Liu Bei Now, if you really want to talk about it, his pen power is not necessarily better than these great god writers......

After all, he's not writing on his own right now.

These classics are just carried by him.

However, in his previous life, he had experienced countless street fights, but his vision was there......

For the works of the great gods, he thinks he is still qualified to comment.

Thinking of this, he took the lead in clicking on a work called "Star Fantasy Sword God......

This work was written by a squirrel named Pig Riding.

He took a look at Tiansheng Literature's comments on this great god......

"The squirrel riding a pig, a god-level writer of Tiansheng literature, has strong pen power, and his works are widely sought after by readers with delicate descriptions and close to reality!"

And this "Star Fantasy Sword God" is obviously his transformation work.

Liu Bei clicked on it and took a look, this Star Fantasy Sword God, in the setting of the power system, obviously borrowed some of the settings of Xiuzhen in "Piao Miao".

The whole work, roughly speaking, is the story of a teenager who worships the sect and continues to grow......

Liu Bei took a look, the pen power of this great god really has nothing to say, it is indeed powerful.

Lots of scenes and fights...... is also described very delicately, and in addition, the emotional entanglement between the male protagonist and the two female protagonists is also written in flesh and blood......

However, in this work, the results are tepid.

Liu Bei just read the first few chapters, and he couldn't help but shake his head.

These ways of writing, in urban literature, are not too much of a problem, and even, these emotional entanglements or something, can be regarded as advantages.

After all, this world online literature is not well developed, and it is more like a work that has been eliminated from traditional literature.

These styles, when placed in traditional literature, are not surprising.

Many readers are also accustomed to reading such works.

However, after the transformation, this great god still uses his original rhythm...... It's like changing a skin.

A Xiuzhen stream, partial fantasy, the rhythm is slow, and he doesn't say it without pretending to slap his face, but the key is to choose from the two heroines, both grinding Isoji, I can't bear it......

Then he opened the work of another author called Rice Worm.

This is also a veteran author who writes urban essays, and his urban works are more romantic......

But Liu Bei took a look at it, and when he looked at his new book, it was like another world, the feeling of the Zhuxian copycat version......

Like this kind of romance fairy, if it is written, it is a very popular book, but once it is not written well, it will be rotten again.

Sure enough, he took a look, and this rice worm's new book simply rushed to his grandmother's house......

Even, many people sprayed him directly in the book review area, and the godhead has fallen......

As for the works of several other people, Liu Bei took a look, and basically, they were all the same.

Liu Bei even sympathized with these writers.

In fact, many of their works are still above the standard......

But because of the revival of Reiki, I had to transform......

......

"Bai Da, how is it?"

Seeing Liu Bei appear in the group again, everyone couldn't help but be eager.

"Yes, Bai Da, quickly instruct us two sentences, let's learn it!"

"That is, if Bai Daneng teaches us how to write online articles, I will explode women's clothes photos in the group......"

It was Mi Worm who spoke, and as soon as she spoke, she instantly caused a crowd of people to coax.

"Anyway, don't you keep saying that you're a girl, what's the point of exploding women's photos?"

"That's it, you might as well blow up two uniform photos, maybe Bai Da likes this tune?"

"You want to die, don't you, be careful that I expose your black history......"

Looking at the chat in the group, Liu Bei also felt a burst of surprise.

Actually, in this world, there are also girls who mix with men, and it seems that they used to mix well?

No wonder the transformation hit the streets.

Female writers mixed with men, and they just happened to encounter the revival of aura, and they had to transform, and their luck was declining enough.

Seeing that the group finally quieted down, he said in the group: "That's it, if you really want me to explain to everyone systematically how to write online articles, I can't tell, I'll still talk about it, a few works I just read!"

"Bai Da is lecturing, take a small notebook to take notes!"

"Bench!"

"Sofa!"

In the group, the queue was instantly formed.

Liu Bei didn't grind the rocks, and directly began to comment.

"First of all, let's talk about the advantages of a few works, it is obvious that the writing of several of them is passable, and the plot is arranged with twists and turns...... Honestly, let me write, I'm not as good as you!"

"Bai Da is too modest!"

"That's it, now you say that you are the second, who dares to admit the first......"

Seeing everyone's speeches, Liu Bei shook his head and did not approve.

"Listen to me first!"

Speaking of this, he continued in the group: "Do you all think that these are really advantages?"

Seeing Liu Bei speak, everyone was stunned.

"Isn't that an advantage?"

