated in time. Take this opportunity to write a book review of "The Female Fairy" to the county lord of Xiaodao, and say hello to the majority of readers, please understand! I will continue to work hard to make everyone like me, and more so that everyone likes the county lord of the knife, so that her beautiful flower will shine! ”

Wang Zhihong: "OK! ”

Two

Jiang Nanchun: "Show you a very true story: "My Mistress"

In the tide of hard work, I found a job with difficulty, which was introduced to me by my second brother, who worked as an accountant in a company, sat in an office, was happier than me, and his ability was not as good as his, so I could only go down to the workshop to do hard work.

By chance, I met Xiao Li, who is my current mistress, her husband works as a carpenter, and she is listed on the side of the road to do casual work, and there is no guarantee of financial resources, we live together, and we are all rented houses. When I came back from work, we often played mahjong together, seeing that her economic situation was not very good, I had sympathy in my heart, and occasionally I would use her money, so I said that I had a long relationship, and there was nothing to talk about between the two, she complained about her husband, I complained about my wife, the more the two of them talked, the more speculative, the more they talked, the more they were fateful, under her initiative, my line of defense finally collapsed......

She entered my room, we hugged each other, suddenly there was a child's voice shouting "Mom" outside the door, Xiao Li struggled out of my hand, and whispered: "I'll break my daughter away, come back soon!" Her daughter was four or five years old and seemed to understand things, so Xiao Li sent her to the old man of the landlord and asked him to take care of it. **If she was hot, hurried to my room, closed the door casually, and pounced on me at once, we scuffled together on the bed, hugging, gnawing, this is in the summer, wearing less clothes, I tried to pick up her pants, she did not resist, let me take off smoothly, she also took the initiative to help me strip naked, we enjoyed the pleasure of cheating naked, she climbed on top of me, she was on top, I was down, she became active, I became passive, and this kind of practice, the first time I saw it, This is also quite happy, the women of this era are different, and the women have also taken the initiative, which is really upside down, turning things upside down. We have a lot of fun, we have a lot of fun, can't control our own **, a long time together, as if someone found a secret, always feel that others look at us with the same eyes, we feel a little unsafe to do this kind of thing at home, and then open an hourly room in some small hotels, play for an hour or two and leave, from the heart, so that I feel much safer, and I am not afraid of others finding something, so you come and go, too hot for more than a year.

Suddenly, when I came back from work, I found that the couple had moved away, and she didn't even say hello to me. We never saw each other again, we couldn't get in touch with each other, and she seemed to have evaporated from the world, which made me miserable for a long time, and now I have gradually forgotten this history. However, I do not regret what I have done, and I cherish this relationship.

This erroneous relationship once made me happy after all. But what makes me feel guilty is that this has broken the bottom line of morality.

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Because of "My Mistress", a certain lady's first cannon bombardment: 'It's a pity that you found the wrong person, I sigh for you, why do you want to worry about yourself? I feel sorry for your wife, why did you find an unfaithful husband? Give your children pity, why can't you have a harmonious and warm family, why not be a real man? Why don't you contribute more to your family? ’

Maybe a second or third cannon will come later...... And even more.

Public comments on issues are not a bad thing.

The author is to put the real situation out for people to evaluate, and finally get the leading opinion in the end.

"The benevolent see the benevolent, and the wise see the wise." I hope that everyone will accept it and better grasp their own lives.

(Note: According to Zhang Jun's early oral description, after my creative processing, "My Mistress" has been preliminarily written, basically finalized, and the text truly reproduces Zhang Jun's image, except for some modifications, it is basically original.) )”

Wang Zhihong: "Can you write this?" ”

Jiang Nanchun: "Fa, this is a true story, the people of Eight Hundred Mountains heard it from a friend. ”

Wang Zhihong: "Signed?" You're back too? ”

Jiang Nanchun: "Hehe, the things at the bottom are the real materials, and only by dealing with the grassroots can you get the baby, which is a vivid portrayal of reality." ”

Wang Zhihong: "Is this the beginning of him?" ”

Jiang Nanchun: "Whether it is the beginning or the end, it is a beautiful, moving and thought-provoking story. ”

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