Testimonials + Report (1)

It's been more than a month since I finished writing this testimonial, and it's a little late.

But there are some things that I want to explain to everyone.

I wrote this book with a lot of enthusiasm at the beginning.

Defending the family and the country, nine respects, I myself am very excited to write.

But since when...... I felt something was wrong.

This book, in some senses, is both high and low.

The tone at the beginning was too high. It's like one day when I said in a chapter that I was arguing with a few book friends: You yourself were soldiers, but we weren't. We read books to be happy, but you have to pull us to shout slogans together, we don't feel good.

Yes, I don't believe it, and there are unpatriotic people. But book friends are right, we are all patriotic, but we don't want to read this book and shout a slogan...... It's unpleasant.

And the subscription situation is also reminding me that there must be some places where I didn't choose the right one.

And by that time, the whole book had already taken shape.

And then I thought, change.

Then the website came to me and said, "The contract is about to expire, but you have a lot of word counts."

It made me feel bad.

The word count problem is a big problem.

Then I began to bury the thread while changing, burying the line of the Xuanhuang Realm, and then intervened with the Fantasy World. It's a pity that I only made an outline of the Tianxuan Continent before I opened the book, and no matter how much I do it, I can write three million ...... Far from enough.

So the first half of the country is the world, and the second half is pure fantasy.

But what about this change...... I found out that I made another mistake: a lot of readers who have been reading it are not happy: you are in the heat of boiling, why are you going to upgrade and fight monsters......

I was stunned.

Keep writing it down.

Finally, the writing is done.

But the real biggest mistake is not here.

That's the issue of Yunyang's identity.

It's been revealed so soon!

Everyone, I rub, Mo Tianji's son...... How could Mo Shenzhu let his son die?

As a result, the biggest suspense and the most worrying life and death crisis of the protagonist was made no longer at all by the revelation of this identity!

It took me a month to write that paragraph before I came to my senses and slapped myself seven or eight times: What do you think, stupid......

Many readers reacted to me, saying: Some of them are boring.

This is really not boring, because Mo Tianji is too awesome.

These encounters, for any of the protagonists, are very worrying. However, Yun Yang after revealing his identity can't do it!

It's so safe!

Miss by a mile.

Write it with the most serious attitude, but it can never eliminate the failure brought by Yunyang's identity!

This is the book's biggest failure.

After I finished writing, I learned from the pain, and in the next book, I can't make such a low-level mistake again.

Thank you all for being with you all the way and being generous all the way.

I can't finish writing the free chapters, so I'll send it first, and then I'll write it.