Chapter 150: Lemon's Helplessness
Lemon is Qin Ning's nickname, firstly, she has the word condensation in her name, and secondly, she really likes to eat lemons.
Ye Chen sat in front of the computer, and Qin Ning quickly passed his friend application.
"Hello, it's the author of "Zhu Xian", Lori is not Zhengtai, is it called you Lori or Zhengtai."
Ye Chen looked at the message sent by Lemon on the screen and smiled faintly:
"Just call me Xiaozheng, thank you to the editor for signing a contract with "Zhu Xian"."
Qin Ning's message returned:
"Xiaozheng? Aren't you pretending to be tender, how old is this year? ”
Ye Chen thought about it, and still said his age "very honestly":
“17”
Ye Chen was really honest this time, after all, the information on the ID card was seventeen years old.
Qin stared at the 17 on the screen and was a little surprised, a seventeen-year-old boy had such a delicate and sophisticated writing, which was really rare.
"Xiaozheng, just call me Sister Lemon from now on, oh, yes, when it comes to "Zhu Xian", do you have an outline for this book, and you can also think clearly about the main line of the story in your heart?"
Ye Chen has a complete "Zhu Xian", so there is no need for an outline.
"There is no written outline, but I have already thought in my heart that the book "Zhu Xian" can be roughly written to 1.5 or 600 million."
Qin Ning was very interested in the number of words Ye Chen said:
"Really, so confident, Xiaozheng, how much do you know about Xianxia online novels? You must know that the longest Xianxia is more than 1.5 million words. ”
At Ye Chen's age, he actually went to the longest Xianxia Wen, which really made Qin Ning a little unbelievable.
Although writing requires unbridled imagination, if you really want to type out word by word, it still needs to be pragmatic, and empty talk is not enough.
Writing a book requires accumulation, Ye Chen is only seventeen years old, Qin Ning feels that he can't have too much accumulation.
If you write a cool article, it's just that, but looking at the style of "Zhu Xian", it is obviously not a small white text route, how can you do it without life experience.
Therefore, at the first glance when he saw Ye Chen say that he was seventeen years old, Qin Ning felt a little that he was talking to a demon, and the author he thought in his mind should be an uncle who was above thirty years old, how could he be seventeen years old.
Because she read the unique style from "Zhu Xian", Qin Ning also attached great importance to this book, and she felt that Ye Chen, who was only seventeen years old, should be guided and helped.
She wanted to hear Ye Chen's main line, so she could help see where there were deficiencies.
"Xiaozheng, just talk about the main line of "Zhu Xian", and my sister will check you in the overall plot."
Ye Chen was very helpless about these women being his sister at every turn.
Thinking about it, it's better to be Tong Liya, although she is also in her twenties, she hasn't mentioned taking herself as a sister.
However, Ye Chen still told Lemon the main line of "Zhu Xian":
"The main line of "Zhu Xian" is actually Zhang Xiaofan from the right path to the devil's path, and then from the devil's path to the right path."
"This also expounds the idea that this book wants to express, the so-called righteous path and demonic path, but it is only the human heart."
Qin Ning sent a "hmm".
She agrees with what Ye Chen said.
Many people think that online novels are just used for entertainment, and there is no thought at all, and the author does not need to think about it at all in the process of creation.
But in this regard, Qin Ning actually disagreed.
Because she understands that a novel wants to write its own style and mood, which is inseparable from thought.
After all, style is such a thing, it needs a point to attach to.
It's like the condensation of frost, there must be a grain of dust as the core to condense a large piece of frost.
This speck of dust may be insignificant, but it is essential.
And the thought is the point to which the style is attached.
The whole book revolves around a certain idea, so the artistic conception and style of this novel naturally come out.
Ye Chen typed rapidly in front of the computer, and the main line of the book became clearer and clearer.
Qin Ning was still thinking about helping Ye Chen make up for some deficiencies.
But then she reluctantly found that she had nothing to add, and later, she completely became a storyteller.
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"The development of the entire main line is led by the five heavenly books."
"The first volume is the Dripping Blood Cave, the second volume is the Ghost King Sect, the third volume is the Heavenly Emperor's Treasure House, the fourth volume is the wordless jade, and the fifth volume is the Zhuxian Ancient Sword."
"Of course, these five heavenly books are just like beads that play a series effect, which is like the tendons and veins of an immortal cultivator, and they are not even a skeleton."
Ye Chen was still talking, Qin stared at the words that kept appearing on the screen, and the more he looked at it, the more interesting he felt.
"The scenes of the five heavenly books have been thought of, this is equivalent to five maps, if each map can write 200,000, this is a million words."
If Qin Ning thought that the 15.6 million in Ye Chen's mouth was a bit exaggerated before, then at this moment, she felt that it was acceptable.
Ye Chen thought about the overall story of "Zhu Xian", and still kept typing on the keyboard:
"On the basis of the five heavenly books, the main line of the whole story can be divided into several branches."
"Zhang Xiaofan's resurrection of Baguio, the line of the destruction of the beast god, the emotional line between Zhang Xiaofan and Lu Xueqi, and finally, the line of the ghost king wanting to dominate the world."
