Thank you very much for your valuable comments from Jian Xiu and Memories classmates, I really appreciate it. I would like to explain a few of the points that were raised, some of which were indeed foreshadowing that I had deliberately drawn, and some of which were indeed mistakes, my faults. I've finished correcting the plot of the previous chapters last week.,Today I'm starting to update.,Thank you.。

1. Regarding the villain, the protagonist I wrote about was only possessed by the villain, not that the protagonist's consciousness would be completely swallowed by the villain, and his thinking may still be his own. The protagonist is not a pure Wei Guangzheng, and the originally suppressed dark seeds take root and sprout, and eventually grow into a dark clone. The highlight of this book is to possess some of the best villains, some good and some bad, and there are funny and refreshing stories after being weird and cute. A person who acts both good and evil is limited by the villain character in the plot space, and there will definitely be plot conflicts, which is the conflict point of the story. The later reality possession is even more funny, Oriental Auntie, Li Mochou, Wan Wan, Evil King Shi Zhixuan, Shen Gongbao and other villains with distinct personalities will appear in Huahua City through the protagonist one by one, so stay tuned.

2、There was a possession setting at the beginning.,I won't describe too many familiar plots.,If it weren't for that, it would be the same person.。 Especially Xie Wendong's suicide by cutting his wrists in the villain, as long as you have read the original book, you will have that feeling, I don't need to describe it carefully, the scene will jump on the page. As for the ease with which the will could be obtained, I admit that the pen was a little quick, but I carefully added the golden finger to it, covering up the past with the short possession time and the anti-heavenly effect of the aura. Xie Wendong's pulse cutting time must not be too long, the original plot did not go into detail, but I increased the subjective initiative of the protagonist. And the characters I set up when I designed the possession were not possessed once, like Xie Wendong had three times, the first time was very short, the second time was slightly longer, and the third time was very long, which was mainly for the main line of the city.

3. The legal and moral issues on the train, I have already said it through the mouth of the ancestor of the Song family, those little gangsters are just a paparazzi, and they are an introduction to Lin Danmo and Qin Li. As for why the police didn't enforce the law in that carriage, I want to say that since the ancestor of the Song family actually knew the identity of the woman. He just instructed his subordinates to test it, and the police would naturally be intercepted or separated, which was easy to do as the Song family. Don't forget, this is also the lowest level of green trains, or in the mountains, the enforcement will not be very strict, Qingshui Ancient City is a small county, the carriage to go there will be very empty, and the police may not be there to enforce the law. There are also legal ethics and national issues.,I mentioned in the second volume that the Ice Girl and the Fire Girl represent the national supernatural organization.,Specializing in eliminating unexplained anomalies.,Regulate civil forces.,It's a big plot.,Point it through.。

4, Lin Danmo, let me spoil it, I set her to be a woman who is half a devil and half an angel, which is clearly pointed out later. Chapter forty-three, in the next volume of the giant tomb, I have already pointed out that she is a chess piece that has been pushed out by other forces of the Lin family, but as long as this chess piece completes this mission, it will be good to go back and slap the enemy a loud slap, the Lin family is one of the four major families in Kyoto, and internal discord is a normal thing. Spoiler side, she's born as an illegitimate child with a slight sexual fetish, which I think is enough to explain.

5, that little Lori Qin Li She has been sick since she was a child, and in the tenth chapter, she will spit out things from his father Qin Fang's mouth, the original words are "I am not in good health, and the root of the disease left by my childhood, Xiao Li's child is inherited from me", obviously her intelligence is very defective, mainly related to his father Qin Fang. And one of the branches of the later stage of the pig's foot is to help little Lori heal, which is not to be mentioned. But I'm really wrong about her age.,I recognize this.,It's been modified.,Thank you very much for the precious opinions of classmates such as Jian Xiu and Memories.。 The greatest joy of my book is pinned on the second volume of Che Dan's master and apprentice, and the reader can see it with great certainty from my writing. Happy writing, detailed and powerful descriptions, ups and downs of the plot, I hope that readers who read the text carefully can instantly sketch a vivid picture in their minds, nothing more.

6. In terms of plot, he never abuses the master. I've never been overly obscene, because I've seen too much of the grave robbery detectives and reasoning, and I'm always digging holes between the lines, which makes the reader think it's flawed. In fact, my outline is very comprehensive, and the plot from that volume to that plot is clearly described. The plot is not too obscene, and it is not too big and too fast to improve the strength of the protagonist, and the protagonist of Long Aotian and the like is what I have always abandoned. If I want to quickly increase the strength of the protagonist and open the plug-in, I can arrange a few more villains and pass through the level one by one. My protagonist doesn't abuse the master.,On the contrary, the later stage is quite fragrant and refreshing.,The suppression of the protagonist in the early stage is for the later stage of the text not to collapse.,You must know that my main line is an urban plot.,The real city can't be full of gods and Buddhas.。 I wanted to write about a different urban ability, which is why I categorized it into an allomy super.

7. I wrote so much in one breath, I just want to say that I am grateful for the valuable comments from readers such as Jian Xiu and Memories, which gave me the motivation to improve the details in the book. I'm a fastidious person, so I'd love to present you with a less white, less overly obscene article. I'll work hard to write it.,The urban plot is only Xie Wendong.,The fourth volume is about to begin.,The possession of the martial arts villain has been opened.,My idea for the next chapter is even more extraordinary.,The city must have to pretend to be forced to step on people.,We not only have to play martial arts.,But also play literature.,And we will play different tricks.。 Again, this book will be an article that integrates popular elements such as urban, fantasy, exploration, tomb robbing, and fairy tales, and I will stew a hodgepodge for you, so stay tuned.

8. The plot of the first ten chapters has been modified. I'm a person who pays more attention to excellence, and every time I finish a chapter, I will revise it for about ten minutes, pick out some typos and change sentences. If you are not satisfied, you will revise the new chapter after uploading until you are satisfied. This is my own responsibility, but also to the readers, so sometimes there will be subtle differences in the content of the readers, but rest assured, the changed plot will definitely be better than before, this is my own commitment, readers don't take the content of the pirated chapters to complain about me, that's sometimes just the plot before I modified, hereby declared.

9. In addition, thank you for the rewards of Jingzhu, Situ Tianwen, Doudou Lengyue, Brother Hao's friends, and Heehehe Thank you Jian Xiu, Memories and others for reading carefully, I am very pleased, and I hope you can look back and see my progress. Newcomers and new books, looking forward to your support, the plot will speed up later, and the update will also be accelerated.