Chapter 226: Finding Inspiration
After a period of painstaking conception and setting, the world view of the new book has finally been initially formed, this is a planet called Romanty, the physical environment is similar to the earth, and there are more oceans and less land, the approximate ratio is about 4:6, most of the races on the planet live on the surface of the planet, of course, there are civilizations and races living in the sea and underground.
There is only one supercontinent on the planet Romanty, which is called the continent of Romantys.
There are hundreds of countries on the continent, including large empires with a size of thousands of miles and small states with a radius of hundreds of miles, but both large empires and small states have survived tens of thousands of years of survival competition.
After tens of thousands of years of multiplication on the mainland, various civilizations have continued to enter the world stage like marquees, such as the early nomadic horses living on the grasslands, before the human civilization was fully enlightened, they created a brilliant and splendid horsesman civilization.
Later, the rise of the troll tribe from the mountains to the plains, opening the era of violent dynasties, the world civilization from the primitive civilization of the centaurs into the slave age under the rule of the trolls, countless races became slaves of the trolls, and even the elves had to bow their noble heads.
The elves were not satisfied with the rule of the trolls, and privately contacted the primitive orc tribes in the south, ignoring the constraints of natural laws, and taught the orcs magic, so that the orcs had the ability to become beasts, and the orcs rose secretly, and with the assistance of the elves, they finally overthrew the rule of the trolls.
Originally, according to the agreement, the orcs should give the right to rule the world to the elves. However, the Beast Emperor, who advocated force, embezzled the power and tried his best to suppress the elves. Imposed an even more brutal and bloody rule in the world and established a bloodthirsty dynasty.
The elves, who had lost faith in the orcs, turned their attention to humans, a race that was not very outstanding in terms of physical strength and intelligence.
The bigger reason why humans chose was because of their gluttony, laziness, pride, lust, anger, jealousy, and lust, even if humans could overthrow the orcs in the future. Nor can they unite into a strong race, they will only fight among themselves and weaken each other. When the time comes, the elves will be able to take advantage of the situation and reclaim the world that belongs to them.
The world will once again return to the Age of Chaos at the beginning of the primeval period......
The sages of the human race have long seen through the conspiracy of the elves, therefore. King Icarus, the Human Emperor, after cutting off the head of the Beast Emperor Orton. The world was divided into two with the Sword of Creation, and the Continent of Romantis was divided into two parts, one was the Western Romanthus Continent, which was ruled by humans, which is commonly referred to by humans as the Glorious Continent, and the other was the Eastern Romantis Continent, also known as the Eternal Continent or the Eternal Continent, ruled by the Elves.
With the passage of time, the two continents gradually drifted, and the Eastern Romantis continent gradually drifted to the east. The continent of Western Romantys gradually moved westward, eventually leading to. The two continents are blocked by a black ocean, the extremely bad weather on the ocean seems to be the roar of the gods, the terrifying sea monsters in the depths of the ocean, like ghosts, devouring the passing humans and merchant ships, gradually, the two continents lost their practice, thousands of years later, the history of the elves helping humans overthrow the orc dynasty has gradually become a legend......
The legend has become a myth again......
After the empire lasted in peace for nearly a thousand years, the appearance of a mysterious woman changed the fate of the empire, a conquered small state, to the then Emperor Bawen presented a stunning beauty, Bawen Emperor fell in love with this beauty at first sight, and since then his temperament has changed greatly, and he indulges in wine all day long, ignoring the government.
Soon the empire's fortunes declined rapidly, the empire began to fall apart from the inside, the mediocre emperor only cared about coveting beauty, but ignored the people's livelihood, in order to pursue the art of immortality, the human emperor Ba Wen even spent millions of people to build a tower of arrogance as high as the sky, trying to fight against the gods, and finally, due to Ba Wen's ambition, angered the gods, the gods were angry, turned Ba Wen into a stone statue, and was imprisoned in the tower of arrogance forever.
At this point, the Elmo Dynasty, founded by the first emperor King Icarus, came to an end, the empire fell apart, and the continent was plunged into unprecedented war.
And at this time, countless warships appeared on the sea in the east, and those heavily armed orc warriors, with the support of the elven race, made a comeback, and the human city-states were broken one after another, and death sounded the death knell on the head of every human being.
At the end of the world, a righteous young man with the mission of reviving the family and maintaining world peace and full of fraternity came into being......
Ji Ran sent the conceived story setting to his editor-in-charge Jelly Bean, because Biluo Huangquan Da had been promoted to deputy editor-in-chief at the beginning of the year, so Ji Ran's editor in charge was handed over to the new Jelly Bean handsome guy.
Jelly Bean put forward several opinions after reviewing Ji Ran's idea, first of all, the background setting is too long, accounting for almost one-third of the length of the opening chapter, which is very different from the straightforward style of the online article, so, it is recommended that Ji Ran move the background setting to the back to introduce, within the opening three thousand words, it is best not to appear more than three names, which is easy to confuse readers.
