"The title of the third episode is peony, and the word peony, I remember that it represents the growth of a girl, the feeling of change." Mirai remembered that he once wore a yukata with Yukino Chiho, and at that time, Yukino chose to be a peony. ”

"That's right, the core of this episode is change." Kogen Shotaro nodded repeatedly.

"Is it mainly the heroine? Or should maids be taken into account? The future couldn't help but frown.

Gu Geng Shotaro also hesitated and said: "Of course, it is mainly the heroine, but after the second episode, the call for the maid is also very high, and the role should also be considered." ”

"If the psychological changes of the two can be taken into account, the capacity of the plot has to be considered whether it is enough, well, if the scenes of the two people are combined, the time should be enough. So the arrangement of this episode is best for the maid H once, the heroine H once, and finally the heroine and the maid come once. ”

Speaking in the future, I thought in my heart that this is also a standard plot, but usually the two come together in the end, but here it is replaced by the maid and the heroine Lily.

At the same time, her mind had already been calculated.

The general Lifan,It's just for H and H.。 In the Moonless Moon, although there is a role of H, the core is still in the psychological changes of the characters.

So, first of all, the H of the plot of the second episode, and then the psychological changes of the maid. The maid began to hesitate about her mentality towards the male protagonist and the mentality towards the female protagonist. Then, it's the heroine who witnessed the maid having sex with her husband.

First of all, this husband is the one who suddenly appeared and took away his innocence. And the maid is his close best friend.

However, he already has a trace of affection for the person who took away his innocence, and his best friend has a relationship with him.

At this moment, her heart is naturally extremely complicated.

This psychological change will make this feeling more charismatic.

After that, there is the maid and the main character's lily.

At this time, the hearts of the two are complicated.

The heroine knows that the person in front of her has betrayed her. But she couldn't hate the person in front of her.

And in the maid's heart, she loves the person in front of her, but also betrays the person in front of her.

This contradiction between the two people finally achieves spiritual communication and harmony through H, which is the ultimate embodiment of change.

It's like a peony blooming. The girl's body and mind bloom.

In the end, the script was finalized with Shotaro Furuko.

"Revise along this line of thought, and pay attention to the time."

"No problem, according to this plot, there should be plenty of time."

Koko Shotaro said.

Mirai turned his head and asked, "Are you the type who can read it out and confirm the time yourself?" ”

The script is not the same as the novel. Almost all of them are lines. Then there is a relatively simple description of actions and demeanor, and there will be no too complex emotional description.

Because it will make the person who draws it incomprehensible.

For example, in the sentence of a bright sorrow, the original artist could not imagine what a bright sorrow should look like even if he wanted to break his head.

Therefore, although the script has an impact on the plot, the interpretation of the script is handed over to the original painting and performance, and the interpretation of the lines is handed over to the voice actors. In animation, the control is still relatively limited.

The way to control the time in the script is to read the lines yourself to estimate the time. In fact, if you have an experienced script, you will know how much time you have when you read the number of words.

"Eh, it's usually silent." Koko Shotaro said. Of course, he can't read it out loud, and it doesn't matter if it's a general secondary two script, but this is a Lifan script. There are all kinds of shame lines, how can it be read.

The future understands and says, "Then it will take more time, and the silent reading will be read out louder." ”

"Yes, but I'm familiar with it so much that I won't be overwhelmed." Gu Geng Shotaro said, according to reason, in the future, you should also understand your own strength, and there is no need to ask about what this kind of new talent needs to teach. He looked at Chiho next to him, was it to teach Chiho?

Future understood his eyes and explained, "No. Just to remind you to spend more time than usual when you're not in the lines. ”

"Because it's a lifan, I understand such a thing." Koko Shotaro nodded in understanding. That's what it's good to do.,It doesn't matter if the plot can't be written.,It's a big deal to let the voice actor call twice.,You don't even need this.,Just replay the recorded voice a few times.,Replay H's footage a few times.。 Don't worry about running out of time, and you don't have to spend money.

The future feels that Shotaro Furuko's understanding is completely wrong. She said: "I just want to slow down the pace and make the psychological changes feel more girly, not too fast." So the overall rhythm will be long. ”

"I see, that's it!" Gu Geng Shotaro nodded again and again, wiping a handful of sweat. It's not the first time he's done Lifan, and it's rare to really want to show the psychology of the heroine. I usually do that.,It's either NTR or humiliating.。 And the so-called psychological changes are just some: why do you feel it, you don't want to, you don't like it, but your body can't help it......

And so on and so forth.

However,It's precisely because of this request.,I can feel it.,Although the person in front of me is making the animation.,But the animation is not made as a pure animation at all.。

This kind of impurity,But it makes the original animation more flavorful.。

This also made him, a screenwriter, feel that the work of a screenwriter is more interesting, although the work is also a lot harder.

Mirai said goodbye to Shotaro Koko and found his office. There aren't many employees in the Phantom Moon Club, but there are quite a lot of spare rooms, so it's easy to set up a dedicated office.

She began to assemble the storyboards.

From the storyboards she had drawn, she began to choose what could be used. Although the plot will change, a few H scenes have already been negotiated and fixed. So you can draw it in advance. Mirai is not the type to draw slowly from beginning to end, but likes to start with what he is good at, and then pick up the big scene after drawing.

She felt that it was more suitable for her and that it was easier for her to control her time. More precisely, to be able to make good use of your time.

After dividing an episode into several parts, and allocating time for each part, you have a rough idea of the number of storyboards, and how many storyboards are arranged for each plot.

Then, in each storyboard, there are about how many small actions there are, so that you can grasp the whole episode well. If you want to make temporary changes, you will replace the storyboards that belong to each part as if you were replacing parts. If it has an impact on the front or back parts, the storyboard with an impression of the front and back is also replaced.

For example, the protagonist sees a cat on the way to school, arrives at the school, and sees the cat again on the way out of school.

The part of seeing the cat is only before and after, and the time scheduled will not be too much. And if you want to replace the cat with a dog, you only need to replace the part where the cat appears or the part where the cat appears indirectly.

It's like a dress-up game, where each part of an episode is like a body part, and you can choose different outfits, clothes, hats, and jewelry in each part......

At the same time, the overall style needs to be taken into account. You can't wear summer clothes on the upper body, but winter clothes on the lower body.

And the final goal is to mix up a cute girl. Whether it's a separate episode or an anime as a whole, it's all like this.

As long as you think about it like this, you will feel that you will not be able to stop thinking about your own creation in the future.

It's just that it always feels like I'm still stuck.

It's like being able to imagine a beautiful girl, but I don't know what kind of outfit to wear. What is the shortcoming? The future couldn't help but ponder. (To be continued.) If you like this work, you are welcome to come to the starting point () to vote for recommendation, monthly pass, your support, is my biggest motivation. For mobile phone users, please go to M. to read. (To be continued.) )