"In these branches, the characters are all changeable, and the protagonist Zhang Xiaofan has also grown up with the development of the whole story, and even grown into another person called Ghost Li."
Being described by Ye Chen like this, Qin Ning's heart itched, and she was busy asking:
"The story of these branches, Xiaozheng, can you still expand some of them?"
Of course, Qin Ning knew that these branches that supported the main line were equivalent to the skeleton of the entire "Zhu Xian".
And if Ye Chen can expand these branches, it will be to fill the muscles on the skeleton.
In this way, although only more than twenty chapters had only been written here, Qin Ning could conclude that the entire work was already in Ye Chen's heart.
Therefore, Qin Ning really wanted to listen to Ye Chen talk about the specific branches, if the branches were exciting, the whole "Zhu Xian" would be wonderful.
Ye Chen thought for a moment and continued to write:
"The previous plot has also been written in the first twenty chapters, so I'll start with the Seven Veins of the Qingyun Sect."
"When Zhang Xiaofan was in the Seven Veins of Martial Arts, he was lucky enough to enter the top four, and went to the Ten Thousand Bat Ancient Caves with Lu Xueqi and others to practice, and since then he has been in contact with the ice beauty Lu Xueqi."
"In the Ten Thousand Bat Ancient Caves, Zhang Xiaofan met the demon girl Bi Yao, and spent life and death with her."
"From the Ten Thousand Bat Ancient Cave, to the East China Sea Liubo Mountain, when fighting against Kui Niu, I showed the great burning of the Great Burning Prajna that Puzhi explained, don't cast it in front of people."
"It was at this time that Zhang Xiaofan knew that the slaughter of Caomiao Village was the work of Puzhi, whom he had always respected."
"Because of the dual cultivation of Buddhism and Taoism, Zhang Xiaofan was severely punished by Qingyunmen, and Bi Yao blocked the Zhuxian Sword for him, and he has been asleep since then."
"Zhang Xiaofan has been in the Demon Sect for ten years, and he has won the respect and true inheritance of the ghost king, and over the years, he has been obsessed with making Baguio wake up."
"It can be said that Zhang Xiaofan has always lived in the shadow of Biyao, and has always lived to awaken Biyao."
"In the Demon Cult, there has always been a special relationship with the Ghost King."
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After talking about a few branches, Ye Chen finally knocked on:
"Well, that's all."
Qin Ning on the other side of the computer was a little speechless for a while, she didn't expect Ye Chen's structure of this story to be so complete.
She shook her head and smiled, and thought to herself:
"I wanted to add something before, but now I don't seem to need it."
Immediately, she sent a message to Ye Chen:
"It's really a mountain in the belly, well, now I'm sure you can write 1.6 million words."
"It's clearly a sad sadistic story, but I'm looking forward to it."
Ye Chen agreed with Qin Ning's statement, and it was precisely because of the abuse in the story of "Immortal" that the editor of the Phantom Sword Chinese Network did not sign the contract.
But Qin Ning is more open-minded than the editor of Phantom Sword Chinese.
Qin Ning believes that as long as the story is exciting enough, it will be able to make readers read it.
is like so many sadomasochistic relationships in female frequency, but it is still recognized by readers.
""Zhu Xian" is definitely fresh blood in today's online literature industry, well, Xiaozheng, since the outline is so clear, then the update must be powerful."
Ye Chen sent a smile and said at the same time.
"Oh, I almost forgot to ask you, Xiaozheng, did you ever have an unforgettable crush?"
Ye Chen looked at the paragraph sent by the lemon and felt inexplicable.
"Oh, I'm exaggerating how well it was written when Xiaofan saw Tian Ling'er dating Qi Hao."
Qin Ning seemed to sense that Ye Chen couldn't understand such a out-of-the-box thinking, so he added.
Now Ye Chen understood that this feeling was the same as what Teacher Qiao Man had thought before.
After listening to those love songs before, Qiao Man felt that Ye Chen must be a scumbag who had hurt many little girls.
And here Qin Ning thinks that Ye Chen must have been hurt by a poor man who was hurt by a little girl in a crush.
Ye Chen felt a little speechless about this, maybe this is also the disadvantage of the doctrine.
Ye Chen has heard that in "Zhu Xian", Lu Xueqi's original form is Xiao Ding's wife, and it is not for nothing that Xiao Ding can write "Zhu Xian".
Ye Chen didn't want to explain too much, so he said casually:
"I did have a crush on a girl before."
Ye Chen wrote casually, but Qin Ning didn't read it casually.
It was as if she had discovered something big:
"That's the case, it seems that I said it, well, let's talk about it, and then added an impatient expression."
Ye Chen felt that what Han Han said in "1988" was really right, every woman likes to listen to other people's gossip so much.
"Please, Sister Lemon, don't gossip so much, I was wrong before, in fact, I didn't have a crush on anyone, it's just artistic creation."
Qin Ning obviously didn't believe it:
"I said Xiaozheng, who still believes it now, it's nothing, the crush is the greatest and purest in the world, if you like it, chase it, Sister Lemon supports you."
"Even Sister Lemon is having a crush on a guy right now, oh, of course, I've never met that guy at all."