Because when readers first read a book, they don't know much about the book, and if the author introduces many characters in a preconceived idea, I am afraid that readers will abandon the text because they can't understand the complex and messy relationship between the characters.
Secondly, it is best not to use a large paragraph of text to describe the beginning, which will easily cause reading fatigue, you should use short sentences to highlight the key points, and then quickly cut to the topic, just like the beginning of the sky, clean and neat, never dragging mud and water, so that the sense of substitution will be stronger.
It can be said that the two shortcomings proposed by Dou Da, in one sentence, just poked at Ji Ran's soft underbelly, after listening to Dou Da's words, Ji Ran felt that his realm had improved a lot, and while he was grateful to Dou Da, he went back and revised his article very seriously, according to Dou Da's requirements, the opening 3,000 words must have a climax, or there must be a contradiction to support it, in order to achieve the effect of a good start.
When it comes to contradictions, Ji Ran is a little worried, this is mainly related to Ji Ran's character, Ji Ran belongs to the kind of girl who is more introverted, it can also be said to be gentle, she doesn't like to worry about people, and she doesn't like to talk loudly, she will smile when she sees people, whether she knows them or not, even when she is angry, she is soft-spoken, so Ji Ran usually has no contradictions with people, and she really can't think of what kind of contradictions will attract people.
Ji Ran thought about it for an afternoon, racking his brains and not coming up with it.
In the evening, Ji Ran sat in front of the computer desk, stayed for a long time and didn't come up with any good jokes, always writing, deleting and deleting, without any progress at all.
Wang Le, who had just finished taking a bath, walked in with a bath towel, looked at Ji Ran's thoughtful and fruitless appearance, and hugged Ji Ran to the bed with a smile, "When you are not inspired, don't write, relax well, and you will have inspiration." ”
Wang Le said as he took off the bath towel, and a certain obviously swollen part of his body made Ji Ran's pretty face suddenly hot, "What are you doing?" ”
"Hehe, I'll give you inspiration." Wang Le smiled, picked up Ji Ran's snow-white thigh, and was about to resist on his shoulder, Ji Ran hurriedly pushed Wang Le, and now Ji Ran is worried about writing an article, how can he have the heart to do that kind of thing.
Wang Le saw Ji Ran frowning, so he didn't come hard, put Ji Ran's legs down, turned over and lay down beside Ji Ran, supported his head with his hands, and looked at Ji Ran: "What's the wife?" Isn't it stuck again? ”
Ji Ran nodded, "The editor asked me to have an attractive contradictory plot at the beginning, but I can't think of any good contradictions that can be attractive. ”
When Wang Le heard this, he smiled: "It's hard to say?" Someone else has been divorced, wouldn't it be good for you to write about the divorce? ”
"Divorce? How do you write that? Ji Ran asked strangely.
"For example, the protagonist is a waste of wood, and in the early years he was engaged to a young lady from a big family, but, the protagonist knows that his strength is very poor, and he is worried that his fiancée will come to the family to withdraw from the marriage, so, one step ahead, go to the woman's house to withdraw from the marriage, as a result, the protagonist's move, but was mistaken by the woman as a provocation, and broke with the protagonist in a fit of anger, and agreed to go to the protagonist's family to ask for an explanation after three years, at this time, the protagonist showed his golden finger and began to accelerate his cultivation, three years later, defeated the fiancée who came to the door to withdraw from the marriage, and maintained the family honor, Is it also a good plot to be different? As soon as Wang Le's words came out, Ji Ran was stunned.
She couldn't believe that Wang Le would think of such an idea for such a second, and the same plot of divorce could actually quit the trick, and she couldn't help but be impressed by Wang Le.
"Husband, you are so powerful, you can think of such a good plot, you are really talented if you don't write novels." Ji Ran praised with a grin.
Wang Le smiled, "Married to a big writer, it's not surprising that I think of a little idea every day." ”
Ji Ran got up with a smile and turned on the computer again.
"Hey, it's so late, why are you still turning on the computer?" Wang Le got up, hugged Ji Ran back, stretched out his hand on Ji Ran's soft chest, and gently kneaded it twice, the full feeling made Wang Le's blood boil again.
Ji Ran felt Wang Le's heavy snort, the itchy feeling sprayed on his neck, and his whole body was a little hot, "Wait, okay?" I'll write it down first, I'm afraid I'll forget it overnight. ”
Wang Le stared at Ji Ran and shook his head with a smile.
The fiery gaze, like a hungry big bad wolf staring at the little lamb, made Ji Ran's pretty face instantly become hot.
"Just for a while, for a while, okay?" Ji Ran was about to get up again, but was pushed down on the bed by Wang Le domineeringly, pressed her snow-white hands to the sides of her neck, leaned over and kissed them. (To be continued......)