"Yes, isn't it a good writing, but the plot twists and turns are not considered advantages, so what is considered an advantage......"

Seeing everyone speak, Liu Bei did not sell Guanzi, but said directly:

"These situations are indeed considered advantages in traditional literature, but now, first of all, we must understand, who is our readership?"

"Obviously, with the revival of Reiki, countless people have started to read our works, but we have to understand one thing, these readers, did not have much reading habits before!"

"If you don't write plainly, they won't be able to read it at all, understand?"

"Although most of them don't have much appreciation, they are the mainstream readers nowadays, and we must take their receptivity into account when writing!"

Speaking of which, Liu Bei gave an example and said: "Take the prodigal swordsman of the rice worm as an example, there are too many gorgeous words, the old bookworm may think it looks good, but the new readers, after taking a look, will only think, 'Wow, it's ......amazing', and then, there is no then!"

"Doesn't the reader think that the more powerful the better?" asked the rice worm in the group, subconsciously.

"Not really!"

Liu Bei shook his head, and then said: "Although everyone thinks that your writing is amazing, but everyone is here to make it easy, and you make it so that no one can understand it, who still reads it!"

"And the squirrel's Star Fantasy Sword God, the same problem, rookie readers, are all here to relax, you arrange such a twisty and brain-burning plot, people take a look, and they are directly scared away......"

In fact, Xiaobaiwen in the previous life began to become popular after the opening of the mobile Internet and the influx of Xiaobai readers.

But this world, because of the revival of aura and the intervention of the state, has also made many novice readers pour in.

Liu Bei's point is not nonsense.

"Could it be that Bai Da means that we should try to write as white as possible?"

Everyone felt a little incredible!

"That's true!"

Liu Bei gave an affirmative reply and said in the group: "The specific situation, specific analysis, but one thing is clear, in the future, for a long time, readers should prefer this kind of relatively white ......"

"Then, it's how to write the text well!"

Liu Bei smiled, and then said in the group: "Speaking of which, I'm afraid everyone also has some feelings, just use my book "Dragon and Snake" as an example, everyone said, why is the urban background in the early stage obviously not favored by everyone, but the popularity has exploded?"

"Just because it's cool, it's cool, and it makes readers feel good, so you can ignore the questioning of the background setting first......"

Seeing Liu Bei's explanation, Wuxian was a little puzzled and said, "Bai Da, do you mean to say that for the sake of coolness, you can even give up some reasonableness?"

"Traceless to the point, indeed, sometimes when you are writing an article, you obviously want to write more pleasantly, but you will feel that it will be unreasonable to write like this......

"But, in my opinion, this worry is not necessary at all, online readers, how many still remember what you wrote earlier, I'm afraid even the author himself can't remember it, so, rationality or something, as long as there are not too many flaws, you can basically make some concessions......"

"For example, let's talk about the urban literature you are good at, in order to be reasonable, do you all want to give the protagonist an opportunity, and then, let the protagonist make money step by step, open a company, develop power, and subdue the beauty ......"

"This makes sense, but the process is too long, and most readers probably don't have such a long patience......"

"What do you say Bai Da?" everyone asked subconsciously.

"Isn't this simple?" Liu Bei said indifferently: "How cool is it, think about it, if you are the protagonist in the book, how can you be cool enough?"

"Five million in lottery tickets?" someone said incredulously.

"It's really cool to buy a lottery ticket and win the lottery, but why don't you want to let the protagonist suddenly get not five million, but fifty million? Isn't fifty million more cool than five million?"

"50 million is not cool enough, what about 500 million?"

"500 million is not cool enough, 5 billion is not cool......"

"It's cool, but it's too unreasonable, how can it be five billion ......," everyone subconsciously retorted.

"I still think that 5 billion is not cool enough, why not let the protagonist directly inherit 50 billion, 500 billion, 5 trillion......"

Seeing everyone, with a stunned expression, Liu Bei couldn't help but say:

"Think about it, if you are the protagonist of your book, and suddenly, there are five trillion more in your bank card, and this money is absolutely legal and can be spent as you like, are you happy?"

"Cool, since it's cool, why don't you write it like this?"

Everyone was dumbfounded......

"Ding, from ......"

"Ding, from ......"

Looking at the faith value that suddenly appeared in the background, Liu Bei was not satisfied.

Where is this, this kind of setting is just a god-rich text setting that was written by everyone in the previous life, and it is not even a genre......

ps: This chapter is almost 3000 words, it's a little late, forgive me, don't wait for the fourth one, it may be very late.