011 The talent of a good screenwriter

At 3 p.m., the class of the internship department on the fourth floor.

The eyes of a room full of people were focused on Wei Jiahui, which made Wei Jiahui very uncomfortable, and years of workplace experience told him that the intern named Zhang Jin was going to be unlucky.

Before opening the round3 draft, Wei Jiahui paid special attention to Zhang Jin, and saw that Zhang Jin's clean face was not shocked, that is, he couldn't feel his anxiety, nor could he see that he was panicking, but his bright eyes were flashing with a strange look.

That kind of look Wei Jiahui seems to be familiar, it is an absolutely confident look in his work, and it reflects Zhang Jin's indomitable character.

"Quite an interesting young man, but it's a pity, I'll say a few words later."

Wei Jiahui was moved by compassion, sighed before officially opening the draft, and when he saw the draft full of novels, his brows suddenly twisted into pimples.

"Well, isn't it bad?" Without waiting for Wei Jiahui to speak, Liang Yong leaned over directly, pretending to be distressed and said: "Hey, the current offspring is really hopeless, it's been almost a month since I came to the internship department, and I don't even know the most basic script format." ”

Wei Jiahui hummed and continued to read the draft.

Liang Yong stopped talking when he saw this, he believed that Wei Jiahui understood what he meant.

So the internship department quieted down, leaving only the sound of Wei Jiahui looking through the draft, and dozens of pairs of thoughtful eyes communicating silently.

Huang Xiangfei sat next to Shen Weinian, no one in the audience hated Zhang Jin more than him, thinking of the scene where Zhang Jin was about to be reprimanded by Wei Jiahui, it was like eating an ice cream on a dog day, and it was comfortable inside and out.

Shen Weinian was similar, he suffered a lot of resentment in the production department in the morning, and he wanted to use Zhang Jin and Wu Jiangshan to vent his anger, but this guy didn't go on the road, and he actually contradicted himself and lost face.

You said that you kid obediently let Uncle Ben bully him and die, but he doesn't know how to fight against himself, okay, look at how Lao Tzu plays you to death!

Before I knew it, ten minutes had passed.

Wei Jiahui is still reading the script, and the progress is unusually slow.

He went from a glance of ten lines to a line-by-line look.

Zhang Jin breathed a sigh of relief when he saw this, he knew that the bet was right, and leaned back on the chair with his hands around his shoulders, although he didn't know the final result, but so far he had half the success.

On the other hand, Shen Weinian couldn't hold his breath anymore, and kept glancing at Liang Yong, which means: Uncle, what is the situation, why didn't Wei Jiahui go according to the planned script?

Liang Yong is also anxious, but there are hardships to say, some words can be said to the end, and saying too much is counterproductive.

There was an eerie atmosphere in the sky over the internship department.

Another ten minutes later, in the expectation of Liang Yong and Shen Weinian, Wei Jiahui finally closed the draft, and looked at Zhang Jin with a strange gaze.

Liang Yong hurriedly handed over a cup of coffee and said, "Director Wei is tired, if you knew that you would have to watch it for so long, you wouldn't waste your precious time." ”

"It's just that Zhang Jin is too stubborn in his later life, when I said that his script was not good, and he also slandered me for being unfair, unless he said that he would never give up without Director Wei's eyes."

Wei Jiahui nodded.

When Liang Yong turned his face to Zhang Jin, he had already changed his serious expression, and said in a stern tone: "Zhang Jin, you have seen it now, your screenwriting foundation is really poor, and what you wrote is a mess, which not only delayed Director Wei's filming progress, but also failed TVB's cultivation of you!" ”

, one big hat after another, Zhang Jin was almost blind.

"Although you have slandered me and insulted my colleagues, I will not fire you in a large number, so let's read that you have performed well recently, and if you make up for your mistakes, the results of this internship assessment will become C......"

Before Liang Yong's "C" sound was finished, he heard Wei Jiahui's voice in his ears.

"I'm against it!"

