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In fact, up to now, many people have said that the reality volume is very badly written. Pen & Fun & Pavilion www.biquge.info

Among them, there were many book reviews that were overly verbal, and I was very angry at the time, so I deleted them.

A few days later, many people in the book review area said that the reality volume is not good, so let's talk about my own thoughts here.

"After reading the second volume, I just want to say that the villain is rampant when he gets his will, and the impression that the protagonist gives me is almost at the bottom. What is the difference between this and some lawless idiots of the second generation.

Write less about the real world, it's too cynical and unpleasant to read. ”

The above is the comment of the book friend 'Bi Yi Shui'.

Here are my responses.

'The villain is rampant when he has ambition. ’

This sentence is very apt.

When I first wrote it, I just thought about the normal plot development.

Just imagine, Li Fei's status at that time was just a [***] silk.

What would be the reaction of a [***] silk who suddenly gained great strength and wealth that rivaled the wealth of the country?

I think his behavior, completely normal, is highly likely, or the most likely.

The protagonist's surname has to be transformed step by step, just like life, no one can be achieved overnight.

Li Fei just suddenly gained power and wealth, but his previous surname and previous worldview will not change, so the most likely manifestation is the state of nouveau riche, otherwise there will not be so many nouveau riche in reality.

Looking back, his surname will naturally change slowly.

It's only to blame that I'm a novice, and I don't know much about the acceptance of the 'nouveau riche' surname of the protagonist by book friends, so in order to be true, I wrote this nouveau riche in the process of converting the surname.

However, Li Fei's surname is slowly changing, and he will not always be a 'nouveau riche'.

"The combat power setting in the dragon scroll is an absolute failure.,Everyone has almost increased their combat power by 10 times.,It's not this increase in difficulty to make the protagonist's experience more difficult.,The protagonist's combat power standard is completely out of touch with the combat power standard of the dragon set.。

There is also a mistake, the fact that the Northern Shengong can only use the thumb to suck the power is simply too funny, and it is even directly pointed out in the martial arts profile.

Is the Northern Spiritual Skill that Duan Yu has practiced a little more than thirty-sixth a true Northern Spiritual Skill, this is not a grade at all, is it good?"

This is another book review of the book friend 'Bi Yi Shui'.

Here are the responses.

The average combat power of the Heavenly Dragon World is indeed stronger than that of the Condor World, but it is also limited, not to the point of exaggeration.

But Li Fei is already invincible in the Condor World.

If the combat effectiveness of the Tianlong World is not strengthened, Li Fei will be almost invincible as soon as he enters the Tianlong World, and the plot will not develop well

The problem with the Northern Spiritual Skill is indeed a bug, I admit it.

Blame me for not knowing much about the Northern Spiritual Skills.

But this is slightly different from the setting of the original book, and it will not affect the plot of this book.

After all, this is a brand new book, with some subtle settings, and it is not a big problem to be slightly different from the original book.

"This book has no main line at all, has the author done an outline?

When the protagonist entered the Condor, he deceived Xiaolongnu and Li Mochou to come back, why did he do this? to learn skills, and finally run upside down to make trouble at the mountain gate. Killing Zhao Zhijing and eunuch Yin Zhiping has no explanation at all. Where is the main line?

If it's just to learn skills, why is the goal so unclear? Without a purpose, how can you write so many words.

Back to reality, all kinds of blind dog-eyed 07 urban novel plots. All kinds of nouveau riche like to step on people, then, what is your purpose surname. Did you write it clearly in the article? I can't see it at all.

Later, I went to Tianlong, and I only saw it here now, and I turned over the chapters of your realistic plot in three seconds. Saving people, I'm not saying that the protagonist is the Virgin, it's just that the protagonist has no goal at all. What is your purpose in saving people, even if you point it out in the article, it's just to learn skills just to befriend Duan Yu, but you don't. Still no purpose surname.

In general, the protagonist is written by you as an arrogant nouveau riche, a marginal person who does not distinguish between good and evil, and a wanderer with no purpose.

You can delete it after reading it, it may be a little biased, but it's really how I feel when I see it now. Don't ask the protagonist to kill his wife and mother for profit, but at least people kill his wife and mother for the sake of preaching, the protagonist faces everything and sees it clearly, it's all, there is no purpose, no plan.

Modify it. This kind of opening doesn't attract many people at all. ”

The above is a book review of the book friend "The Best Scum".

To be honest, this book review is also very "poisonous", and I feel a little depressed after reading it.

But being able to write such a long book review shows that you really read the book, and I am grateful for this long review.

Let's talk about it.

Your senses have a very biased impression of books.

First, this book has a main line, and I have done an outline, and I still do it very seriously and meticulously.

Second, the protagonist entered the Condor World, accepted Xiaolongnu and Li Mochou, killed Zhao Zhijing, and castrated Yin Zhiping, you said that there is no purpose surname.

I'm still the same sentence, if you are the protagonist and you suddenly get the big and small wife system, what will you do?

You must know that Li Fei got it suddenly, and before that, Li Fei was a complete [***] silk.

To be able to accept Xiaolongnu and Li Mochou at the same time, does it need a reason to accept such a goddess for a [***] silk? Need a purpose?

Third, think about Li Fei's mentality at that time, Li Fei killed Zhao Zhijing and castrated Yin Zhiping, for an ordinary person who suddenly gained strength, who has this ability, who has read and loves the book "The Condor Heroes", who is not very much of these two people, does this also need a reason?

What's more, Zhao Zhijing had a grudge against him before, and wanted to tie up Li Fei, who was completely powerless, back to the Quanzhen Sect, if he hadn't escaped, he didn't know what would have happened, and he killed Zhao Zhijing just to take revenge.

Fourth, as for the reality volume of the second volume, which has already been said above, I will not repeat it. What's more, you may be exaggerating when you say that you turn the chapter in three seconds, but if you really do it, what can you see?

Fifth, Li Fei rescued Duan Yu, you said that there is no purpose. But think about it, as a person who has watched "Dragon Babu" and has a good impression of the character of Duan Yu, isn't it normal to see that Duan Yu is in danger and save him?

What's more, Duan Yu is the future emperor of Dali, and the protagonist's great enemy at that time is Da Liao. Saving the future emperor of Dali and becoming brothers is also a friendship, and it is to find a powerful ally to deal with Daliao in the future, isn't this a reason? This is also clearly stated in the book, but don't you see?

Sixth, you said that Li Fei was written by me as an arrogant nouveau riche, a marginal person who does not distinguish between good and evil, and a wanderer with no purpose.

What you see is just the beginning, when Li Fei got the big and small wife system, the surname changed step by step, you might as well look at the aftermath, maybe there will be different senses.

Seventh, in general, I still think that your book review is indeed a bit biased. Maybe it's not your favorite type.

In addition, after a day of driving, I was indeed a little tired.

As soon as I responded to some more book reviews, I went to take a hot shower first, then lay in bed and watched an episode of The Walking Dead to take a break, and then started coding words to see the status.

If it hasn't been updated before 11 p.m., it means that the state is not very good, and it won't be updated today.

I owe you 7,000 words, and I will make up 15,000 words tomorrow.

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