"Okay, okay, don't do any more superfluous things, let's hurry up and get to the point!" Future clapped his hands and drew everyone's attention back.

"First, let's start with the first episode. What about the script? ”

"Saved!" Feng Xuelu couldn't help but exhale lightly, the disdainful gaze just now was really stressing on him. Now he was full of gratitude for the future, and he took out the script he had prepared and handed it over.

In addition, he also said very flatteringly: "I started thinking about this in the hospital, and I worked hard to produce it as soon as I came out of the hospital, and finally produced this perfect script." ”

He looked like he was asking for merit, as if he had done something immortal.

Future took the script and read it, and Hosoda took a copy of it, but just glanced at it and put it down.

"No way!" Hosoda Gogo flipped through and said, "If you want to revise it, the time is not right." You haven't read it yourself. ”

"This, the lines are too shameful. I'm embarrassed to read. ”

"It's not that there's something to be ashamed of.,Aren't the voice actors reading it very well?。 Just look at the word count to understand that this time is not right. Hosoda said.

"That's just a small problem, it's a big deal to modify the lines, the problem is that this plot can't work either." The future quickly finished sweeping the script, but also shook his head and disagreed.

"How so? I've seen a lot of these works, and I've imitated them in a way that mimics them. ”

"So you can only make works like this, this can't work." Future pointed to the script and said. "What is the difference between this and ordinary works, in this case, you should also understand that only ordinary works can be produced in the way of ordinary works. Look at your script, first the dome goes home with Yuu, then meets the eldest lady, then meets the childhood sweetheart, then meets the shrine maiden, and then meets the ......"

Future patted his head: "Ah! There is no help. ”

"Isn't that normal?"

"Normal, too normal." Future sighed. "But the problem is that what we need is a script that is not normal."

This script of Fengxue Road, this plot is definitely not a mistake, a typical adapted script, because there is an original work, so the protagonist meets various characters at the beginning, and all the female characters come out to show their faces. Whether it's promoting a game or selling a character, this can be called a decent practice.

If it were an ordinary overseer, there would be no doubt that this plot would be passable.

But here is the future and Hosoda Go, both of whom have the idea of making a name for themselves by virtue of the void of fate, how could they pass such an ordinary script.

"And ah, what's going on with this ending?"

Future suddenly asked.

Feng Xuelu's face suddenly showed a smug smile: "Do you mean the scene where this dome girl took off her clothes and attacked at night?" Isn't it very classic, this is something I have thought about and meditated. Is there a feeling of surprise that such a benefit suddenly came at the end, and it makes people wonder if it is full of attraction! ”

"It's too narrow." Future criticized: "This plot is indeed a bit surprising, especially when you are so bland in front of you, and it is indeed very good to suddenly come to such a reversal in the end." ”

"But this kind of plot doesn't work." Hosoda also shook his head: "Once you do this, you will indeed be able to attract a group of audiences, but the volume of the whole story will decrease." ”

"Although there is H content, we can't report the mentality of doing H. H is just an embellishment of the plot, but the plot has developed to a certain extent. If you do this, there will be no H content even after that. Our work has also become a normal meat selling animation. That's not our selling point. ”

Hearing the words of the future, Hosoda also nodded.

If the goal is to make a normal animation, then whether it's exposing a little to attract the audience, or expanding it with a god is a good choice. But since their goal was to make a topical and anime, it had to be as serious as possible. The atmosphere they want to create is not how cute the dome is, but it should be, the change of the dome's heart.

"How do you change that?"

Feng Xuelu couldn't help but ask distressedly.

"Put that aside first, I'll give you the plot points later, you just need to expand and pinch the time, and I'll discuss the plot points with Mr. Hosoda." Now there are a few things to fix. ”

Mirai also took out the paper he had prepared and said, "Here is a photo, I remember that there is a mountain in the sky of the edge, and there is a lake on the mountain. ”

"It's an important location for the story." Feng Xuelu said.

"Well, the appearance of the mountain needs to be changed now."

Future said and handed him the photograph with a mountain on it.

"What kind of mountain is this?"

"Kochi Prefecture, Sumo City, Okinoshima, Meibei Mountain."

"What is this?" The road is a mess in the snow.

Mirai said, "Have you seen the Uji Relic Story?" Fifty-sixth. You should have read the story of the past and the present, Volume 26, Chapter 10. ”

Fengxue Lu frowned, and suddenly shouted with joy: "It seems to be a little impressive, by the way, it turns out to be the story of Tosa Sister's back island, and Tosa Country's sister and brother live on an unknown island!" ”

"What's that story?" These people are confused.

Feng Xuelu excitedly explained: "Of course it's the story of a pair of brothers and sisters!" It tells the story of a couple who took a pair of brothers and sisters to migrate by boat, but when they got off the boat, the wind and waves swept the brothers and sisters and the farm tools brought by the migration to a deserted island, so the brother and sister had to live on the island and have a child. ”

"Dead sister is interested in these things." Saiya Aoi couldn't help but curse in a low voice.

"That's where it is."

The future can't help but explain.

"But, no." Nishida stood up at this time and said, "But I've seen the setting of the background, the stage where the edge of the sky is located is Okugi dye, and that is from Hakone." The last lake of reincarnation is Lake Ashi in Hakone, right? In that case, it is not suitable to take materials from other places. ”

"That's where I'm going to change, the background in the game is limited by the archetype, and I want to add more elements." Future spoke.

"Wouldn't that create chaos?"

"Originally, Okumu Dye was just a fictional place, and the prototype was just for the convenience of production, but because there was no prototype, there was no fictional place, and this was not very good!"

"But if you don't talk about the background, the audience will be very troubled." Nishida argues with reason.

Hosoda, on the other hand, asks a more critical question: "What else are you going to change?" ”

"I want to add countless statues of the gods on the country roads of Okumudye."

"What kind of god is the god of Sai?" Aoi Nishiya asked curiously.

"That's the patron saint of the road, but it's a man and a woman, they're brother and sister, and there are more stories about them, there are more than eighty-five kinds of ...... in total."

"Eighty-five is enough! I've been to Hakone, which is only half an hour's drive from Tokyo, and Hakone doesn't have that at all! Nishida couldn't help but shout.

"No, I think this is a must, this will affect the whole story, it is a very key prop." The future said eagerly.

Hosoda asked, "What else?" ”

"Actually, I also wanted to replace the shrine with a god in Okinawa, which is a god that my brothers and sisters believe in, and this will play a role later in the story. That belief is that when men leave home, their sisters have the spiritual power to protect them. So you need to bring your own handwear or hair. Moreover, at the end of this faith, there is a ceremony for the marriage of brothers and sisters. With the blessing of the goddess, the brother and sister can get married. The role of that goddess is naturally played by a shrine maiden. ”

"Yes." Hosoda came to a conclusion. "The details need to be corrected.,But if that's the case with the god of the shrine, it's too obvious.,Replace it with a god that only the shrine maiden knows.。 In this case, they can get the shrine maiden to tell them such things. After that, let's discuss the plot and performance of the first episode. (To be continued.) )