This is not the end

The book is over, so let's say a few words.

This book is the first book of the fifth child, and there are definitely many shortcomings, and I have learned a lot from it. Originally, this book was mainly about romance, and everyone knows that because of the initial comments, I think the reader is right, this is not romance after all, but an ability.

Maybe it's the same for newcomers.

Overall, this book, as the debut novel of the fifth child, has a decent score.

But many friends don't like the ending, saying that it's a bit rushed. Now the fifth child will say something from his heart, if this book is not a fixed urban ability, the fifth child will write it without hesitation. That's for sure, because I ended the book, mostly not because of subscription issues.

As a newcomer, my subscription can continue to write, but the following things have nothing to do with the city at all, and it is really a serious digression to write again.

Of course, friends who have read "The Maniac" know that there are two places in this book that borrow Jin Yong's techniques.

Yes, Mr. Jin is one of the writers I admire the most, I only worship three writers in my life, the first is Jin Yong, the second is Lu Xun, and the third is Lu Yao.

Among them, my favorite is "Social Drama", "The Condor Heroes", and "Ordinary World", which I really like. Especially "Social Drama", this is an article in "The Scream".

As Mr. Lu Xun said at the end, "Really, until now, I really haven't eaten the good beans like that night,—— and I don't see the good show like that night anymore." "Actually, I'm the same, I can't see the same good text as "Social Drama" anymore, it's a pity.

There are still some pits in the book, but there is no urban pit, all of them are behind the fairy world, including the formation of the hún chaos world, and the struggle between Lonely Valley and Lin Yun in the fairy world.

However, these pit veterans don't feel the need to express them carefully one by one, and many things don't have to be said clearly.

The main thing is that there are some foreshadowings in this book, which are likely to be reflected in the second book. In fact, many friends have guessed that when Jin Lao wrote the three parts of shè carving, did he also think so, I don't know, if I can write the third part, maybe these pits are basically gone.

To be honest, although I like "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", I am very dissatisfied with the plot of Mr. Jin's handling of the Little Dragon Girl. So I can understand how dissatisfied the reader is with my handling of the door.

Men Gwen is a woman with a very distinct personality and a very independent personality, especially after she jumped off Jiuhua Mountain. Her temperament was a little swinging behind, but this did not affect her knowing that Lin Yun liked Lin Yun after cultivating her truth, after all, in the end, she just said a man in white, maybe many people will think about whether this is not a man, but just wearing men's clothes.

In the end, Lao Wu is deeply grateful to the brothers and sisters who accompanied "The Maniac" to the end, thank you, if it weren't for your support, Lao Wu would definitely not be able to persevere.

The new book will be sent out today, the title of the book is "Star Dance Nine Gods", and the new book will definitely need your support, and it needs the support of clicks, favorites, and recommendation votes.

Thank you for your continued support of Lao Wu's new book "Star Dance Nine Gods"

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