Under the surprised eyes of everyone, Wei Jiahui picked up the draft, held it in the air and said: "There are many problems in this draft, and it can be seen that Zhang Jin has no common sense of screenwriting, even if he has taken a screenwriting class for a day, he will not even know the most basic format." ”

The plot finally started according to the set script, and Shen Weinian also officially appeared on the stage, saying loudly: "Director Wei means that C is to promote him!" ”

"Don't talk nonsense!" Liang Yong said: "Listen to Director Wei!" ”

Wei Jiahui smiled and said to Liang Yong: "Manager Liang, does my conclusion count?" ”

Liang Yong hurriedly said: "Of course it counts!" Director Wei is the deputy manager of the internship department, and your conclusion is my conclusion! ”

"Good!" Wei Jiahui slapped the table and said in a loud voice: "I think Zhang Jin should be given an A+!" ”

the !!!

The internship department was in an uproar.

Liang Yong almost suspected that his ears had heard it wrong, A...... A+!

Shen Weinian's mouth grew "ah", and his face was full of astonishment and panic.

Why, why not C, not B?

It's A+!

The room full of people was stunned, looking at Wei Jiahui with an incredulous expression.

The corners of Zhang Jin's mouth curled, and he shouted "Yay!" in his heart. ”。

Bet right, bet right!

This is the plot of episodes 11-15 of the original "Don't Bow Your Head", if the original author denies it, it's really a dog!

Liang Yong was the first to come to his senses, "Director Wei, I need a reasonable explanation!" ”

Wei Jiahui first gave Zhang Jin an approving look, then turned to Liang Yong and said, "Manager Liang, do you know what an excellent screenwriter should have?" ”

"Enduring enthusiasm, solid screenwriting skills, extraordinary observation skills...... "Liang Yong opened his mouth," Liang Yong said, "but none of these have anything to do with Zhang Jin." ”

Wei Jiahui smiled and said: "What you said is right, but I think an excellent screenwriter should have spirituality and talent!" ”

"I'm sure you haven't read Zhang Jin's draft, otherwise you wouldn't just give a comment that isn't formatted correctly, but if you read it carefully, you'll find the draft written by Zhang Jin...... Very exciting! ”

In order to further verify his conclusion, Wei Jiahui took out a small notebook from his pocket, which was densely filled with words.

"Maybe you don't know it, after cutting the sixth episode of "Don't Bow Your Head" in the early hours of this morning, I was very excited, and I had a new inspiration for the plot direction and ending of the whole series, so I called a meeting of all the screenwriters before dawn and asked them to overturn the round3 script that was about to be completed and do it again according to my requirements."

"In fact, I didn't have a clear idea of how to do it before, but I just had a general direction, and I didn't see Zhang Jin's draft until I saw it."

"Although Zhang Jin's foundation is very poor, but aside from the format problem, the plot direction and the changes in the relationship between the characters have provided me with reference, and what is commendable is that he also gave the corresponding dialogue reasonably according to the character of the characters in the play!"

"Wow!"

"I see!"

"In this way, Zhang Jin is too powerful!"

"I can't believe that Zhang Jin actually stumbled into it in line with Director Wei's taste."

The interns suddenly realized, and looked at Zhang Jin dumbfounded, and many people's impression of Zhang Jin had quietly changed.

"That's why I said that even if Zhang Jin doesn't have the basic knowledge of screenwriters, he has a talent that many screenwriters can't envy." Wei Jiahui looked at Liang Yong and said, "Manager Liang, do you feel reasonable about this explanation?" ”

"Uh...... Plausible! Liang Yong was speechless.

Wei Jiahui asked again: "Then I give Zhang Jin an A+ result, you have no opinion, right?" ”

"No, give it." Liang Yong was already sweating profusely.

This is really too clever to calculate, but it turns out that stealing chickens and rice is not lost, and moving stones to hit one's own feet, which is too painful! Shen Weinian is already stupid, and his mind is full of why......

PS: Move bricks during the day, only free time to code words, no manuscript can only squeeze time, I will see more stitches to write. Ask for recommendation votes, ask for all kinds of **~~